Ultimate Boss Training System

Summary An unpleasant but interesting novel, it is written more like a semi-political novel, and the characters' IQs and behaviors are very suitable for the character settings. There's nothing wrong with the taste, you can check it out The advantages are: the protagonist is very strong, he lay flat all the way, and the only time he stood up to fight was without any danger, and the character is very intelligent and won't do too many stupid things. The disadvantage is that You is the only novel of this type that I have seen where the protagonist fights the least. Some people may think of water because a large part of each chapter is used to describe psychology and thinking. As of Chapter 267, the questions are as follows: This city dungeon has been around for too long. I can't take away everything I should. The context is inconsistent. The image of the protagonist written before does not match the current one. The reason for the incident is unconvincing. In order to support Phoenix Man's father, I had to take this bait. I also added a dialogue between a father and his son passing by in the library to support it, but this is completely unreasonable and inconsistent with what I wrote before. It's already Chapter 267, and the protagonist is still in the first stage boss template. There is also the commonplace problem: 80% of a chapter is inner description, 15% is personal description, and the last 5% is a small scene and a short period of time.

To use a passage from the author to comment: A twisted work written by a twisted person. From the title of the book to the worldview structure and career system design, this is not a novel suitable for writing high-intellectual content such as conspiracy and conspiracy. From the early stage, it does conform to the behavioral pattern of the super brain telling me to use super power. But since the beginning of the Giant Turtle Style, the writing style has begun to deviate. A lot of detailed psychological descriptions and intrigues between the characters are combined with the author's full of personal stuff. Comprehensive evaluation of dry food-. But considering that it is not easy to see this kind of work on 🍅, I would like to give you a five-star review to encourage you.

The arrogant half-sister, the top school beauty, and the best female teacher are classic all the way. There are too many descriptions, more than seven points. Fortunately, the poison resistance is a little higher now, so the writing is okay. Nonsense literature makes the author very good at it. It is better than seven o'clock. I already understand it and explain it all the time. The improvement is comparable to a hundred chapters. From the first level of Qi training to the second level of Qi training.

The author writes very well This book has great tension, and the plot writing and design are excellent. It feels very interesting to watch. But I feel like the pace is too fast, the time jumps very quickly, and there are very few transitions in between, but this may also be the reason why this book is full of tension. All in all, this book is great. The author should update it quickly. Although there are a few people reading it now, if the author maintains this level, it will definitely be a leader in Western fantasy literature. Come on What are you doing, author? It says Machiavellian, right? From chapter 260 onwards, I kept skipping reading. It was extremely boring. Both the protagonist and the author's minds were stuck in this city of Stan. It felt like a step-by-step routine, which was extremely awkward. I was really convinced. The protagonist is now in a period of increasing strength. Talk about this and that. , It's enough to increase your strength, punches are power, I can't stand talking about the distribution of this and that, the punches don't even touch the flesh, chatting, adding the author's little ideas, analyzing the situation, negotiating, it's boring 😄, there are too many private goods involved. Hope everyone knows

An updated version of Journey into Mystery Volume 1. It smells like getting out of here, and it's more cunning than getting out of here. Even if the fighting is a little less, if the follow-up can maintain the current level, it will still be top-notch. O sea, you are all water.

I have read basically more than a hundred chapters, and I think it is pretty good. I would like to mention one thing to the author that I think is the only shortcoming, and it is also the most fatal shortcoming. The early chapters were pretty good, but I forgot the exact number of chapters. It seems that it started after I became a disciple. It was really too confusing. I kept going back and forth with explanations in one sentence, and there were all kinds of deep meanings in one sentence. To be honest, I saw that the plot in the latest chapter, which is more than 100 chapters, didn't advance much. There were all kinds of explanations. It was okay at the beginning, but it became boring after too many chapters! They all come to read the novel because they want to see the progression of the plot and the thrill of adding more points to become stronger. They don't want to see the protagonist sandwiched among various characters and have to recall every sentence! I don't want to learn the art of talking to people in novels. There were a few times when I couldn't stand it and danced a few pictures. To be honest, it didn't affect me at all. I didn't feel confused or uncomfortable at all. I think this is the most fatal flaw of this novel, especially for those who are following the update. After saving a few pictures and opening them with great interest, there is no progress, leaving readers with no idea of ​​following the update. If you don't follow the update, you may skip chapters or be unable to finish it because of the too delayed and watery plot. My personal opinions may be different from others, but I expressed my thoughts. I hope the author can see it. Finally, I wish the author a happy New Year and keep updating during the New Year. It's awesome👍 It can no longer be said to be water. The content in a piece of paper can basically be finished in three to five sentences. The most annoying thing is not to end the copy of Stan City. I watched the rating of this book drop. Most of the comments were about water. The author had the nerve to ask where the water was. Readers made suggestions, but the author refused to change his ways and just walked the same path.

As a first work, the writer worked very hard, the overall rhythm is quite satisfactory, and the writer tried his best to be meticulous, but he just used a crooked approach. In the end I couldn't bear to give up. A newbie's writing is as greasy as gutter oil. The so-called analysis that is constantly repeated, ruby ​​eyes like cockroaches and purple-black hair...

The Mysterious Journey of Tomatoes is very well conceived, but it just likes to explain a lot, mix in private goods, and try to explain the world with your own logic. This is not a very good place. It just develops naturally. Too many long explanations are too dramatic and cannot create an atmosphere. Overall, it is a good novel.

Overall, it is very good. Whether it is a complete world view, a military structure, or characterization, it is relatively detailed. I would like to give the author a suggestion. The content can be written in a simpler and more straightforward manner. After all, readers are also more complex, and their ability to understand the content is also different. You may not be able to understand some places without carefully looking at the context. It's really too watery. It could be more concise. The four or five chapters are all about introducing one thing. They are really not here to study the perfection of your military structure. Brother, it's okay for you to be more delicate in some places, but when it comes to advancing the plot, you have to hurry up. It's too slow.

A very interesting novel, looks very good It's hard to write a bunch of my own opinions in a book, talking about this and that.