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After seeing the first three worlds, I wanted to talk about them. This novel is impressive in terms of professionalism and logical rigor, and the author has obviously put a lot of effort into it. But unfortunately, the soul of the character seems to have been sucked out. I didn't smell any obvious breath of life on Ye Qingyang. The author describes less about his emotions and emotions, but more about his judgment and analysis skills that are comparable to AI. A little too dull. So does the other protagonist. There is no sense of a living person. The author has too much control over his character. Although the character design is established, it lacks the "human" flavor. The author overemphasizes the difficulty of the strategy, which makes the characters seem distant and unapproachable. In addition, the routines of each world I saw were similar, but the methods of conquering them were different. Readers will soon discover that everything is expected, and even occasional setbacks will not cause waves. When professionalism becomes a cold wall and logic replaces the warmth of humanity, this book is like a precise machine that operates perfectly but cannot be approached. If you are a fan of hardcore settings, you may be attracted by the opening chapter; but if you expect to feel human warmth beyond logic, you may gradually lose motivation while reading. Personal opinion. There may be subsequent additions.

I just finished watching the first small world! Good looking! The plot is delicate and won't make people feel abrupt, which makes people feel warm! The characters are also very good! Super awesome author! [Send Heart][Shy][Shy][Shy] But I still want to confirm. Does the fixed cp written in the introduction mean that each small world is 1v1? Just no memory? Is it Shuangjie? Yangyang is a feeling, right? (Dada, I don't mean any harm! I just want to ask, the writing is very good! Come on, look forward to it^0^~[shy][shy][shy][sending heart])

What is an immortal product? What is fine chaff? That's it! The writing is so good, it's not enough to read, not enough to read at all [crying] [crying] The author's writing style is really great. Reading the books written by the author makes me feel that the author is an extraordinary figure in various fields. I feel that he is a person in this field. Who knows? Can anyone understand? Oh my god, it's not accurate no matter how I say it, but I lack knowledge and can't describe it. Anyway, this book is really extraordinary, it's awesome, it's really awesome! Really highly recommend to my family! ! ! I used to just read randomly, and there is no comparison with this. My family, I can't really describe it. You will know after reading it. There is really no way to compare it with the novels you read before. It is not on the same level. Anyway, it is really different here [crying]

After watching the first episode of Small World, I couldn't help but comment, "Xi Chuan". It's the kind of love between mature men, where the attacker and the sufferer tolerate each other, learn from each other, and face the twists and turns together. In short, it is very interesting to read, and the author's writing style is also very stable. In fact, this kind of love can easily become boring if it is not well written, but the author's writing is very attractive.

It's great to read. The author is amazing. In such a short space of time, the emotional rhythm is fast but not abrupt. The knowledge is deep and the professional terminology is perfectly integrated. Although I don't understand it, it doesn't affect the viewing [Send my heart] [Send my heart]

I am currently watching A Small World. The emotions of the protagonists are either fast or unhappy. They are slow or fast but not abrupt. The emotion of trusting each other is exactly what we need. The writing style is large and delicate, and the plot is a bit ups and downs, not as calm as the lake. It is a fast-travel story that develops quickly. Anyway, it looks good! ! ! I love you so much! [Adoration]

The writing is very good and engaging! The atmosphere is also very good, but I feel that the writing method is a little limited. The third article seems a bit repetitive. The author can try more different narrative methods. Overall, it is still very interesting!

I don't write book reviews very often, but this post made me want to write something. This article is very quiet and delicate, like a stream flowing down from a high mountain. The author describes the sound of it flowing down, the green light it reflects, and the fine sand and gravel under the stream, or the rolling mountains. It's beautiful, really beautiful, and allows people to quietly appreciate their love. Also, I feel that the author should also be a serious and meticulous person, with a very gentle feeling.

The writing style of this book is very warm. It's not like most fast-travel novels that are too fast or too slow (of course, I'm not saying that other fast-travel novels are not good, it's just that everyone has their own preferences). It has its own characteristics, like a stream of thin and long flowing water. It's great. I like it very much [shy] [blowing kiss]

Good book. I like this kind of long-flowing text the most. It has delicate emotional changes. It is not like falling in love with some books at the beginning, but every bit of the heartbeat of life. I love you too, and I also love life. Come on, I will support you.

The author's writing style is great, and the protagonist's creation is also great. It's not very dramatic, but it shows tenderness and emotion, giving me a light and strong feeling [Sending Hearts] It's very beautiful, and the protagonist is also very charming. You can feel the charm of the protagonist and the author's efforts in every aspect, and the author's words are beautiful and full of imagery. I really like it! Well worth seeing! It's hard for me to describe some things. If you really look at them, you can understand them better. So it's good to watch it [blowing kiss]

If you want to describe this book, it should be the warm sunshine in winter. The coldness of winter threatens rational judgment, but the warm sun always adds a little emotional warmth. This is the first time I have seen this type of writing. The writing is beautiful, but perhaps because it embodies that kind of rationality, it is relatively bland and does not contain intense conflicts and ups and downs. I've only seen the first two worlds so far, I don't know if the later ones will be more interesting. Otherwise, the whole world will be of the same tone and it will always be boring.

I read a world, the author writes very well, I don't know about bartending, but the author writes a lot of professional knowledge, the writing style is very good, and the feelings are gradually cultivated, it is not the kind that comes for no reason, but is this book the main focus? I read other comments and said that the attack is a guiding type, is Ye a gong?

I don't often write book reviews, but I really want to give this book a good review. The author's writing style has a plain and warm feeling. You feel that the love between the two protagonists is a natural one. It can make people feel that long-lasting feeling without making people feel bland. It has grasped this degree well. Now that I have read two planes, I really, really like it. I hope the author can keep it up in the future.つ♡⊂(ง •̀_•́)งCome on

The article is wonderful and the author is very rigorous. Especially the first story, about the bar owner's attitude towards red wine, feels like a story told by a former practitioner. Grandma is very cute, a lovely old man who is reasonable and not nosy. I really like Lin Wei (mother) in the second story. Her attitude towards life, her observations of birds, and her explanations for her son make her a girl who knows how to live and understands life. Next down is the mind-reader, my God! It's so lively! This is the first time I see a cute male protagonist with such a lively heart. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

The emotions are very delicate, layer by layer, and very beautiful\(//∇//)\. In short, I still like to watch this kind of movie❛˓◞˂̵✧

Good-looking, good-looking hehehe

The writing is very good. Each world is well written and has its own characteristics. I especially like the world of bartenders (the first world). Fine chaff, really fine chaff, every world is warm, Ye Qingyang is really gentle.

This is my first time commenting on Tomato. It's really good, especially the first part. I couldn't help but scream when I read it. It's so cool hahaha ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

It's very beautiful, very beautiful. I usually don't comment like this, but it's very beautiful. Each world is short and very refined [shy][shy][shy][adoration][adoration][shy][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's so well written, the plot is good, the writing is good, and it's nice to read [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Send a heart]

Words are powerful and can convey warmth

It's beautiful. The author's writing is warm.

Very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, very good! ! ! ! Author, please stay confident, I like it very much, okay? [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

In the author's words, I feel a very natural tenderness. I really like the protagonist.

This pull, this tenderness is beyond words, it's so beautiful to me, I haven't seen such a palatable article in a long time, please come on!

It's very beautiful, with delicate emotions and fast pace. Every world is beautiful😊

The writing is good and the plot is relatively novel

It's very beautiful, equal to the number, but it's too little, not enough to look at! ! !

It's very interesting. It's a nice little sweet story. I've already caught up with the second part [Adoration]