Pokemon: The Poison-Type Powerhouse Who Fought His Way Out of the Slums

Don't use AI to polish your sentences. You will write better. You put your heart into it, but some parts look strange. Old bookworms can see it at a glance. If you write with AI, no one will read it later. To be honest, your plot and ideas are very good and have potential.

The early stage had a strong AI flavor, and the author had polished it himself, but not very well. After 40 pictures, the AI ​​taste is obviously much lighter, and the author has made great progress in writing. Before 40 pictures, the AI ​​level was too poor, the plot description and other aspects were very complicated, and similar plots would be written many times. It is recommended that the author revise the previous content when he has time in the future. After that, the plot was pretty good and on the right track, and I no longer had to watch the protagonist being tortured. The later plot is very exciting, and it can be seen that the author is constantly improving, so I give it four stars. I also hope that the results of this book will get better and better. [Love] It's better to run away, don't change your stubbornness.

I have read all the updated ones. The writing is very good, the combat power has not collapsed, the logic is clear, and it is very natural to watch. Walking through the poisonous forest in the front, throwing away all the people behind and changing the scene, it is also very comfortable to watch. I also recruit friends in the back. I think it is well written. It's really good. Compared with the novels on the platform now, there is one particularly good point that makes people feel comfortable. That is, the author writes each Pokémon as a supporting role, writes the emotions very well, and writes a special counterpoint to the emotions between Pokémon and people. It's just that the number of words is too few. Please update it quickly. If you update it five times a day, your book will become popular. There is also a place that I felt was weird at first, which is why the protagonist is so harsh towards Jiang Yichen, just like he treats his subordinates. But the further you read, the more natural it becomes. Maybe it's because he accepts the protagonist's character setting, but I still hope that when I write later, the relationship between them will become more and more relaxed, and the language dialogue will become more warm and daily, right. I hope this book gets better and better

The early stage is more realistic, but not blindly dark. Although the protagonist has seen the darkness of this society in the early stage, he does not become dark, but wants to change it, which is more to my liking. Then, the protagonist is not a lone wolf, and the bond with the elves and getting along with the companions are very good. The configuration of the protagonist team is: a calm and cunning decision-maker (protagonist) + a rebellious rich young man who prefers insects + a chatty little gangster from Sin City.

It's really good-looking, and it's more realistic. I've been watching Pokémon since I was a kid, and I think Stinky Mud is particularly magical. The main character's cheating isn't too big. I think the author can look at other dark fandoms to find inspiration, such as Dark Giant, Legendary Trainer, Darkness Rising, and Survival in the Cracks. They're all very good, and you can learn from them.

It's very interesting. There are no repetitions or routines on the way to becoming stronger, and the bond with the elves is very delicately written. There is no love line. I like this kind of pure becoming stronger. Other novels before always had to add some love lines, and some even deliberately regained Gardevoir to talk about. The strong do not need love, power and strength are the best tonics. When you come to the elf world, you should cultivate the elf well. This kind of survival flow is very interesting.

High quality, really high quality. I have found no less than thirty Pokémon books during this period, and this one is undoubtedly the best. The only drawback is that too much AI was used in the early stage. I think this is also the reason why it is not popular. The kindness of the protagonist is undeniably fierce, and the bond with the elves is also remarkable. The interaction with Jiang Yichen also has the humor and tacit understanding between the protagonists in the animation [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Come on, don't stop. Is Shini taking the route of Alola Shini?

If you are really interested in Pokémon, I highly recommend everyone to check it out. There is no protagonist, and there is no cheating in the system. It relies entirely on oneself, and the human nature and friendship are portrayed very realistically. It's a slow-paced, growth-oriented, and very unique novel. I will continue to follow it [Like][Like][Start][Start]

The first 30 or 40 episodes may not be very good, but the later ones will become more and more good. I read Pokémon fan fiction and I think it is one of the more distinctive ones. There is no system. It actually depends on how you say it. Without system, I actually think it is much better than some systems.