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The plot is well written, imaginative and novel. Although there have been some that combined themes like Umbrella Company and Detective Conan before, this is the first one that I can watch. There are just some problems, that is, the pace is a bit slow, it only starts to officially break out after about 250,000 words, and some plot content is repeated. Occasionally, there are errors in character names, and some plots are too magical based on real situations. However, this is essentially a fan novel with a two-dimensional animation and a sci-fi background of the game. Clones have been used to replace political figures, so the magical content that appears is no longer magical. Overall not bad. [Laughing]

Awesome, this is the Conan fan with the most murders I've ever seen! It is also the fastest destroyed black organization.

It was depressing to read to my friends. This is the only Conan fanfic that I felt depressing after reading it. I'm not saying that the writing is not good, but I just watched the Resident Evil series of movies when I was a child. There were shadows, which were eliminated as I grew up. But after reading this book, it made me think wildly again [facepalm]

This book allowed me to see the future development trend of fan fiction, which is to integrate two novels into each other, but without one overpowering the other. This article is well done, and the Resident Evil worldview prevails, but the descriptive perspective of the novel is on the people of Conan. In addition, this article bypasses the biggest constraint area for fan works of Conan novels: various copies of Conan novels. This article basically does not write about the various cases in the original Conan, but writes new plots and stories in a new way, which creates more vitality. Although there are many AI sentences in this article, the description of the characters is really good. Each character is not limited to the persona in the original work, but has changes and development, allowing me to see their potential. In addition, there is no big poison in this article so far, and the various plots are quite novel, and there are no such old routines, which is good. Please allow me to applaud Mouri Kogoro and Fei Eri in Chapter 62 of the novel. This place once again confirms the excellence of this novel. The characters are not a single fixed personality, but change. In fact, there are many characters in Detective Conan that are very classic and wonderful. If these characters can be regarded as samples and placed in different environments, their new stresses and changes can be shown. After all, humans are highly adaptable animals. Who says these characters can only survive in the world of Detective Conan? They can completely connect with other worldviews and show a new style.

It feels good to see it so far, that's right. Based on the values ​​​​of Conan, Conan is always very over-the-top, and there is nothing you can do about it. The cartoon is very nonsense. This is already well written.

The Conan chapter is written very realistically and has a rich philosophical and cultural background. The ending is sloppy, but the finishing touch is the self-narration, which highlights the protagonist's ideological collision and the description and positioning of the character, which is very good. Zyx

Very good-looking, Mr. Sterling is super charming in front, and reassuring in his eccentric manner [adorable]. He is always calm, calm, and interesting in the back. It's just that some plots can't be connected. Now the old humans and the protagonist group have been wiped out. The feeling of despair is well created, and the protective umbrella is so haunting [laughs] I don't know if Mr. Sterling's core staff will be resurrected. It would be a pity that most of them are dead like this. But this is also good and will not affect Sterling's dominance. I feel that Ashford can be resurrected. He is very good as a scavenger and researcher, and he has no softness or sense of emptiness. In short, I look forward to the continued development of the new world, and even to the universe and other worlds [adoration][adoration] Mr. Sterling in the early stage is super charming, and this kind of character is particularly likeable. However, Sterling in the later period is not the same person as in the early stage. The protagonist is portrayed as an ordinary person. Even his emotional management and self-management are not as good as ordinary people. The contrast between the protagonist's personality before and after is particularly large. The umbrella in the later period does not have the b-grid of the early stage, and I feel that there are also problems with the organizational structure. The overall structure in the later stage is too light, and there is no sense of solidity in the ground, let alone the sense of history and development. Giving new entrants too high a status is overall unreasonable I feel that the main character Sterling's biggest characteristic is his aloof and unworldly feeling, coupled with the perfection and inhumanity that is unlike human beings, the rigorous logic of scientists and researchers, or the very beautiful bad taste with a crazy mental state, and a less obvious love for fun. Ahhhh, I really hope that the clones of Mr. Sterling that appear throughout the entire article are all Mr. Sterling's clones, and that his true form is always in the deepest part of the headquarters. Because the risk is too high if the main body is outside. If something happens or is calculated, the real body will be gone. And I personally feel that the protagonist is a bit older. I can understand that this age is more reasonable, and it is good for leading a team and so on. But I still prefer young, beautiful and beautiful protagonists. Our protagonists should have the best of everything. She is so young and beautiful that she would be considered a low-class soldier and a flower vase. She is super cold and distant, and has a sense of inhumanity and is crazy about great beauties [Adoration]

The plot structure is very good, and the extremely rational writing style is well executed. Personally, I feel that the only shortcoming is that I didn't see any emotional scenes about the protagonist. It seems that he was an extremely rational biological robot at the beginning. I didn't see too much about the emotional fluctuations and emotional loss of human beings. I would like to see more thinking about human nature.

The apocalyptic stories written in Conan's volume are quite real, unlike other fan fiction protagonists who are pretentious. The tragedy of the apocalypse is very real. This is the best apocalyptic theme I have ever seen. This is the case with apocalyptic literature, where ordinary people are just hanging on. There is no sense of powerlessness in the face of reality, and there is no golden finger to defy the sky, and there is no sense of relief from a hero saving the world. From beginning to end, it is just ordinary people struggling to survive in the ruins. Food, water, and a safe place to stay must be fought with all their strength. Even if they risk their lives, they may not be able to survive. The protagonist is not an omnipotent strong man. He will be so hungry that he gnaws on moldy dry food. He will be so scared that his legs will weaken when facing danger. He will watch the people around him leave one by one but be unable to do anything. He is full of helpless despair. The lines are full of depression and desolation in the end of the world. Everyone is hanging on for a breath, putting down their dignity in order to survive, struggling repeatedly on the edge of life and death. There is no end in sight, and no hope. It vividly describes the smallness, fragility, and humbleness of ordinary people in the end of the world.

How did Heiji and Kazuha separate? Chapter 43 also said that we would go to Shikoku together. Why did Heiji go alone later? Wandering alone with Ye? No, bro, what is written behind it? Ai? The same paragraphs appear repeatedly

To be honest, when I saw the end of the Conan chapter, I felt very depressed, but the setting was very attractive, the character design was also very good, and the brilliance of humanity was displayed so well that I kept wondering if the protagonist was a clone. His body was not as thorough as he wanted to be. He would wake up at a critical moment, and at least save the protagonists, who have great potential, and go to the next era. But I didn't expect that the protagonists would all die later, which made me a little depressed. Overall, it's a very good novel, but the protagonist doesn't have much of a role to play. The plot is basically a story about characters from the Conan world, how they dispersed to resist the Umbrella Company, gathered resistance, and finally many people died on the way to escape.

Objectively speaking, it's a very good novel. When I was brought into the exile team, the route was planned along the way. The despair was really unsolvable. In this regard, I still admire Captain Ke for being so active. However, if you bring in the role of an umbrella, the pursuit feels a bit light. With technology crushing us, we have already decided to clean up groups with more than 20 people. It is a bit unreasonable to keep them running for so long. At the very least, we should increase the cleaning efforts and forcibly break them into small groups of about 10 people at most. If we do research like this, it seems that there will be more research directions. It is recommended to insert a piece of content from the perspective of the umbrella. If you follow the escape throughout the whole process, it will feel too depressing. Insert the description of the crushing party to slow down the rhythm and adjust the mood. It will feel better. It would be more interesting to observe Captain Ke's escape route from a God's perspective and reversely deduce the planned despair.

It's a bit exciting. A truly cool novel treats the protagonist like a doll.

Al style is relatively strong. The protagonist lets Conan and Red Fang investigate the protective umbrella to highlight the power of the protective umbrella. The protective umbrella knows everything and is deliberately toying with them.

Overall it's good, it's a very novel angle, but the details are a bit messy, especially Conan's behavior earlier. He acted like he had seen through it three times. He said he would stop investigating, stop organizing, and just record. It happened repeatedly. Someone asked how this could happen, but [face-palming] as soon as he finished speaking, he started investigating again, and finally started handing out leaflets again, and asked the police why they remained silent and acted as accomplices. [Palming face]

I just wanted to say that the writing was pretty good, but there seemed to be no comments or responses. It turned out that I started writing in January. Man, you can write more than 10,000 pages so quickly? [I also strongly recommend] It's so awesome to write, even if you use AI, you have to admire it

I suddenly thought that Nine Dragon Ball and Conan have the same world view. The biochemical virus should have been easily solved by the protagonist. The protagonist of Nine Dragon Ball can explode stars with one sword and easily move at super-light speed. Theoretically, he should be able to eliminate all threats within one second.

The design confrontation is quite satisfying, as in the original text: "Fourth and most important..." Sterling's voice lowered, as if he was telling a major secret, "I want to see if a 'story' favored by the universe can resist a scientifically designed 'ending'. I want to see if a heroic narrative can still find the 'miracle road' in the face of the power of absolute rationality."

It's quite interesting. I finished reading these dozens of chapters. If you are interested in this subject, there is still potential, but the biohazard in Conan may not be suitable for those who want to read Conan fans.

How to use AI to write novels? Can anyone give me some advice? I want to write it myself

Novel This is the first time I've seen such a combination. Red Queen, is it Hive, from The Walking Dead? Don't know much about this But it's pretty cool The invasion and infection angle is also good. Controlling the overall situation and implementing all-round crushing Red and black are defenseless The main control perspective is pretty cool Alas, but this is a global infection Even if the flower grower is just a backdrop, someone wrote a few words about it I still feel sick Flower growers are also infected and don't want it. But the author really writes very well. It feels like Conan and others will escape and resist in the future. The current powerlessness is due to external forces and the lack of cooperation of the existing order such as the government, and the media and other channels have been controlled. But this time the final winner will only be Company T. Their resistance will only be regarded as condiment.

It's good to read, I love reading it, it's much more novel than ordinary Conan fan fiction.

I was a little shocked at first, but then I slowly watched it, and I surprisingly liked it. If you are interested, don't miss it. Read a few more chapters and read slowly to have a different experience. Anyway, I like it very much [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] Thank you to the author for your hard work [send my heart]

Very good, the most innovative Conan fanfic

No matter from the plot or the inner struggle of the characters. Both are excellent science fiction novels. If we were faced with this situation, would we struggle, or should we face death calmly? Would you rather be an animal in someone else's museum zoo, or die with dignity? The last minute record is a futility or a struggle. Faced with meaningless hope, choose to struggle or give up.

Conan's world-destroying novel? Directly a five-star

The writing is very beautiful, and the writing style is also good, and the update quality is absolutely guaranteed

It's quite novel and good, but it feels a bit repetitive later on.

It's okay, the update speed is a bit slow. I'm afraid I have to wait a long time for Tyrant.

I think it's okay. I look really good when I'm so busy with books [face covering]