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The overall logic is okay, but the transitions are abrupt. Sometimes I don't know where the plot is going, and it's not very comfortable and smooth to read. The characters on Shrek's side are pretty good, at least they are not stereotyped abusers. They will reflect and do better, and it feels like they will break through their own limits step by step. I just don't know if Ning Rongrong is there, sometimes there is not. I don't know much about Yihei Xiaobanai, but it seems to be in line with expectations, and there is no big OOC situation. The plot becomes more exciting later on.

I like this novel very much. It makes me feel very happy. It is not ridicule but the relief from the heart. It reminds me of the fear of being dominated by Douluo Dalu. The book is not perfect. It is precisely because of the imperfection of this novel that it is more real. Although there are too many unreasonable places, these shortcomings have become the characteristics of this novel. I would like to call it a book that finds fault. There are many little Easter eggs waiting for us to discover, such as: the ballet-loving Xiao Banai, the ghostly Ning Rongrong, the forgetful Zao Wuki, etc. If you see other comments saying that this novel is not good, please don't give up reading this novel. As long as you read it carefully, you will find that every book has its biggest shining point. It can be a bad book or a good book. Thanks

It's okay, but there are some logical errors, and I wish there were more scenes in the movie. Please recommend similar books

I don't know why, but I like this kind of book, but there are too few Demon Slayer Chuan Douluo, so I like it very much. By the way, can you stop Iguro from doing ballet again?

It's not bad. Xiaoba Nei's character is not very OOC. Can the author make a movie-watching extra? [Sending Hearts]

The writing style is very delicate, there are many detailed descriptions, and the characteristics of the characters are described. In fact, I only have a little understanding of it, and now I want to follow it.

The writing style is very satisfying [adoration][adoration]

It feels okay, but it's a bit awkward at the end. I feel like the teacher is addicted to punctuation marks.

Fine chaff, but I'm a wild boar, so I don't have much taste, but it looks good.

Invincible and beautiful! There is no OOC in Xiaoban.

Sometimes it's a bit inhuman, but it looks good and the subject matter is good