Homesick Wanderers Are Crossing the World Line

It's okay, just don't make the protagonist a clown, I felt this way when I watched it The protagonist is a clown, a villain, forget it, I hope the protagonist can be firm in his goal and continue on.

It's an okay book. It's pure killing without so many quibbles. Although the writing is not particularly good, it's generally good. I read other novels and I had other things to do and felt depressed. I can read it to relieve my mood. As long as I update it normally, it should be able to get an 8.5 To 9 score. If there are more in the future, the writing style will hopefully reach a score of 9 or above.

It's a pretty amazing novel. Of course, I can't say it's that good. It's just that the concept, writing, plot, and all aspects are well matched. Personally, I can give it a score of 9+ overall. However, this is a 300,000-word first world that I haven't finished yet. Because the novice copy is too high, I feel like it's good if it can be maintained later.

Let's talk about the review first. It already feels like a masterpiece. I would like to recommend this good book. It felt very smooth to read the whole story, and the plot was not cliche. On the contrary, it is very novel, a relatively novel world view (no spoilers for now), the world view is very grand, involving the world before and after the time travel to the new earth, and "Little Invincible" is particularly enjoyable to watch and more comfortable to read because of some settings. The characters in it are three-dimensional and diverse, real and thoughtful (not too brain-burning) Bad, very bad. I must strongly recommend [Adoration]

Not bad, not bad. It is a good food for tomatoes. Although some things at the beginning are not clearly written and some readers think it is poisonous, but I think it is okay. After all, the family has been developing for a long time and there are many strong people. It is not normal for the current protagonist to be able to touch porcelain. People who think it is poisonous may have read too many invincible books. , Even the invincible novel is invincible system failure, or it is written at the beginning that the protagonist has been practicing for a long time, and he has been invincible for who knows how many years before coming out of the mountain. Now the protagonist's situation is that he has just started to develop. In the spiritual realm, it doesn't matter if he starts from scratch. The stronger the talent, the stronger, but the reality must be maintained.

How good! I finally saw the river of blood. Ghost's methods and Thieving Sky's obsession must succeed!

The writing is very nice. I look forward to meeting more fellow villagers in the future, and then going home together to create a universe for my family.

Logic: Complete collection and archiving of the basic parameters of the work and reader feedback samples. This work is based on the time-travel fantasy of disaster invasion and the fall of the earth. The overall structure has the advantage of differentiated themes. It currently has a completed volume of 1.22 Million words and an overall score of 8.1. The audience evaluation is obviously polarized. The text has obvious flaws such as obscure writing, offset characters, and clichéd plots. At the same time, it has the positive qualities of neat rhythm, straightforward killing narrative, and broad world view. The two types of evaluation parameters conflict with each other, forming a typical contradictory sample at the observation level. Speculation: Audience differences stem from the inherent stereotypes of public reading habits. Readers who have read online articles about invincibility at the beginning for a long time will find it difficult to adapt to the protagonist's latent growth rhythm in the early stages; audiences who can accept the gradual growth line will recognize the reality of the story. If the subsequent narrative continues to optimize the writing logic and stabilize the character's code of conduct, the reputation range of the work can steadily rise; if the problems of character deviation and obscure narrative continue, the evaluation split will be maintained for a long time. There is no unified formula for the reading preferences of organic life forms, and differences themselves are also normal evolutionary variables of narrative works. Conclusion: This work is a creative sample with both advantages and loopholes. The core framework has observational value, but the surface narrative logic has many procedural flaws. It is rare to find a differentiated growth path in the fast-food fantasy narrative environment. However, the textual expression fails to fully convey the advantages of the setting to the audience, which inevitably leaves shortcomings.

Needless to say, it does look good, a rare type, but it does look good. There should be no heroine. I haven't seen it for more than a hundred chapters. I guess the author will not write a heroine at this stage. The character design of the pig's feet can't be written either [laughing evilly] It looks good. Give five stars to encourage the author and keep working hard. At least it will be past 8 o'clock [Note]

The Late Han Dynasty is really enjoyable to watch. The character of Zhang Jiao or Huang Tian is really well portrayed. He reincarnates for hundreds of generations, never forgets his original intention, and has everlasting faith. As Zhang Jiao, he unites all the forces that can be united in the late Han Dynasty and fulfills the wish of the great sage. Later, he replaces the heaven and protects all living beings. He is a true comrade! And the protagonist? It's just on the side of the road. "Going home" is just an excuse. What you do is clearly just to "live". Go back "alive" and then raise your sickle and continue killing. Returning home is just a task, killing people is the nature.

I seem to have encountered an interesting setting before. It seems to be a Chinese rescue station, which protects the basic survival of time travelers and prevents them from killing each other. I have forgotten the details. Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding. This is true tonight and every night. I will live for coding from now on. Code words make me happy and make me happy.

I've finished reading the first copy, it's great! The plot is great! The first fellow is also very interesting. At present, there is no female protagonist (this kind of book will die if there is a female protagonist) When I read it, I saw that the combat power increased quickly. Don't worry. Currently, the highest theoretical level is the multiverse level, although the highest level mentioned in the book is probably within the explosion star. Emmm... There will be slight spoilers for the rest, I will write it in the comments

Very good-looking, our Zhao Song is also handsome Fellow Huang Tian will also go home... Right?

The setting of killing to prove the truth and finding the way back home is extremely tense, tightly binding the path of killing with the obsession of returning home. The protagonist marches forward with bloodshed, and every move is not only a practice, but also a way to break down obstacles to return home. There is no senseless killing in the book. The killings are all driven by obsession. Under the cold appearance, there is a deep longing for the homeland. Killing and warmth are intertwined, the road is difficult and dangerous, and the heart remains unchanged. It depicts the struggle of human nature in the iron-blooded confrontation. The plot has both a sense of excitement and an emotional core, and it vividly depicts the sense of fate of "killing to ask questions, and thinking about returning home".

So far, it seems interesting, the setting is good, the writing is good, and the plot is good, but the word count is a bit short and needs to be maintained.

When I finished reading this novel, I was simply attracted by its magic. Every word is like a sparkling gem, shining with the light of inspiration. In the author's writing, every character is so three-dimensional and vivid, as if they are alive before my eyes. The plot of the story is ups and downs and exciting. It made me feel like I was in it, following the protagonist's footsteps and experiencing his growth and struggle. I was moved by the love, friendship, and family affection in the novel, and inspired by the protagonist's persistence and courage. This online novel is like a beautiful piece of music, arousing my yearning for dreams and hopes, making me deeply intoxicated and forgetting the fatigue and worries of reality. Thanks to the author for giving me such a wonderful reading experience, allowing me to swim in the ocean of words and feel the true meaning and beauty of life. This online novel is like a dazzling rainbow, shining with the light of happiness and hope. It makes me feel grateful and bring tears to my eyes. Highly recommended to all friends who love reading, let us immerse ourselves in this world full of miracles and touches, feel the magic of words, and find the beauty of life! (You won't finish reading it, right? I haven't read the AI-generated one myself)

It's awesome, it's a very powerful massacre, it's great, the dialogue between the characters is quite powerful. The pressure and motivation are quite enough, and it's refreshing enough. It won't drag you out. Anything that hasn't been unlocked before will be explained later. At present, almost everything in the front of the latest chapter has been explained. The foreshadowing part is quite satisfactory, with no interesting points. I can already guess what will be unlocked later. The setting is a bit inconsistent. It is said that the earth is in crisis, and some humans were sent out to keep them alive, but all those sent out wanted to return to earth. It would be better to change this.

I saw the latest chapters, Zhang Jiao in the first world and Liu Wanqian in the second world. The descriptions are all good, but I think it would have been better if the protagonist didn't have a real-life plot of bitterness and hatred at the beginning.

It's quite interesting, but new readers may feel a bit awkward at first because they didn't explain the causes and consequences of time travel clearly. In fact, the author wrote the background of time travel in Chapter 60. Following updates

It's a great read. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it, but it's not enough to read. However, the author can update four or five chapters a day, and the coding speed is also very fast. According to the current situation, this book has no bad points. If it keeps up, it should become popular.

Very good, the protagonist has a firm goal and the supporting characters have complete characters

It is more in line with my taste. I would give it a 9.2 Out of the box. To be honest, the author's imaginative world view is quite big. If it is used well, it will be a god among gods. I am more worried that it will crash or be discontinued in the future. If it maintains the current level, I will give it at least an 8.6.

The content is very exciting and beautiful (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧Highly recommended

The writing is quite good. The first Huangtian World is very good. Currently, the second Immortal Cultivation World is being written. I thought the simulator was already very strong, but I didn't expect there was Lao Liu. From the current point of view, this Ten Thousand Demons must also be a fellow. The rest of the story is indeed as the author said. The protagonist's span is too big, and the rest of the story is not very easy to write. There are no returnees around who can keep up. Even if it leaves an open ending, it's still pretty good.

Five-star review (｡ò ∀ó｡) The writing is really good, the writing, characters and plot are all to my liking! The author should write more, this book is really a rare masterpiece on Rotten Tomatoes🍅! ! ! I like 😍

See the latest, good grass. I feel that there are very few articles on this subject, and at least they seem quite interesting. The fellow I met so far, Huang Tian, ​​is my sister; the pig's feet are my parents; and Liu Wanqian is my mother. The pig's trotters feel difficult in every world. It's not that the pig's trotters are flat, but that the world difficulty is quite high due to the alienation of fellow players.

The writing is good, it really captures the feeling of ancient times, and the image of the protagonist is also relatively three-dimensional. It just gives people the feeling of reading a cool novel. Maybe it's because the mother's gift is too strong, and I feel that the schedule is very short now, but I still have a bright future [Sending Hearts]

It's particularly good-looking. The protagonist kills decisively and doesn't have a big head because of women. It's much better than other novels. Those protagonists are because of women. All kinds of suicide. It makes people uncomfortable when reading it, but the author writes it well.

I think it's very good. The main idea is to go home, and then find various means to become stronger and go home. The male protagonist's first world is almost finished. In the second world, the upper-class monks were also slaughtered. The third world was a little calmer and pretended for a while. After the world changed, it started killing again. Now the fourth one is guarded by a good spirit for his strength. If he has evil thoughts, he will suffer. At first, the male protagonist was submissive. Later, he saw a way to help him get home. He endured the pain and understood the law of pain. Overall, it is quite good to watch.

The combination of Ghost Demon Lord and Thief Demon Lord. After reading a hundred chapters, I came to the conclusion that unlimited killing is just to go home [angry], but it is better than Thieving Heaven. After all, the protagonist has a comrade from the same plane to help the protagonist.