What Does It Mean That the School Beauty I Controlled Came to Life?

See Chapter 47… The plot of the protagonist "playing games" is okay, but the plot of the protagonist's real life is not very attractive. When watching continuously, you can only read the chapters you like to read, and you can skip the parts you don't like to read... If you are pursuing reading, it might be a bit uncomfortable...

Living people listen to the flow of the sun! Strength! So exciting! ! ! It is 33 times higher than the value of the man next door who jumped on the street. It is no longer possible to tell who is the value. I announce that in this year's new book list, this one is number one! ! ! ! !

I finished reading it in one go, so far it's pretty good, I'm looking forward to the next development [face covering] There's nothing really bad about it, it's just that I just want to watch the game part, and I just skip the real life part like Cousin, I can't stand it [face covering]

If you want to watch pure games, you can go. The ratio between real life and the game world is currently about 7:5. Personally, I feel it is a bit like a romance novel with a game cover, but the plot is smooth and there are no poisonous points at the moment. Four stars encourage me, so go for the author. Uh-huh, uh-huh, daily life is too boring, brothers, run away, I'm going to be bored to death [crying]

Overall, the writing is pretty good. Whether it's the protagonist in the game or in reality, it's actually very good. However, the reason why most of the evaluations of the real-life content are skewed is because the writing is very depressing, too real, and too depressing. I personally rate it highly, but it was also very uncomfortable to watch. For example, the protagonist felt powerless in the real-life part. To be honest, I almost wanted to run away while watching it. I can only say that the game part of this novel is quite satisfactory. The better part is that the reality part breaks the homogeneity and makes you look forward to the game part even more when watching it. But the bad part is that the reality part is too realistic. The sense of reality is too strong, and it even feels suffocating.

Seriously, I am an old bookworm, if only the author could portray real life better. This book will be more perfect. This aspect of the game is pretty well written. This subject is relatively new. If it is well written, I think it can become popular.

The content is acceptable, and the subject matter is the first time I've seen it. I spent so much time on my cousin, but it's only one star if it's not as good as A Skyfall. Come on, author-chan. AI is in trouble

It's okay. The heroine's growth is well described. The other aspects are also quite interesting. It's just about the money, and there are practical problems that need to be solved quickly. Around 8.2 Minutes, want to see the follow-up, the game is coming?

The introduction alone is very attractive and arouses people's desire to read. The subject matter is also very novel. It is a very interesting book [Learned] In addition, I hope the author can optimize the text layout. The paragraphs are too long. Although I have not abandoned the book, it will easily dissuade other impatient readers [laughing and crying]

I finished reading it in one go and found a new book. Before reading, I am used to reading the reviews before deciding whether the book is worth reading. To save money: This book is highly recommended. It is currently non-toxic. I hope the author's data will get better and better, and he will write more and more. To be honest, a lot of reviews talk about AI articles and so on, and there are also a lot of them that give low stars and low scores. I don't understand, because I really hate letting me miss out on a good book because of other people's "bad reviews". . . . Forget it, maybe it's the Chinese New Year and I don't understand what the author meant by it.

The game world looks good, but the real world doesn't look good. There are some repeated passages, and some feel that the perspective is written backwards, which is a bit lacking. Come on (⇀‸↼‶)

There are a lot of things it doesn't do, it feels like AI, but it reads well. I give it four stars. It's not working anymore, the AI is getting heavier and heavier.

Super pretty. Reality and games are separate. Each has its own life and plot. If you want to write about knives, there should be many more later. Although the genre is a bit cliché, such as game coming to reality or knowing. That's the real world. I fall in love but can't recognize each other inexplicably (I don't like to watch this kind of thing) [Chigua] The dual perspective switching is quite good. Nurture system. If that kind of thing really comes to reality, it will become a developing girlfriend. Rich emotional lines, like multiple heroines

I just finished reading the author's latest chapter. As I said before, what everyone likes to read is more games. If you mix games with real life, it will affect the reading experience. Furthermore, for a novel like yours to be so realistic about real life, it is actually a big problem. After all, most novels of the same type are either abandoning games or abandoning real life. Or if your author's writing style is good, the real life described may not be the same. It's so boring, but the most critical problem is that the written daily life is just like an AI journal, boring and uninteresting. I still suggest that the author can add more chapters about games and reduce some chapters about real life. After all, in this fast-paced real life, everyone prefers to have fun! I originally wanted to give the author three stars, but I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will give it four stars here. I hope the author's writing will get better and better.

Creative; I hope the author will continue to work hard; the following are the questions and questions I raised as a reader. The depiction of certain psychology and activities is a bit unsatisfactory (at least I think so); after all, it is not a traditional game of traveling into a game or a game invading reality; it is about controlling a character in a completely real world; but this character also has its own personality when not being controlled; this world view makes me sometimes feel that the addition of game activities will be a bit abrupt. Reasonable but awkward. But the creative style is really good; if it weren't for some dramatic activities, I think it could be read as two novels; equivalent to a novel about traveling into the game world + a cool novel about operating characters to fight (One Leaf Knows Autumn). It includes both cultivation (the growth of the heroine and improvement of her own equipment level), online games (killing monsters and upgrading; completing dungeons; large-scale events) and the city (the daily life of the male protagonist and his cousin [not related by blood], the aloof female CEO of the city [Rare Edition]). However, the connection is a bit stiff in some places; I think the potential is great; but the writing style needs to be improved; I just read novels and hope you can write better; come on, author! My suggestions may not be completely correct, but I hope you can learn some directions for improvement. Maybe the next big guy in the Internet literary world will be you [laughs]

As soon as I entered, I discovered three problems 1. When the author writes about possession, he just writes about possession. Readers only come in after reading about possession. There are too many realistic descriptions of the protagonist. 2. There are currently about three or four female protagonists, and they are all basically in reality. But the problem is that all three are in reality. There is not enough space to describe the characters, but Xiaoyu's portrayal is very good. 3. There are too many realistic parts. Everyone in the comment area has the same idea as me. They just watch the game and jump directly. As a result, I can't even remember the names of the second and third heroines. In the end, this book is quite good except for the realistic part. I hope the author can continue to write more. Thank you.

At the same time, the copy of "The Evil God..." Next door was much better than this one, and here's why. First, both sides are in Dihua. There are so many hangups that the protagonist does not realize that this is the real world (for example, you can really report bugs and the protagonist can activate g), but here there are too many abnormalities that you can recognize. The protagonist still feels like a fool and thinks that the game is like this. (Plot plausibility) Secondly, this book describes a lot of reality, but most readers only like the game part. That book is clearly focused on games. However, this is not the shortcoming of this book. That book sacrificed too much for the sake of enjoyment. It was destined to be short and sacrificed its potential. (Readers focus) On the third setting level, the game in that book probably belongs to a low-dimensional or electronic civilization. And this one is probably the real dimension of digitization (not only refers to the recently opened data copy, but also refers to the original world that also has a digitized feel) (Setting comparison) Finally, some encouragement, add one star, four stars

It is a very smooth book. I personally think that the author has a strong role in shaping the characters of the two people when writing about daily life. When they are not controlling, it is just right for the characters to upgrade and gain wisdom. It is also very interesting when writing about controlling the characters to fight monsters and upgrade.

The setting of the assassin is very attractive to me, and the game world reminds me of the memories of playing an assassin in Blade & Soul. The interaction with NPCs is very interesting. A person's complaints have to be conveyed to have a sense of drama. Girls are also very lovable, hardworking and inspiring, cute and beautiful In the interaction between Yu Jie and Yu Jie, although they liked each other, they both avoided emotional topics and it was very confusing to watch. The female boss may have tsundere qualities, but so far I only see her as unruly. I hope she can be more lively. The heroine's essence is not too expensive

It's very interesting, and the subject matter is very novel, but I really don't like life in the real world. In fact, I can try not to write about it. I just read it based on real life... After all, it is all about the game world, so I'd better focus on the plot of the game. This subject matter is very interesting once it is written.

By the way, we should have done this a long time ago. From the perspective of the male protagonist, it is just a game. If I am the protagonist, I find a game that is more real than a 3A masterpiece. The first step is to visit all the places you can go. The second step is to try your luck and kill them all to see if they are real enough to trigger additional plots for each one. Even if there is no reward, you can still achieve achievements. Anyway, the biggest problem for a game is to restart it🤓

I just read about 30 chapters, and I would like to share my thoughts. Personally, I think the subject matter of the novel is pretty good, very novel, and I think it's quite good in the niche category. But I think the author can optimize the content inside. For example: Don't make a long paragraph, try to break it up into paragraphs, it will be more comfortable to read. This is also common in tomatoes, otherwise it will be very tiring to look at it in one big lump... There are also some modifiers. I read some comments and they all said AI. I didn't believe it at first, but your description is really hard to believe. I can only say that I hope to use less AI assistance! One last point, your novel is obviously mainly about game content. Unless there is a connection in reality, it is better to show less of it, otherwise it will be quite discouraging to tell the truth in the early stage... There are also other problems, but they can only be said to be within an acceptable range. After all, I have only read dozens of chapters and I can't make a final conclusion. I only hope that there will be improvements in the following chapters! Oh no, I read chapter 60. Also, AI is serious! The left and right brains described below are fighting each other. It's completely like leaving the text to AI to run, and then not even bothering to modify it! I've lost my mind and started reading, but it's really hard to explain... I've already read Chapter 130. I can't stand it anymore, so I ran away, brothers.

The subject matter is quite good. I have watched too many traditional online game streams. I feel that this one is more realistic than other online games about invading reality. The progress is also good. There seems to be no female protagonist at the moment. The realistic writing is also quite good. It is a slow way to relieve boredom.

The setting is very novel, the logic is self-consistent, and I haven't found any gambling points yet. Only old bookworms suggest: The main attraction of books is character control, game control, cross-world, and reducing realistic plot descriptions. Or the author can transfer the real-life plot description directly to the game control plot, which will be better! To put it simply, the plot description of the male protagonist becomes the description of the game plot of the female protagonist. It is funny, embarrassing, reversal... There is so much more that can be written. There are too many confusions, the data and levels are not rigorous, and men and women are confused. You can read it when you don't have a book to read.

I think the game world is more interesting, with a growing female protagonist. From a girl who was ostracized and had low self-esteem, she slowly turned into a strong person. I hope the author writes well. Don't have a harem. Modern people don't really like to watch, but they still like to see the world in games.

There are too many real life chapters😵‍💫😵‍💫😵‍💫 It's not good to watch I want to see the game world🌚(👀)

It was really an AI article. I didn't believe it at first. Later, he couldn't even tell the number of people.

Let's decide on a real-life plot line. After reading the comments, many readers said that the plot in the game is better than the real-life plot. I think the real-life plot does not have a main or clear goal, so I write whatever comes to mind, but it is not attractive!

The imagination and description are very good. Personally, I don't like harem-style male protagonists. I don't understand why there is a childish female CEO in the city. Oh my god! I know it's to promote the plot, but the interaction between the female CEOs is really too... But I still have to praise what I should praise. The description of the game in it is really good (except for the vague harem feeling)

Five stars, this novel is underestimated. I think now that I have seen it, I think it has the qualification of 9.1, But the real life is too realistic. Some novice readers will be anxious after reading it, but it is okay to skip it directly without affecting the game. The author also expressed the connection between the game and reality, and it is estimated that it will be integrated later. I hope it will be better in the future. Anyway, as I see it now, I think the writing is too realistic, and the writing in the game is also ideal. Some people just give it a heart out of nowhere and say that this book is an AI text. It seems that they have never read good ones. They are all in Akaishi. I have read those good texts and can tell what level it is? I'll just leave it here. I've seen Chapter 63. This book has a 9.3 Rating. If it's written better, 9.6 Is no problem. The current 6 rating is simply because there is too little content and too few readers. Many people have posted comments. His homepage has more than 10,000 books and more than 1,000 hours. What is the value of his evaluation? I reviewed it for a long time, but it was all about cursing, and I didn't say what was wrong with this book? You can't even compete with a 12-year-old kid. Can you tell me how you judge the value of other people's comments? The kind of person who reads few books and has a lot of time is basically brushing time. For example, if he reads 1,000 books and more than 10,000 hours, he actually doesn't read any novels. There are still more than 10,000 books and more than 1,000 hours. This kind of person has basically not read a single book. He cannot give a fair evaluation. This author is quite good. The realistic writing is not a bloody drama, but it is too realistic. It is very tiring to read, and there is no problem in skipping it. The trash counterattack in the game is not outstanding, and it does not make people feel angry, because when you read the book, you will bring the perspective of the protagonist. If you don't directly bring the perspective of the heroine, you will not feel aggrieved. The killing is a standard cool novel, and it is not random killing. It is a logical killing, and basically has a grudge against the protagonist. , I feel that in the later period, they basically have no roots, like the kind of gangs who block the door and directly kill people who have played the game. I hate this kind of person. Don't have a mother's heart for him. This kind of person has no heart. He will die early and be born early. His reading level is low. It is easy to get into it as long as you read it carefully. You will not read a novel like Jianlai did, and you have to understand classical Chinese. I will leave it at that. A 9.3 Rating is basic as long as the writing is very smooth and maintains the quality before 63 chapters.