Mushoku Tensei: A Poem of Sword and Sorcery

Let's talk about the shortcomings first. At the beginning, the online novel has a strong novice flavor. Later, the plot advances too fast. Sometimes the emotions are pushed to another exciting point before the emotions can catch up. However, as I read along the way, the impression got better and better. The author's world view is very broad, and the descriptions of emotions and battles are average to above average. A cool hook is enough to keep you hooked and keep you reading. In summary, it is a masterpiece worth watching. However, it would be better if the pace was slowed down a little and more emotions between characters were portrayed. And maybe the flavor of online writing can be refined and refined? Try to learn from both the refined and the popular? The above is just my humble opinion and is for reference only.

Cheer yourself up

The actual look and feel is okay. The main problem is that the plot progresses too fast, the writing is very novice, and the age issue can be blurred. Just write how many years in the Ankylosaurus calendar. Here you can refer to other authors who write about unemployed people. The text is basically a period of time, and it is impossible to tell which period it is. Then you can add more daily life, extra chapters, and the main line. You can drag it out first, otherwise it will feel weird. The time issue can be changed from beginning to end, otherwise it will look very messy.

Didn't the first few chapters simply replace "I" with "him"? It looks really awkward, but the later chapters are much better, and the descriptions of the battles are pretty good 😂, come on.

Hold on, teacher, I still like watching it

Come on, the author's setting is quite big, although I feel like I don't have the perseverance to finish it.

Nice! Come on, author!

Currently in good condition

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Yes, the author writes it very carefully and the characters are full of character