Mingchao******************
鸣潮*************
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 291k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
2.1kReads
5.8Score
183Shelves
66Chapters
81Listens
60.7kReads · all time
鸣潮*************
I have read the latest chapter. To summarize, in my opinion, the writing style can only be said to be a little better than average, not excellent. The main selling point is the creation of the character, that is, the protagonist (I don't know the personalities of the characters in Mingchao very well, and I am not sure if there is OOC, but I feel that the protagonist is okay) The creation of the character "Mirror" is quite successful. However, when creating the character "Mirror", the values of his various skills were filled in. It took up a lot of space and left outsiders (me) confused and completely incomprehensible. Another selling point is the plot related to "Mirror" (personal opinion), which I won't go into here. Next is the shortcomings 1. Using AI (only in the early stage). This is acknowledged by the author personally, but the impact is not big. It has improved in the future, at least I feel better (it is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, you can reply below) 2. The plot is slightly slow (can be ignored) 3. The paragraph layout is poor, and some paragraphs are too long (only when AI was used in the early stage, there has been a significant improvement in the follow-up, which can barely be ignored) 4. The update is a bit slow, but this is because of the problems caused by the author's personal relationships and cannot be forced. After all, people have their own lives and cannot be ignored and updated, right? (Can be ignored) All in all, the novel is good with only minor flaws. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and it is a novel worth reading.
There are details and the story is interesting. But some content is really boring, such as character design. It took too long. Because I personally think that wonderful game fans should not have panel data! But overall it's still pretty good.
I don't read it, why should I read Ming Chao's novel? It's because of the Gray Knights. I won't comment on Mingchao yet, but the writing about the Gray Knights is very good, as well as the protagonist and the protagonist's background story. They are all very good. The author should not stop updating them.
It's very interesting. Among so many articles about Mingchao, this is one of the rare ones that I can keep reading. Some of the settings are also very innovative. I look forward to the follow-up content. Good luck to the author [Like] [Please update]
Pays great attention to details. As for text paragraphs, it is better to optimize them.
On the homepage, congratulations
Give me a five-star support. I rarely see such high-quality fan fiction. I have seen some people talking about using AI, but it is only an auxiliary tool at best. The soul of this book is mainly given by the author. Come on, author!
Good-looking, good-looking, recommendable. Fragrant
The author writes very well
It looks good like this
Eatable, delicious, love to eat, eat more
Give it a five-star rating to support the author. [Praise]
It's really telling. The understanding and portrayal of the characters fit the original work. It's a pity that the total volume is too small and not enough to watch.
It's a good book. The author is very talented. I hope the author will not stop updating. Come on, author, and give me a five-star review to support it.
It's a good book. The author is very talented. I hope the author will not stop updating. Come on, author, and give me a five-star review to support it.
It's a good book. The author is very talented. I hope the author will not stop updating. Come on, author, and give me a five-star review to support it.
It's a good book. The author is very talented. I hope the author will not stop updating. Come on, author, and give me a five-star review to support it.
It's a pleasant read. The author is very attentive.
The author really hopes not to stop updating it, this is a very interesting book.
Come on, big brother who writes books
Rare, pretty good, but too few, not enough to see
The writing is pretty good, but updates are very slow.
Not bad, but the progress feels slow (personal feeling)