Magical Girls Are Not All Lilies.

I particularly like the teacher's writing style, which is very good. It's just that I feel like the protagonist is a bit human-machine and very rational about things. After the transformation, your character will become arrogant, and you will probably suffer from it later. The protagonist will reflect after the war, and the country is not a fool, and the characters are all running online intelligently.

Yes, this is the fun of fighting😡. A magical girl needs high damage with her left hand, high damage with her right hand, and a nuclear explosion with both fists😡😡 🤓☝🏻️😤Magical girls are so strong😏big😋

Nice! ! ! Author, you have written very well. The following is my personal experience. It is not criticism or suggestions for improvement, because I don't know how to write those, so it is my personal experience. Personal feelings: In the article, it's not... It's... There are a lot of similar ones and they are concentrated, which makes me feel a little bored. The descriptions of emotions and actions are very good and detailed. I feel that it is too detailed. Sometimes when reading some parts, such as when fighting, I know that the time is short, but when reading, I feel that there is still time. Why don't you feel the urgency to act? Person: The protagonist is in the first person, but when Xia Yubing and the others are introduced in the latest chapters, the first person is used for Xia Yubing. It gives me the feeling that you are changing to a protagonist or two protagonists, which feels a bit abrupt.

The emotional descriptions and the descriptions of the relationship between the heroines are so sweet that the corners of my mouth turned crooked. Five-star recommendation. But one thing is that I hope the author can carefully review the context and context. If there are some repetitions, problems will definitely arise as the content increases.

After reading Chapter 56, it seems good so far, but I have an important question to ask in advance. The dual perspective narrative mentioned by the author currently seems to be Pang and Xia, 1. Is there a primary and secondary relationship between the two? Is Xia assisting Pang to promote the plot or vice versa, or are the two parallel and parallel? 2. Will the plots of Pang and Xia intersect? Is it an intersection or a parallel line? What kind of relationship will the two have? How deep will the plot involve? These questions don't have to be answered by me, but they will determine whether this book is a work by a small crowd or a work by a small crowd.

Although I have only read less than half of it, I can still see that it is a rare masterpiece of Tomato (not one that can be found in those rankings, but the kind dug up by old bookworms). I suddenly discovered that there are quite a lot of first-person books with good writing [Already Planted] [Bookshelf Plus One] [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

Good-looking(*ෆ´ ˘ `ෆ*)♡ Be sure to write it down!

Five stars, I give it five stars. This is the best magical girl story I have seen recently. The battles are great! Great post! Nice!

Are they female colleagues?

Fighting is fun! There are also daily plots

Fight more than stick, follow the modern style of the military

To be honest, author, if you don't use the first-person perspective and use the third-person perspective, the results will be much better [face-covering][face-covering]

It's very well written, I hope the author can stick to it

It's quite interesting, I like to watch it. Come on, author

After so many attempts at defense, I finally got my guarantee.

Come on, author, this book is very interesting. Why do I have so little viewing time? I must have watched it for more than an hour

Looks good, no discomfort at the moment