The White-Haired Sword Immortal Who Imprisoned Me Is My Grand-Disciple!

I understand, one person cannot exist in the same time and space at the same time, so the protagonist after a thousand years asks his apprentice to kill him, so that the previous protagonist can go to a thousand years later, complete the time loop and change history. Why did the disciple travel to a thousand years ago? Because the disciple possessed his consciousness and could see the protagonist. The disciple was born thousands of years ago, and he can only possess his disciple and time travel, but cannot travel in person. I guess these are plots set up by the protagonist in order to redeem past regrets, or for some other deep-seated reason.

The emotional line can beat 90% of fantasy novels on Tomatoes. Come on, big brother who writes royal novels. I can't stand it anymore. If you come to Xinjin, you will find various problems with this book. The writing is stiff and the characters are unnatural. The more characters appear, the more you will find that the more you can't stand it, because the author's writing power ends here.

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Unique setting and theme. However, the theme of time and space has always been difficult to write. The logic is okay at the moment. It depends on how to deal with the relationship between the present and the future in the future. I give you the good reviews first.

A good book. The author handles the relationship between the present and the future very well, preventing the present protagonist from becoming a substitute for the future protagonist (actually it has always been the same person, but he has lost his memory). The author writes very well, keep it up 👍👍👍

Very good, it has the potential to rival or even surpass the Hehuanzong book. The author must grasp how the two worlds are connected together and make it look natural? Then add color and sublimation on the basis of nature. At present, I think there is still a little bit of foreshadowing. A few more foreshadowings would have made it even more intriguing.

Damn, it's so well written. Not much else to say, just read the latest chapter from the beginning in one go (Chapter 75). The author will update it quickly. It's not enough, it's really not enough😢 Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

I haven't seen such high-quality articles on Tomato for a long time. I'm just curious about how the two timelines will merge together later on. This book is worthy of the number of people reading it. It has just been published, and it has already been read by tens of thousands of people before it has even been rated. It must not be too sharp, so I will finish it honestly [laughing]

It's worth a look, the setting is interesting, but the rebirth is too convoluted, and it drags down the structure. It's okay to switch to two independent timelines, but the key thing is to miss the butterfly effect.

Daily gold digging, I thought it was because I didn't like reading novels anymore, but it turned out to be a book shortage. I was led in by the title of the book, as is the case with many Tomato books. I read 20 chapters in ten lines at a time, and found that it was not history but gold, and then I read it again word by word. The book is not a systematic text. The author does not write about the road to becoming stronger. Instead, he writes about traveling through time and becoming stronger at the beginning, and then commits suicide and starts over again because of the inherited curse or something. Therefore, although the protagonist does not understand, the inherited memories can be regarded as the original him. ' Green, snatching his first time, it depends on the inherited memory. It doesn't count as disappearing. How did the author write it after the fusion? ), There are two worlds, one stops after the time travel, and the other is still running regardless of whether it comes back or after time travel. The protagonist is really blessed. He has picked up so many women, and both Senior Sister Lei and Senior Sister Xiao Lei have taken advantage of them. But I like them both. For me, the book is indeed worthy of praise, but I still hope that the author will not poison it later.