[Secret Love Comes True × Chasing Wife at the Crematorium × Reunion after a Broken Mirror]
In the early stage, it was campus
Handsome than Kongtonggong✖️gay beauty suffers
Stream of consciousness product, very vulgar, very vulgar
Reader comments
It was well written and I read it very carefully. The two people's emotions were pulling at each other, which was a bit sad. The only flaw is that the "violators" were not punished. Those who bully, threaten, and use force... In real life, there may indeed be no way to deal with these people, but in the world of the novel, I hope they will be punished.
It turns out that misunderstandings, conflicts, scars and pain are no match for a touch of love.
At first, you may feel weak and sensitive when watching it, but this is also his talent, imagination and ability to perceive happiness. Where would such a person go?
Later, Xiaoyu finally reconciled with himself. He began to put himself first and faced the rumors openly. In my opinion, he is a very tough person.
Xiao Jiang, he is actually a bit complicated.
The routine in the early stage is the same, shrinking in the face of labels and avoiding emotions. But because of love, I began to learn to take responsibility, learn to understand, and learn to respect. Maybe when he gets old, Xiaoyu will still think of that bone-deep hug in the hall? Xiao Jiang is actually very good at loving people, and it can be seen that his mother is a very good woman.
Finally, Xiaoyu Xiaojiang, I wish you happiness.
Finally, I hope the bullies will be severely punished and all the lovers in the world will finally get married.
Love has its own will.
Wen Yu's inner world and hidden love, as well as everything he experienced, are so real that it makes people feel heartbroken. Jiang Yao's initial response was really annoying, but he appeared in time when Wen Yu was facing a disaster, gave Wen Yu a big hug, fell to the ground when he confirmed Wen Yu was safe, and his tenderness when making dumplings for Wen Yu, finally moved people's hearts. If you think about it carefully, Jiang Yao is actually quite sad. He was responsible for the so-called family glory and lost the freedom of his lover. But they went through so much and finally became each other's hearts, which is a great blessing. I hope everyone can express their love bravely and truly.
Overall it's okay.
The teacher is very good at writing a lot of environment and psychology to impress readers. This is more like a self-narration than a novel, and the style is quite unique. The teacher must be a thoughtful person.
However, since you are writing a novel, the more important thing is the plot. If you throw away the teacher's extensive descriptions of psychology and monologues, the remaining plot is actually very thin. I suggest that teachers reduce some of their inner monologues for the following two reasons:
1. Too tired after watching too much
2. A large section of one chapter is an emotional monologue, which is revealed directly to the reader. Without something for the reader to figure out, it is difficult to leave a particularly deep impression. (It would be better to use some actions to describe the character's abnormal behavior, and appropriately reveal some emotional monologues, which means that the meaning is vaguely expressed without revealing it, allowing readers to reveal it.)
Teacher, you can try the first-person style. This should suit you very well.
Let me comment on this book from my perspective (if there is anything wrong, please point it out, it is my personal opinion, please do not criticize [sending my heart]). I haven't read it for a long time [shy], so I will review it now. ① To be honest, this article looks a lot like an AI article [something] (I'm actually not going to point this out, but some people say it looks like an AI article and encourages others to give low scores, and if you post a separate review, so let me explain) But the styles of AI are not all the same [smile], you ask him to change his style It's possible, and before AI came out, there were many great masters with similar styles to AI [smile], so now that AI has come out, this author's writing is more like AI, and then he directly said in the comment area that it is AI writing. I think as a person, you should give some evidence, and don't just talk nonsense and mess up a bunch of lines, right? [Smile][Smile] I don't know if the person who encourages others to give low scores will see my review. I really hope you delete that review. There is no conclusive evidence yet, so please don't talk nonsense! The Internet is not a place outside the law, and everything you say and do is subject to legal sanctions. (I hereby indicate that I am not a little policeman. I am just a kind reminder. Please don't talk nonsense when there is no evidence.) And please don't encourage others to give low scores. Many people may not see it. ((Let me show it off. The comma means encouraging others to give low scores. , The period represents another passerby. This happened in a low-scoring comment area: Comma: "Like AI writing." Period: "I have a feeling, but not sure." Then the comma posted a long string (to put it simply): "AI focuses on describing scenes. (In fact, AI can change the style, big brother) When I recalled this article, I used scenes. This article was integrated with AI, and then some authors were too embarrassed to change it a little, which caused a lot of confusion [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. Full stop: "Help, this is my first time seeing it." "Comma:" Low score! [Admiration])) First of all, I think Mark's approach is very correct. He didn't say it out when he was unsure, because someone else said it, so he spoke carefully and said, "I also have a feeling, but I'm not sure." "But the other person's behavior was just like AI. In fact, this sentence is not the most popular, but his next sentence shattered my three views. Without knowing whether this article really incorporates A1, he said, "Take the low score! [Adoration]"
I don't know why this book is rated like this. But this book is really, really good. Wen is a very strong person with a very stable core. He is both beautiful and talented. Yes, the whole person is very brave and magnanimous. The author's writing is also very good. The characters are very detailed and vivid, and the description and background of the environment are just right. I really like it.
I just finished reading this book and commented that it was very, very good. Wen is a person with a stable, strong and determined core. He can find his own direction in life and heal himself as time goes by. It was a very young secret love at the beginning, but the part in the middle where it was discovered was a bit sadistic and happy. But this paragraph really hurt Wen. If I were him, I would definitely not forgive Jiang. Maybe it's because they always have the bond of growing up together. It may also be predestined, otherwise the chance of a person going to a foreign country to find another person is very slim. Moreover, the part where he gives up everything to find Wen is very tear-jerking, and what follows is pure love. Highly recommended, very beautiful, and the writing is superb
The author's writing style is also very good [love]
Wen Yu looked at the snowman and suddenly remembered the fairy tale he had read when he was a child.
The snow child finally melted.
Because spring is coming, because warmth is coming.
And some feelings, like the snow child, are destined to only exist in the cold winter. Once the warmth comes, it will disappear without a trace, leaving not even a trace.
It's a really good book. I don't know if it's because of the introduction. Not many people have read it, but it's really good. The relationship between the two people is relieved at the end and the two people reunite after breaking up. It's like a new life, forgetting the past. The logic and plot are very smooth, and the touching and emotional lines are all very well written. It's a seriously underestimated book. Come and read it. The relationship between the male partner and the male partner is also really well written.
It's pretty and really suits my taste [laughs]
It is really a very good and beautiful article, very quiet and calm, and I believe that some people who are trapped in the past will suddenly have an epiphany when they read this article. The writing style of the article is very comfortable, and the author is greatly encouraged.
Very well written
Once again, we became the second partner. How can we forgive just like that after we have been hurt?
The author's literary talent is very good, and his emotional expressions and other descriptions are easy to resonate with. It reads like a beautifully written poem. It makes people feel distressed involuntarily. Big cheers for the author! ! ! Just expressing my personal opinion: But the plot is a bit lackluster, especially the follow-up to the school bullying was not written, and there was a lack of explanation of the suffering. Even if Gong escapes his father's control, if Gong doesn't become stronger, it feels like Gong and Shou will still be separated due to power and other reasons.
Well, I actually boast that I have a high tear point, but it's a little different from what I imagined [I'm about to cry]
Worth chasing! Go read it. The first few chapters made me cry.
Author, you must keep writing, ah ah ah ah ah
The writing style is really good and very realistic. It is so real that it is so helpless and cruel that I love you so much.
Super pretty! It's very realistic and makes me cry, but it's also very warm and really beautiful [send heartfelt message]
Tasty! ! I just like watching torture
I think this book is okay. But I think the latter part is a bit cruel
It was so well written that it made me cry so late at night.
Oh my god, this cover looks great.
Jiang Yao——Wen Yu
Zhaozhao comes true as he wishes, and everything is peaceful every year
Teacher, I cried so much that I couldn't sleep... [Laughs][laughs]
It was actually very well written [cover face] and made me stay up late [cover face]
It makes people feel sour and sweet at the same time. It's beautiful.
I accidentally touched the screen of my mobile phone when I was reading. Holy shit, it's so good.
It's good to read, I really like this type of novel [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
The plot is a bit bloody, but the writing is really, really, really good.
It's so well written, it's so delicate, it made me cry.
Although I haven't finished watching it yet, it's very interesting. I feel sorry for Baby Wen Yu [crying]
It was well written and I read it very carefully. The two people's emotions were pulling at each other, which was a bit sad. The only flaw is that the "violators" were not punished. Those who bully, threaten, and use force... In real life, there may indeed be no way to deal with these people, but in the world of the novel, I hope they will be punished.
It turns out that misunderstandings, conflicts, scars and pain are no match for a touch of love. At first, you may feel weak and sensitive when watching it, but this is also his talent, imagination and ability to perceive happiness. Where would such a person go? Later, Xiaoyu finally reconciled with himself. He began to put himself first and faced the rumors openly. In my opinion, he is a very tough person. Xiao Jiang, he is actually a bit complicated. The routine in the early stage is the same, shrinking in the face of labels and avoiding emotions. But because of love, I began to learn to take responsibility, learn to understand, and learn to respect. Maybe when he gets old, Xiaoyu will still think of that bone-deep hug in the hall? Xiao Jiang is actually very good at loving people, and it can be seen that his mother is a very good woman. Finally, Xiaoyu Xiaojiang, I wish you happiness. Finally, I hope the bullies will be severely punished and all the lovers in the world will finally get married. Love has its own will.
Wen Yu's inner world and hidden love, as well as everything he experienced, are so real that it makes people feel heartbroken. Jiang Yao's initial response was really annoying, but he appeared in time when Wen Yu was facing a disaster, gave Wen Yu a big hug, fell to the ground when he confirmed Wen Yu was safe, and his tenderness when making dumplings for Wen Yu, finally moved people's hearts. If you think about it carefully, Jiang Yao is actually quite sad. He was responsible for the so-called family glory and lost the freedom of his lover. But they went through so much and finally became each other's hearts, which is a great blessing. I hope everyone can express their love bravely and truly.
Overall it's okay. The teacher is very good at writing a lot of environment and psychology to impress readers. This is more like a self-narration than a novel, and the style is quite unique. The teacher must be a thoughtful person. However, since you are writing a novel, the more important thing is the plot. If you throw away the teacher's extensive descriptions of psychology and monologues, the remaining plot is actually very thin. I suggest that teachers reduce some of their inner monologues for the following two reasons: 1. Too tired after watching too much 2. A large section of one chapter is an emotional monologue, which is revealed directly to the reader. Without something for the reader to figure out, it is difficult to leave a particularly deep impression. (It would be better to use some actions to describe the character's abnormal behavior, and appropriately reveal some emotional monologues, which means that the meaning is vaguely expressed without revealing it, allowing readers to reveal it.) Teacher, you can try the first-person style. This should suit you very well.
Let me comment on this book from my perspective (if there is anything wrong, please point it out, it is my personal opinion, please do not criticize [sending my heart]). I haven't read it for a long time [shy], so I will review it now. ① To be honest, this article looks a lot like an AI article [something] (I'm actually not going to point this out, but some people say it looks like an AI article and encourages others to give low scores, and if you post a separate review, so let me explain) But the styles of AI are not all the same [smile], you ask him to change his style It's possible, and before AI came out, there were many great masters with similar styles to AI [smile], so now that AI has come out, this author's writing is more like AI, and then he directly said in the comment area that it is AI writing. I think as a person, you should give some evidence, and don't just talk nonsense and mess up a bunch of lines, right? [Smile][Smile] I don't know if the person who encourages others to give low scores will see my review. I really hope you delete that review. There is no conclusive evidence yet, so please don't talk nonsense! The Internet is not a place outside the law, and everything you say and do is subject to legal sanctions. (I hereby indicate that I am not a little policeman. I am just a kind reminder. Please don't talk nonsense when there is no evidence.) And please don't encourage others to give low scores. Many people may not see it. ((Let me show it off. The comma means encouraging others to give low scores. , The period represents another passerby. This happened in a low-scoring comment area: Comma: "Like AI writing." Period: "I have a feeling, but not sure." Then the comma posted a long string (to put it simply): "AI focuses on describing scenes. (In fact, AI can change the style, big brother) When I recalled this article, I used scenes. This article was integrated with AI, and then some authors were too embarrassed to change it a little, which caused a lot of confusion [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. Full stop: "Help, this is my first time seeing it." "Comma:" Low score! [Admiration])) First of all, I think Mark's approach is very correct. He didn't say it out when he was unsure, because someone else said it, so he spoke carefully and said, "I also have a feeling, but I'm not sure." "But the other person's behavior was just like AI. In fact, this sentence is not the most popular, but his next sentence shattered my three views. Without knowing whether this article really incorporates A1, he said, "Take the low score! [Adoration]"
I don't know why this book is rated like this. But this book is really, really good. Wen is a very strong person with a very stable core. He is both beautiful and talented. Yes, the whole person is very brave and magnanimous. The author's writing is also very good. The characters are very detailed and vivid, and the description and background of the environment are just right. I really like it. I just finished reading this book and commented that it was very, very good. Wen is a person with a stable, strong and determined core. He can find his own direction in life and heal himself as time goes by. It was a very young secret love at the beginning, but the part in the middle where it was discovered was a bit sadistic and happy. But this paragraph really hurt Wen. If I were him, I would definitely not forgive Jiang. Maybe it's because they always have the bond of growing up together. It may also be predestined, otherwise the chance of a person going to a foreign country to find another person is very slim. Moreover, the part where he gives up everything to find Wen is very tear-jerking, and what follows is pure love. Highly recommended, very beautiful, and the writing is superb
The author's writing style is also very good [love] Wen Yu looked at the snowman and suddenly remembered the fairy tale he had read when he was a child. The snow child finally melted. Because spring is coming, because warmth is coming. And some feelings, like the snow child, are destined to only exist in the cold winter. Once the warmth comes, it will disappear without a trace, leaving not even a trace.
It's a really good book. I don't know if it's because of the introduction. Not many people have read it, but it's really good. The relationship between the two people is relieved at the end and the two people reunite after breaking up. It's like a new life, forgetting the past. The logic and plot are very smooth, and the touching and emotional lines are all very well written. It's a seriously underestimated book. Come and read it. The relationship between the male partner and the male partner is also really well written.
It's pretty and really suits my taste [laughs]
It is really a very good and beautiful article, very quiet and calm, and I believe that some people who are trapped in the past will suddenly have an epiphany when they read this article. The writing style of the article is very comfortable, and the author is greatly encouraged.
Very well written
Once again, we became the second partner. How can we forgive just like that after we have been hurt?
The author's literary talent is very good, and his emotional expressions and other descriptions are easy to resonate with. It reads like a beautifully written poem. It makes people feel distressed involuntarily. Big cheers for the author! ! ! Just expressing my personal opinion: But the plot is a bit lackluster, especially the follow-up to the school bullying was not written, and there was a lack of explanation of the suffering. Even if Gong escapes his father's control, if Gong doesn't become stronger, it feels like Gong and Shou will still be separated due to power and other reasons.
Well, I actually boast that I have a high tear point, but it's a little different from what I imagined [I'm about to cry]
Worth chasing! Go read it. The first few chapters made me cry.
Author, you must keep writing, ah ah ah ah ah The writing style is really good and very realistic. It is so real that it is so helpless and cruel that I love you so much.
Super pretty! It's very realistic and makes me cry, but it's also very warm and really beautiful [send heartfelt message]
Tasty! ! I just like watching torture
I think this book is okay. But I think the latter part is a bit cruel
It was so well written that it made me cry so late at night.
Oh my god, this cover looks great.
Jiang Yao——Wen Yu Zhaozhao comes true as he wishes, and everything is peaceful every year
Teacher, I cried so much that I couldn't sleep... [Laughs][laughs]
It was actually very well written [cover face] and made me stay up late [cover face]
It makes people feel sour and sweet at the same time. It's beautiful.
I accidentally touched the screen of my mobile phone when I was reading. Holy shit, it's so good.
It's good to read, I really like this type of novel [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]
The plot is a bit bloody, but the writing is really, really, really good.
It's so well written, it's so delicate, it made me cry.
Although I haven't finished watching it yet, it's very interesting. I feel sorry for Baby Wen Yu [crying]