Unemployed************

Let's talk about the shortcomings first. At the beginning, the online novel has a strong novice flavor. Later, the plot advances too fast. Sometimes the emotions are pushed to another exciting point before the emotions can catch up. However, as I read along the way, the impression got better and better. The author's world view is very broad, and the descriptions of emotions and battles are average to above average. A cool hook is enough to keep you hooked and keep you reading. In summary, it is a masterpiece worth watching. However, it would be better if the pace was slowed down a little and more emotions between characters were portrayed. And maybe the flavor of online writing can be refined and refined? Try to learn from both the refined and the popular? The above is just my humble opinion and is for reference only.

Cheer yourself up

Didn't the first few chapters simply replace "I" with "him"? It looks really awkward, but the later chapters are much better, and the descriptions of the battles are pretty good 😂, come on.

Hold on, teacher, I still like watching it

Nice! Come on, author!

Come on, the author's setting is quite big, although I feel like I don't have the perseverance to finish it.

Yes, the author writes it very carefully and the characters are full of character

Currently in good condition

The pacing is very stable, the content advances a little too fast, the writing is average, and the plot is relatively novel, but it feels like a novice. In short, go for it.

A very good jobless reincarnation fanfic

It's beautiful. I love watching it. Come on, teacher.

Overall it's good

There are some shortcomings, but it's okay [blowing kiss]

The plot development and changes are reasonable, and Rudy is more loving. The storyline has foreshadowing and daily life is warm. It is worth watching.