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The Newcomers Are Really Good at Writing Now, I Recommend a Few Books 🐮
I haven't been reading novels on my mobile phone for a long time. I used to use e-books and have been a bookworm for five or six years.
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Nice Beast-Control Novel, Please Pray
Does anyone have any good animal-control novels? I beg you.
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Don't use AI to polish your sentences. You will write better. You put your heart into it, but some parts look strange. Old bookworms can see it at a glance. If you write with AI, no one will read it later. To be honest, your plot and ideas are very good and have potential.
The early stage had a strong AI flavor, and the author had polished it himself, but not very well. After 40 pictures, the AI taste is obviously much lighter, and the author has made great progress in writing. Before 40 pictures, the AI level was too poor, the plot description and other aspects were very complicated, and similar plots would be written many times. It is recommended that the author revise the previous content when he has time in the future. After that, the plot was pretty good, on the right track, and I no longer had to watch the protagonist being tortured. The later plot is very exciting, and it can be seen that the author is constantly improving, so I give it four stars. I also hope that the results of this book will get better and better. [Love]
I have read all the updated ones. The writing is very good, the combat power has not collapsed, the logic is clear, and it is very natural to watch. Walking through the poisonous forest in the front, throwing away all the people behind and changing the scene, it is also very comfortable to watch. I also recruit friends in the back. I think it is well written. It's really good. Compared with the novels on the platform now, there is one particularly good point that makes people feel comfortable. That is, the author writes each Pokémon as a supporting role, writes the emotions very well, and writes a special counterpoint to the emotions between Pokémon and people. It's just that the number of words is too few. Please update it quickly. If you update it five times a day, your book will become popular. There is also a place that I felt was weird at first, which is why the protagonist is so harsh towards Jiang Yichen, just like he treats his subordinates. But the further you read, the more natural it becomes. Maybe it's because he accepts the protagonist's character setting, but I still hope that when I write later, the relationship between them will become more and more relaxed, and the language dialogue will become more warm and daily, right. I hope this book gets better and better
It's very interesting. There are no repetitions or routines on the way to becoming stronger, and the bond with the elves is very delicately written. There is no love line. I like this kind of pure becoming stronger. Other novels before always had to add some love lines, and some even deliberately regained Gardevoir to talk about. The strong do not need love, power and strength are the best tonics. When you come to the elf world, you should cultivate the elf well. This kind of survival flow is very interesting.
It's really good-looking, and it's more realistic. I've been watching Pokémon since I was a kid, and I think Stinky Mud is particularly magical. The main character's cheating isn't too big. I think the author can look at other dark fandoms to find inspiration, such as Dark Giant, Legendary Trainer, Darkness Rising, and Survival in the Cracks. They're all very good, and you can learn from them.
Come on, don't stop. Is Shini taking the route of Alola Shini?
It looks pretty good, but the stinky mud start is indeed quite rare. I have been urging for more updates, and I have been following the article. Whether it is the daily life of the elves or the real inner struggle of the protagonist, it is very realistic, and the plot concept is also good. I read some book reviews that said it was written by AI, and I think so, but the author can only fine-tune the sentences occasionally, and it is far from being relied upon to create perfunctorily by AI. If it were just generated by AI, it would never be possible to write such a long plot, let alone the characteristics and skills of so many elves. The logic would have been messed up long ago. It can only be said that it is difficult to agree with others. Please do not stop updating the author.
High quality, really high quality. I have found no less than thirty Pokémon books during this period, and this one is undoubtedly the best. The only drawback is that too much AI was used in the early stage. I think this is also the reason why it is not popular. The kindness of the protagonist is undeniably fierce, and the bond with the elves is also remarkable. The interaction with Jiang Yichen also has the humor and tacit understanding between the protagonists in the animation [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
The first 30 or 40 episodes may not be very good, but the later ones will become more and more good. I read Pokémon fan fiction and I think it is one of the more distinctive ones. There is no system. It actually depends on how you say it. Without system, I actually think it is much better than some systems.
The early stage is more realistic, but not blindly dark. Although the protagonist has seen the darkness of this society in the early stage, he does not become dark, but wants to change it, which is more to my liking. Then, the protagonist is not a lone wolf, and the bond with the elves and getting along with the companions are very good. The configuration of the protagonist team is: a calm and cunning decision-maker (protagonist) + a rebellious rich young man who prefers insects + a chatty little gangster from Sin City.
There is no problem with the dark theme, but the protagonist and his first elf, Stinky Mud, have flesh and blood and have grown up, from a college student to a butcher, abandoning the weakness that should be abandoned, but instead arousing cherished friendship and bonds. When I saw the story about beating Abo, I felt very good. One person is loved by one person, and they are as close as a family. It is very well written and worth watching. There is no so-called cheating. There are only two scumbags rotting in the sewer. In this cannibal world, they use their most clumsy and ugliest way to slap the mouth of this shit world.
It's not a dark novel, it's a dark Pokémon worldview, where the corrupt upper-class protagonist transforms the world. The plot is quite royal. Currently, he is traveling around the world with a rich man and a passionate idiot, defeating evil organizations.
I have read about 100 chapters so far. It is a very interesting pet novel, and it reminded me of the "Pet Charm" I had read before. Does the author have an outline? I will write slowly, hoping to write more than 1,000 chapters [blowing kiss]!
Come on, come on, you can do it, I believe in you
Not much to say, it's all in your new update, as I said, come on, creative thinking can develop in the direction of fluidity and extension.
It's also possible to add a Centipede King with acceleration characteristics, a Sting Bee with sniper characteristics, and the most important thing is that these two can mega evolve. You can also add a Ghost, a Broken Bag, a bodyguard, and a human shield.
It's really good-looking and realistic, and it's rare to see someone starting with Stinky Mud. If you keep writing about it, it will definitely occupy a seat on the Tomato Pokémon list.
No, I understand. I think the day school department can use gas bombs and the regional form of Slowpoke. I think we can take the bond evolution, which is the evolution of intimacy value, and Nidoking. The last one should be Gengar. After all, the Ghost family is better. Finally, I think the Night Thief Salamander can still be shining, after all, the White Queen.
The plot is very novel and not cliche. Come on, bookworms like it [please update]
It's beautiful, and the description is very detailed and true.
It's okay, just don't make too many jokes
It's well written, and you can tell it's done with care, not AI.
The treasure novel is quite good.
I strongly recommend it. It's a bit dark, but very real. It's fun for me to see [laughing]
Super pretty🥹 and a rare feeling🤧
Oh ho ho ho ho ho ho, it feels so good to watch.
New books are going up, five chapters are updated every day, starting with 10,000 words, the author is suffering from liver disease
The reality that can be read is for Pokémon fans. Tomato must have more than 9 points and tens of thousands of book reviews and can't read it at all. The performance of this book is okay so far, but it is a bit short.
Okay, not bad, it's also among the best among Heibao.
The writing is okay, please update it carefully and don't stop updating it.