The Soul Traveled to Another World and Served as a Furnace for a Young Master

It's very well written, thank you to the author. Regarding CP, I think if you want to have multiple male protagonists, it is best to write it down clearly from the beginning. Now the title and introduction are quite 1v1. Now it doesn't feel good to add other male protagonists to become CP. Of course, you can also appropriately describe the emotional entanglements between the male and female couples, but don't develop it into censorship.

Pretty good? There is no routine, there is a plot, the fantasy high-martiality dual male protagonist Liangcao is very unexpected when BL Zhanwu is mostly martial arts, and there is no embarrassing slap-in-the-face plot like Long Aotian in the male channel in ancient times. The division of levels is a bit blurry. For example, in the later stage of martial arts, he is practicing body training. Whether it's a martial artist or a martial arts master, I can write a separate chapter that doesn't belong to the main text and talk about realms. I can't see any emotional scenes at the moment, but at least it's not the kind of hasty love at first sight, or some fantasy dual male protagonists who get married right away. . . Summary: The future is promising, but the introduction may be too concise. You can also add more attack and reception attributes.

Like, step by step, double cleansing, running in both directions, growing in love over time, upgrading... I don't have a single catch.

It's well written and beautiful, which is rare in fantasy novels about two men. At first glance, I thought it was an old-fashioned male protagonist, the kind of cold and serious guy, but actually he is not. And it is obvious that the two male protagonists did not feminize the male protagonist.

The character design is relatively classic strong vs weak, but after reading the first few chapters, I found an obvious problem. The author's oral habit is too serious. There are too many particles such as "la", "bai" and "ba", which do not fit the character and lower the overall impression. I guess many people are turned away because of this. It will be better if the language is more classical and standardized.

I've watched half of it now, and I don't feel anything out of the ordinary. Although it's a drama, the two male protagonists are more like a relationship where they help each other and improve each other. It feels pretty good, with a plot flow but a lot of emotional drama. Let's continue reading later and rate it first to support it. After chasing for a while, it was 1v1. There were many single arrows on the two protagonists, but both of them were very loyal to each other. They were not ambiguous with other people at all, and the boundaries were very clear. Then, the author has some oral habits in writing. Sometimes I find it verbose, but sometimes I find it funny. It depends on personal preference. In addition, there are many sub-CPs in this article, to protect those who don't like sub-CPs. Most of the sub-CPs in the early stage are unimportant supporting roles and have little impact on the plot, so I think it is harmless. However, now I feel that the second male lead who used to be the main point of view will probably have a sub-CP? The next dozens of chapters are also with the two of them, and the proportion is relatively large. The most important thing is that the second male character liked Feng before. If I want to arrange a cp for him, it will give me a balanced feeling. And when he still likes Feng, the author wrote that he always felt something happened with that person in the secret realm, and felt uncomfortable. However, the plot is enjoyable and not draggy, especially the upgrades and fights are pretty good.

This book is quite good. The development of the plot and the emotional development of the two male protagonists are smooth. Each update stops at the place where curiosity is stimulated. Everything else is good but there are few updates [love] [love] [love] [love]

My dear mother, do you know how it feels when you secretly listen to a novel at work and can't hold back your laughter? From time to time, you make hiccup, hiccup, hiccup noises [cover your face], which saves your life. I immediately recognize the author as my elder brother. It's been a long time since I've read such an awesome novel. I just print it out🖨️ and read it again and again📖

Can see Although he is a strong and handsome BL But there is a feeling of a muscular man shouting "I am a straight man of steel" and jumping into the arms of another muscular man and acting out a romantic drama [face covering] It would not be inappropriate for the male protagonist to change his gender and become a woman disguised as a man.

The writing is very, very good. It seems boring at the beginning, but it is absolutely wonderful at the end. I also spent a whole day to tie it up with him. Judging from my reading time, I can tell that it is very good. The author also updates three times a day. It is absolutely not a loss in investment, and the world view is also It's quite big, and it's really very good-looking. I just don't know why such good-looking novels in Tomato Novels have very low ratings. They are better than most of the ones that have a rating of nine or more, and many good-looking novels actually have low ratings [smile] [smile] I'm really speechless.

It's super nice. If you like reading this type of novel, come here. It won't make me feel pretentious at all. It won't be as weak as some people write. This novel is a double strength. How can I say it is very manly? Anyway, I think the author is also a man. Many of the descriptions are a bit rough that cannot be written by female authors.

Nice! ! ! A rare pair of male protagonists in the world of high martial arts! ! ! ! ! Moreover, the writing is very good and the plot is flawless! I finally found an article that doesn't require a single glance or ten lines [Love]

Hahahahahaha slave is so funny [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It looks good so far, but the writing and logic are a bit lacking. Come on, I hope you stick with it.

Author I only have one request 1v1

It looks good, ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ but there is too much dog food and I am exhausted [Adoration]

The plot is attractive and makes even old bookworms want to read on. I recommend it [laughs]

The world view is interesting, the plot is smooth, and the characters are complete. It's very good.

It's very beautiful, the relationship between the two people is very sincere

The content is very good, probably because it is relatively low in popularity in the early stages... The content is pretty good, but a bit lacking.

Good-looking, no surprises

Very beautiful, I like it very much😍😍😍

It smells so good, top it! ! ! It took me an entire afternoon to die, and I didn't want to do anything serious.

It's well written. Don't rest, author, and write more chapters [laughing]

I only saw two desperate straight men helping each other on the road to cultivation.

It's okay, the author can add more. At present, it seems that City Lord CP is more suitable😏

It's good to watch ^ω^ The daily interactions between the two protagonists are naturally interesting and worth watching.

It's a cool article. The protagonists get along very well! !

It's funny in the early stages, and the plot twists and turns during the later upgrades are fascinating. The author writes well and is worth reading.

It's beautiful, it's to my liking, and there's no flashpoints so far.