The Outcast: Disciple of Mount Longhu, I Crush All of Quanzhen

The writing is good, and it is obvious that the author has dabbled in Taoist knowledge, such as "High Gong" In terms of writing, the overall fluency is high, but the timeline sometimes jumps too fast. Since this is the first time I write a book, it deserves full marks. In terms of content, the protagonist is still a little impatient after experiencing the storm, and his spiritual practice is not too reflected on the one hand, and is a bit immature. However, the description of Zuo Ruotong in this article is realistic and vivid, and depicts the power of an immortal. At least in the eyes of an animation and semi-comic party, the free and easy "free descendants" are really immortal, open-minded and cheerful The author also has a deep understanding of the world under one person, but there are some small details. It is not easy to write such a slow-paced novel in this big environment (it feels like the author is obviously a little anxious later). The rhythm is well controlled, high-quality, and readable. Visually, it can reach around 9.3

New authors are good and will take their first work very seriously. After reading it in one go, I feel that it shouldn't be this score. Although there are some design problems, the sincerity is beyond words. I have my own ideas about that era, and the flaws are not concealed.

This book is well written, with both advantages and disadvantages. The disadvantage is that the author is a newbie, so there will be some problems with the writing style and the design of some plots. The update time will be relatively late, but the overall feeling of the novel is good. The advantage is that the author's attitude towards books is the most serious among the many books I have read. Basically every sentence has a reply. The plot has been changed. It has not been changed as other reviews said. It all follows the comics. Especially the chapter on the Trinity Gate, this book is completely different from the traditional plot of rescuing Zuo Ruotong and making the Three Heavens reach the sky. The book accepts the incomprehensible fact and pays more attention to the future development of Trinity. Come on author, take good care of you. I forgot to mention that the portrayal of the original characters in this book is not OOC at all. The character and work style are the same as in the original work. Moreover, the author has also made annotations to facilitate readers to understand based on the original comics. There are too many novels now, and they have been changed beyond recognition under the name of a fan. If the fan work doesn't have the original plot, then I might as well watch the original.

This book is well written and makes up for all the shortcomings in the original work. The author is also very serious, and it can be seen that the author knows the original work very well. And it's not like other fans who blindly change the plot. If you can watch the original plot, who would watch the fanfic? Nowadays, many one-person fan stories are outrageous and have nothing to do with one person, only a name. Those in the book reviews said it didn't change the plot, and I don't understand why they said that. Have the people who said these words really read the original work? One reviewer said it was good, just change some content, and the overall plot trend will be completely different. According to some people's understanding, so-and-so must be alive, or so-and-so must be dead before the plot can be changed? God.

The protagonist has feelings for family and country, and it is logical that he will kill the Japanese in the Northeast later. He does not become stronger just for the sake of pleasure, but to protect the world. It is recommended to read, it is worth recommending!

7 Points is really too little. Visual inspection is about 9-9.2 Servings. The plot also has ups and downs as well as brotherly love, parent-teacher love. Only when I wrote about the period of anti-Japanese war, I felt that I didn't write well and felt unfamiliar. But overall it's not that low

I am not boasting, but the people here are all majestic, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in their work, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stones, miraculous craftsmanship, deafening. He is enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, he can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, he is surrounded by thousands of miles, the eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger strides, he is heroic and majestic, he is in a commanding position, he is benevolent and moral, he is charming and selfless, he looks like Pan An, he is more talented than Song Yu, and a pear tree weighs a begonia. , You have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you are virtuous, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful view of the mountains, you have high sentiments, you have great virtues, and you have immeasurable merits, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have a good mind, you have a good heart, you have a good heart, you have a lot of joy. Lan, a person with lofty ideals and a benevolent person, the White Crane in the Cloud is in his prime, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix chick, unparalleled in the world, an unparalleled hero, extraordinary, a branch in Guilin, a man of cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, a piece of jade in Kunshan, unrivaled.

From the current point of view, there is no poisonous point, but sometimes the change in the protagonist's character is a bit artificial, but it may also be my own fault, and it does not affect the overall plot, so it doesn't matter, cheers, author

This rewrite of the Trinity Sect is the best I've ever seen. It's not a complete Golden Finger attack, it's a straight-forward triple-bend, and it basically doesn't change the original plot development, but a little change makes the whole incident smoother. The leader of the Zuo Sect still dies, but he doesn't die with guilt and regret. There are still countless casualties in the Trinity Sect, but the fire of the Trinity Sect remains, which is good.

At present, I have about 60 chapters. It has been relatively mysterious recently. I have read a lot of similar works recently. It can be said that this is the best one I have seen so far. There is no other one. You can even read it as a prequel to Under One Person. It is not an exaggeration. Looking at it so far, I don't see any poisonous spots (I haven't seen any at this point anyway) The protagonist is a human being, and there are no messy and bizarre operations like other novels. This is really rare in Little Tomato. This is so weird. Some novels have three views and some operations. Do you really doubt that this is a human being? As for the extraordinary system, it is basically a limited expansion of the original system, and the innovation is completely within the framework of the original work (it seems like this at the moment). When I read some other novels, my imagination was too wide and I just wrote whatever came to mind, which led to inconsistencies, frequent bugs and other problems. It's not that it's not good, it's just that it's too big for most people to control. Without a strict and clear framework, it's easy to fail. The rhythm of the writing is good, the story points, the plot, and the length are arranged reasonably. I really write what I should write, and I don't ignore those trivial things that shouldn't be written. In short, this is a serious prequel to One Man, a work that is completely above the standard. When I read some other novels, I basically skimmed over some chapters at a glance, but I read this one more carefully.