Technology Crown Prince: Stop Arguing, Two Fathers

It felt like it was an AI novel, and the timeline was too confusing, so I read thirty chapters. It was only three months before, then one year old, and then another three months. I guess I forgot the previous plot, and suddenly started writing about three years old. In the first two chapters, I said not to tell my father. The protagonist can talk, and then when he comes back ten days later, he can talk normally. It's a very familiar operation, and it's very similar to me. It's the same as when I was learning something before. It felt very novel at first. I wrote a few chapters seriously, and then I started to get lazy. There was no problem in the beginning, but starting from about ten chapters, the settings are different every few chapters. This setting is really novel [crying] [crying] [crying]

Objective review: Overall, the book is well-conceived! It's a pity that the timeline is too messy and seems confusing to others. I suggest it be better to revise it!

The setting is okay, but the overall plot timeline is confusing. The same character Zhao Qi is dead, and his rebellion appears again and again later. What, is it a fake corpse? There will be ten years, one year, and how many years? How old is the protagonist? And didn't Helianzhan send envoys at the beginning? Why is it that when the protagonist is ten years old later, he still can't believe it and comes to verify it for himself?

It feels very messy, but the plot is good, but the confusion of timelines and titles makes it hard to watch... For example, the character Xiao Lin, when he first appeared, he called the emperor his brother, so Xiao Lin's identity should be the prince, but later on, the emperor suddenly called Xiao Lin his uncle, and in Xiao Lin's inner monologue, he also said that the emperor was his nephew. 🤔🤔Why is this? ! The timeline is also very confusing. The plot says that the union of the two emperors took place ten years ago, and the emperor repeatedly mentioned the plan of ten years ago, but it is also said that the union of the two emperors only resulted in the male protagonist a year ago... So was the union of the two emperors a year ago or ten years ago? ? There is also the age of the male protagonist. In the previous plot, the emperor said that the male protagonist did not act like a three-year-old child, and in the subsequent plot, he said that the male protagonist was only one year old =_= I was speechless... It felt like the author didn't know where to go as he wrote, which made the reader look very confused and really wanted to abandon the article [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]

The plot is good, but the timeline is too confusing

It's pretty and relatively novel.

The timeline is so messed up, it just changes to ten years later, and there is no transition or explanation of time.

Emm... It's a bit hard to describe...

The writing is very messy,

No, no, no, no, no

In the early stage, I have been emphasizing engineering thinking. It feels like a hard copy, which is a bit unbearable. However, it ignores some small details. This book is still very good.