[No system + daily + love + restraint + weird + magical girl + special photography]
On the way home from school, he encountered an accident. Ning Han almost died. When he opened his eyes, he saw the magical girl beating up the female villain!
And the magical girl who was suspected of saving him actually looked exactly like his classmate Jiang Yuqi!
Evidence? He picked up half of the hairpin, and the other half was on Jiang Yuqi's desk!
Stone hammered, Ning Han decisively transformed into the number one fan. When fighting with magical girls, he shouted six, and after gaining abilities, he rushed to the front line:
"Don't be afraid, deskmate, I'm here to help you!"
Until one day, the female villain, who had repeatedly ruined his plans, finally couldn't bear it anymore and dragged him to the corner:
"Ning Han, are you sick? I saved you, and you still help them beat me every day?"
Looking at the angry female villain with bulging cheeks in front of her, and thinking of her gentle and shy classmates in the classroom, and the scene that night, Ning Han felt a shiver in her heart:
"Wait a minute? Did I... Admit the wrong person?"
"My deskmate is not a magical girl that everyone loves, but a enchanting female villain?!"
At the same time, while acting with the magical girls, Ning Hai gradually discovered that the city he was in seemed to be full of fog, with all kinds of strange spaces everywhere, strange creatures popping up from time to time, and relics and things suspected of alien civilization. And all of this seemed to be closely related to the magical girls and their old enemies?
Reader comments
Good looking. Typos, grammatical errors, and minor logic issues are of no concern to me.
My favorite novel in Tomato also had typos at the beginning (most of which have not been corrected now), so for me the typo problem is not very serious, and I can understand it anyway.
The same goes for language disorders.
Logic problems are divided into big and small. Big logic problems will make the whole book look very strange, but fortunately there are no major logic problems in this book (at least in my opinion). The common logic problems are about the character's actions or language within a page. If you want to deal with it, just polish it carefully.
Biggest problem: updates. Although it is not as good as those written by great authors, it is acceptable to maintain a frequency of updating at least once a day, or once every two days (for authors with some difficulties). As long as the reader understands and there is no big underlying reason, it is okay to want to get better.
So, @, update! ! ! Why should I watch if you don't update? ! ! Ahhhhhh! ! !
(It is recommended not to let Ning Han guess Jiang Yuqi's identity too quickly. It is best not to let him guess it, because if this is the case, it will not be consistent with the introduction of this book)
Finally, come on, just like the author's signature: write, write, keep writing, and then it will become popular [Like]
I am suspected of being the first book review, and the first 5-star book review [laughing and crying]
Good looking. Typos, grammatical errors, and minor logic issues are of no concern to me. My favorite novel in Tomato also had typos at the beginning (most of which have not been corrected now), so for me the typo problem is not very serious, and I can understand it anyway. The same goes for language disorders. Logic problems are divided into big and small. Big logic problems will make the whole book look very strange, but fortunately there are no major logic problems in this book (at least in my opinion). The common logic problems are about the character's actions or language within a page. If you want to deal with it, just polish it carefully. Biggest problem: updates. Although it is not as good as those written by great authors, it is acceptable to maintain a frequency of updating at least once a day, or once every two days (for authors with some difficulties). As long as the reader understands and there is no big underlying reason, it is okay to want to get better. So, @, update! ! ! Why should I watch if you don't update? ! ! Ahhhhhh! ! ! (It is recommended not to let Ning Han guess Jiang Yuqi's identity too quickly. It is best not to let him guess it, because if this is the case, it will not be consistent with the introduction of this book) Finally, come on, just like the author's signature: write, write, keep writing, and then it will become popular [Like] I am suspected of being the first book review, and the first 5-star book review [laughing and crying]