One Person: Become a Disciple of Longhu Mountain, I Will Promote Quanxing

The writing is good, and it is obvious that the author has dabbled in Taoist knowledge, such as "High Gong" In terms of writing, the overall fluency is high, but the timeline sometimes jumps too fast. Since this is the first time I write a book, it deserves full marks. In terms of content, the protagonist is still a little impatient after experiencing the storm, and his spiritual practice is not too reflected on the one hand, and is a bit immature. However, the description of Zuo Ruotong in this article is realistic and vivid, and depicts the power of an immortal. At least in the eyes of an animation and semi-comic party, the free and easy "free descendants" are really immortal, open-minded and cheerful The author also has a deep understanding of the world under one person, but there are some small details. It is not easy to write such a slow-paced novel in this big environment (it feels like the author is obviously a little anxious later). The rhythm is well controlled, high-quality, and readable. Visually, it can reach around 9.3

This book is well written, with both advantages and disadvantages. The disadvantage is that the author is a newbie, so there will be some problems with the writing style and the design of some plots. The update time will be relatively late, but the overall feeling of the novel is good. The advantage is that the author's attitude towards books is the most serious among the many books I have read. Basically every sentence has a reply. The plot has been changed. It has not been changed as other reviews said. It all follows the comics. Especially the chapter on the Trinity Gate, this book is completely different from the traditional plot of rescuing Zuo Ruotong and making the Three Heavens reach the sky. The book accepts the incomprehensible fact and pays more attention to the future development of Trinity. Come on author, take good care of you. I forgot to mention that the portrayal of the original characters in this book is not OOC at all. The character and work style are the same as in the original work. Moreover, the author has also made annotations to facilitate readers to understand based on the original comics. There are too many novels now, and they have been changed beyond recognition under the name of a fan. If the fan work doesn't have the original plot, then I might as well watch the original.

New authors are good and will take their first work very seriously. After reading it in one go, I feel that it shouldn't be this score. Although there are some design problems, the sincerity is beyond words. I have my own ideas about that era, and the flaws are not concealed.

This book is well written and makes up for all the shortcomings in the original work. The author is also very serious, and it can be seen that the author knows the original work very well. And it's not like other fans who blindly change the plot. If you can watch the original plot, who would watch the fanfic? Nowadays, many one-person fan stories are outrageous and have nothing to do with one person, only a name. Those in the book reviews said it didn't change the plot, and I don't understand why they said that. Have the people who said these words really read the original work? One reviewer said it was good, just change some content, and the overall plot trend will be completely different. According to some people's understanding, so-and-so must be alive, or so-and-so must be dead before the plot can be changed? God.

The protagonist has feelings for family and country, and it is logical that he will kill the Japanese in the Northeast later. He does not become stronger just for the sake of pleasure, but to protect the world. It is recommended to read, it is worth recommending!

7 Points is really too little. Visual inspection is about 9-9.2 Servings. The plot also has ups and downs as well as brotherly love, parent-teacher love. Only when I wrote about the period of anti-Japanese war, I felt that I didn't write well and felt unfamiliar. But overall it's not that low

I am not boasting, but the people here are all majestic, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in their work, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stones, miraculous craftsmanship, deafening. He is enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, he can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, he is surrounded by thousands of miles, the eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger strides, he is heroic and majestic, he is in a commanding position, he is benevolent and moral, he is charming and selfless, he looks like Pan An, he is more talented than Song Yu, and a pear tree weighs a begonia. , You have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you are virtuous, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful view of the mountains, you have high sentiments, you have great virtues, and you have immeasurable merits, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have a good mind, you have a good heart, you have a good heart, you have a lot of joy. Lan, a person with lofty ideals and a benevolent person, the White Crane in the Cloud is in his prime, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix chick, unparalleled in the world, an unparalleled hero, extraordinary, a branch in Guilin, a man of cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, a piece of jade in Kunshan, unrivaled.

The overall writing is very good, the writing is smooth, and the characters are very vivid. The author has definitely put in the effort. The most important thing is that the plot arrangement is relaxed and moderate, and the overall look is very comfortable.

This rewrite of the Trinity Sect is the best I've ever seen. It's not a complete Golden Finger attack, it's a straight-forward triple-bend, and it basically doesn't change the original plot development, but a little change makes the whole incident smoother. The leader of the Zuo Sect still dies, but he doesn't die with guilt and regret. There are still countless casualties in the Trinity Sect, but the fire of the Trinity Sect remains, which is good.

From the current point of view, there is no poisonous point, but sometimes the change in the protagonist's character is a bit artificial, but it may also be my own fault, and it does not affect the overall plot, so it doesn't matter, cheers, author

At present, I have about 60 chapters. It has been relatively mysterious recently. I have read a lot of similar works recently. It can be said that this is the best one I have seen so far. There is no other one. You can even read it as a prequel to Under One Person. It is not an exaggeration. Looking at it so far, I don't see any poisonous spots (I haven't seen any at this point anyway) The protagonist is a human being, and there are no messy and bizarre operations like other novels. This is really rare in Little Tomato. This is so weird. Some novels have three views and some operations. Do you really doubt that this is a human being? As for the extraordinary system, it is basically a limited expansion of the original system, and the innovation is completely within the framework of the original work (it seems like this at the moment). When I read some other novels, my imagination was too wide and I just wrote whatever came to mind, which led to inconsistencies, frequent bugs and other problems. It's not that it's not good, it's just that it's too big for most people to control. Without a strict and clear framework, it's easy to fail. The rhythm of the writing is good, the story points, the plot, and the length are arranged reasonably. I really write what I should write, and I don't ignore those trivial things that shouldn't be written. In short, this is a serious prequel to One Man, a work that is completely above the standard. When I read some other novels, I basically skimmed over some chapters at a glance, but I read this one more carefully.

Please give me points. This book by the author must have a bright future. Even if you haven't read Under One Person, you will definitely be able to understand it. Come on [love] [love] [love]

The writing is very good, and the personal feelings of family and country are reflected. A rare piece of fine writing among foreign persimmons!

The writing style is excellent, there are no messy emotional lines, the protagonist's IQ and strength are both online, and there are no third-party descriptions or bad jokes. I personally feel that it is in the top three among Tomato fans.

The author has chosen the insertion points in this book very well. Although there may be a lot of foreshadowing and anti-Japanese content, there are corresponding climaxes. Overall, you can read it slowly👍

It's very beautiful. It's considered a high-quality product among tomatoes. You can take a look.

The protagonist kills Japanese soldiers along the way, which makes it enjoyable to read and logical. It blends well with the plot of Under One Person, come on!

Fine. It touches people, not like Long Aotian's novice novel.

The logic is clear, the story is complete, and the feelings of family, country, and world give this book a high purpose. The protagonist in the book is not the kind who becomes arrogant after gaining power.

This is the best one-person fanfic I've ever seen in Tomato, it's worth watching

It's a good book worth reading. It's very addictive. The rhythm is very good. I don't like the ones that are really awesome at the beginning. This kind of book is perfect for enjoying and reading slowly. Among so many fans, I'm the only one who doesn't mess around. The main plot follows one another in time so that you can be immersed in it. It's too detailed. The protagonist's creation is very suitable for that era and has a strong sense of immersion. I don't like the kind of modern brainless pretense. All in all, it is definitely a book that will give you a new look after reading so many brainless articles.

Love and justice The beacon smoke in Liao River is a warning, and Hu Qi peeps his spear. The dust is dim and the people in the northern land are weeping, and the disaster is accumulating for the country in the east. The senior disciple of Xuanmen resigned from the dragon and tiger, and the three-foot green sword swept away the bandit chieftain. He can only turn the tide and eliminate the national calamity, but he will not teach Jiuyi to fall into China.

The quality is very high, it is not AI, there are no poisonous points at present, and it looks very comfortable. It can be seen that the whole plot is very thoughtful, but I don't know why some words and sentences have the feeling of AI. The overall look seems to be hand-made, and the AI polishing does not look like [face covering] The aliens come out later and I can't stand it.

The writing is okay, let's take a look first

Great book! ! ! Especially the kid who was killed later used his real name. This is worth 5 stars.

It feels pretty good, but the introduction of the family lineage in the first few chapters made me a little stressed (uncomfortable), but after reading it, I felt it was okay. In those days, family lineage succession was considered common sense, so keep going.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will work harder.

The protagonist traveled a hundred years ago, can he be considered a "post-00s generation"? [Make faces] Senior Brother Zhang Zhiwei, a master of martial arts and a master of both life and life [I learned it] You might as well be patient and see [Grieved] [Hold]

It's a very good book. The rating shouldn't be so low.

It's pretty good, neither too fast nor too slow, and the pace is just right, which is very suitable for a slow person like me.