传奇马娘异闻录

I saw Chapter 57, but I don't feel that Qingbai is in a relationship. Qingbai will not be in a relationship. It's not an abuser, but it's pretty cool up to chapter 57. I'm not sure about the derby in the comment below, I haven't seen it yet. In terms of the emotional line, although there are many plots related to Necha, the author does not describe much about the emotional development of the traveler. From what we have seen, the whole process is quite consistent with Qingbai, there is ambiguity but they seem to be friends (especially the traveler, following the protagonist is completely the reaction of being a good friend, right?), And then suddenly the traveler kisses Necha (unexpected here, but it is understandable, good friends are like this), Necha comes back and asks what he means, and the traveler confesses directly, seems too abrupt, right? ! And the reason is quite far-fetched. The author should not only focus on Nei Qia's psychological activities, but also write more about the protagonist's heart when they get along with each other.

There are indeed some templates, but they are indispensable when it comes to fanfic templates. The main thing is the writing. It reads smoothly and concisely, but it is too concise. The lack of daily life makes many reactions very abrupt, such as the feelings for excellent qualities. It is obviously abrupt, but the writing is very good compared to other novices. I have read the Dark Warrior, Beyond the Peak, and Ma Ertiao. The writing is so bad that I can't read it at all. At least I can read this book, which is okay.

Super fresh seedlings, the evaluation is that the future can be expected to be a tentatively large cup, as long as we keep updating, we will win. Jpg

I hope it's Wu Dao. The protagonist heals others and ends up getting injured. I really don't want to see it. Well, how should I put it? It feels like a template, dangerous running methods, overload training, self-sacrifice for others, and then the protagonist shows off his strength, the protagonist breaks his bones, and everyone cares. I can't read more than 4 books with this feeling.

This comment is the author's own. [Laugh]

It's okay, the competition is okay, and the training is okay. It's just that the main character interacts the most with Neqia in daily life, but I personally like other horse girls more, and there aren't any scenes with horse girls that I like, so I danced a lot, and I don't know the specifics, so I can't give it a full star.

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So far so good

Not bad, you must write it down [sending heartfelt wishes]

Very nice, please keep up the good work

It looks good, it says OK

Very nice, really nice.

Come on, I look forward to writing better and better

It's very beautiful [Learned it] [Learned it] Great cheers for the author [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Come on, big brother who likes Necha

I'm not very good at writing reviews, but the author writes very well. I love reading it.

The rhythm is well controlled and it's quite beautiful.

The work is exquisitely conceived, the language is beautiful and moving, the plot is ups and downs, and the characters are lifelike. It can be called a rare masterpiece and deserves to be savored carefully [Admiration]

The writing is very good. The beginning of the narration is complete. I look forward to the future. I must continue writing Haji.