Become a Lv10 Magic Bow Swordsman in Another World

What about the cultivation you promised? It's just a wandering outline! There is no battle, and there is no conspiracy. You think it is life in another world, and the essence is just the outline of another world. There is nothing wrong with the dialogue and the overall structure of the novel, but the setting is not pleasing. There is nothing dangerous about the battle. Was Huo Yuanjia strong? Why did he die just like a sap? Do you, a female high school student, know what it means to have a sinister heart? Look at Brother Sha, that's a real adventure. I listened to your article for a long time, but it was so boring that it felt like it was just an outline. I'll work on it later.