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I understand, one person cannot exist in the same time and space at the same time, so the protagonist from a thousand years later asks his apprentice to kill him, so that the previous protagonist can go to a thousand years later, complete the time loop and change history. Why did the disciple travel to a thousand years ago? Because the disciple possessed his consciousness and could see the protagonist. The disciple was born thousands of years ago, and he can only possess his disciple and time travel, but cannot travel in person. I guess these are plots set up by the protagonist in order to redeem past regrets, or for some other deep-seated reason.

The emotional line can beat 90% of fantasy novels on Tomatoes. Come on, big brother who writes royal novels. I can't stand it anymore. If you come to Xinjin, you will find various problems with this book. The writing is stiff and the characters are unnatural. The more characters appear, the more you will find that the more you can't stand it, because the author's writing power ends here.

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Unique setting and theme. However, the theme of time and space has always been difficult to write. The logic is okay at the moment. It depends on how to deal with the relationship between the present and the future in the future. I give you the good reviews first.

A good book. The author handles the relationship between the present and the future very well, preventing the present protagonist from becoming a substitute for the future protagonist (actually it has always been the same person, but he has lost his memory). The author writes very well, keep it up [like][like][like]

Very good, it has the potential to rival or even surpass the Hehuanzong book. The author must grasp how the two worlds are connected together and make it look natural? Then add color and sublimation on the basis of nature. At present, I think there is still a little bit of foreshadowing. A few more foreshadowings would have made it even more intriguing.

I haven't seen such high-quality articles on Tomato for a long time. I'm just curious about how the two timelines will merge together later on. This book is worthy of the number of people reading it. It has just been published, and it has already been read by tens of thousands of people before it has even been rated. It must not be too sharp, so I will finish it honestly [laughing]

Damn, it's so well written. Not much else to say, just read the latest chapter from the beginning (Chapter 75) The author will update it soon. It's not enough. It's really not enough [crying] Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

It's worth a look, the setting is interesting, but the rebirth is too convoluted, and it drags down the structure. It's okay to switch to two independent timelines, but the key thing is to miss the butterfly effect.

Daily gold digging, I thought it was because I didn't like reading novels anymore, but it turned out to be a book shortage. I was led in by the title of the book, as is the case with many Tomato books. I read 20 chapters in ten lines at a glance, and found that it was not history but gold, and then I read it word by word again. The book is not a systematic text. The author does not write about the road to becoming stronger. Instead, he writes about traveling through time and becoming stronger at the beginning, and then commits suicide and starts over again because of the inherited curse or something. Therefore, although the protagonist does not understand, the inherited memories can be regarded as the original him (the companions around him will definitely have to travel to the fake world, but Senior Sister Xiao Lei knows that the future "she" will have to eat it, and she can't stand it, feeling that "she" ' Green, snatching his first time, it depends on the inherited memory. It doesn't count as disappearing. How did the author write it after the fusion? ), There are two worlds, one stops after the time travel, and the other is still running regardless of whether it comes back or after time travel. The protagonist is really blessed. He has picked up so many women, and both the big and small senior sisters have taken advantage of them, but I like them both. For me, the book is indeed worthy of praise, but I still hope that the author will not poison it later.

The story is told well, and the writing is not bad. It belongs to the food + category. It's just that the battle scenes were a bit weak and wordy. The only thing I skipped in this book was the two chapters where the three factions besieged the Tianjian Sect after accepting the disciple A Li. I would say that the author should simply write the battle scenes briefly and neatly, and focus on writing the plot and the description of the interaction between the characters. You can use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. Our reading experience will also be better

Very interesting setting and good plot But Senior Sister Lei is so pitiful, I was obviously the one who came first [crying][crying][crying][crying], I really like Senior Sister Lei [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I have read Chapter 71. Novels related to time and cause and effect always have their own poisonous points. It depends on how the author handles the relationship between the male and female protagonists in the two timelines of "present" and "future". I hope there are no poisonous points. Come on, author! [Sending Hearts]

Very good, cheers for the author [Like][Like][Like]

In the early stage, I was dismissive and almost gave up. After I started to travel, I can only say that it is awesome. Every time I came back, the plot suddenly became complicated and confusing, and it became very deep. [Like] It has written its own characteristics.

This is a good book. There is no doubt that it can be regarded as one of the better ones. Although there are some small flaws that I can't point out, the overall flaws are not concealed.

It's so damn good-looking! ! ! ! !

Come on author, I believe it will be popular

Okay, but I wrote it a bit quickly, and many settings were written but not expanded.

The world view is quite interesting, but the plot develops too fast and the world view is revealed too quickly. Chapter 103 is almost to the 7th level, and it should be finished at most 200 chapters.

It's quite exciting and novel. Generally speaking, it doesn't have too many poisonous points. The setting of all members being reborn is quite novel. I don't know why, but the plot control after Chapter 90 is a bit weird. I don't know how to put it. It's like the plot looks a bit messy.

It's super beautiful. I insisted on reading the first part and became addicted [Adoration][Adoration]

Very nice, I don't understand the terminology, but it suits my taste

He's an escapist protagonist, he's being created now. You can even read a little bit of the character of the suffering master.

So far I have read Chapter 125: 1. The protagonist ate it, but it didn't nourish his stomach. 2. The author is working hard to fill in the pits, and the main line is also unfolding 3. The logic is very smooth. Although there are occasional riddlers, but according to the work "The author has a good character and will fill in the gaps later." The author is awesome!

The content starting from chapter 58 is really interesting.

This would be better if it were written longer. The plot of one hundred chapters feels like a thousand chapters.

It's really a masterpiece on Tomato

This book is really good, keep up the good work, author!

Not bad, a very good setting. The author can create a setting based on the normal timeline and write another book based on the normal timeline.