Villains Are Reborn and Let Them Offer Their Loyalty

Come on, author, the writing in the western fantasy I have read is very good! But I feel that maybe because of the slow pace, not so many people watched it. There is a book on the Tomato site that I think is quite similar to the author's style, "I Knew I Wouldn't Play Like This". This book should be considered a very popular book. I feel that both books are well written, with detailed descriptions and good control of the plot. However, that book has a different focus (chasing a husband), so it may have a larger audience among Tomato readers. I think there is nothing wrong with what you wrote, but as far as your doubts are concerned, I think it is still not exciting enough. The plot is well written, but it is relatively long and cumbersome because it is not exciting enough. Most readers have no patience, so the data is not good-looking. Generally speaking, from my perspective as a bookworm of several years, you have written very well, but you may not know yet what readers really want to read. Take your time, come on! [Blow a kiss]

There were some flaws in the early writing, but now I feel it's okay. It's a good western fantasy, but the plot is a bit slow. After the first volume, you are just reborn and need to accumulate strength through forbearance, but you can't bear it all the time. I hope the second volume can have a more public chapter, otherwise it will be ridiculed in an environment where cool writing is the mainstream on Tomato. Overall, it is really okay and worth recommending. I originally planned to give 4 stars, but seeing that a newcomer can achieve this level, 5 stars are encouraged.

I have one thing to say, it is one of the best Western fantasy novels in recent times, but there are too few. Others are updating two or three chapters a day. But when I clicked it and saw that it only had less than 50 chapters, I didn't want to follow it and gave up. In the end, I couldn't find any good books and I had to read it. The settings are well written and the storyline is logical. Anyway, I hope to add more chapters. It's really uncomfortable to keep up with it. I'm afraid I'll die if I keep it.

The emotional scenes are well described. Compared with other novels, it gave me a different feeling. The heroine is more yandere [laughter]

It's so beautiful, everyone, stay soft, I know it's hard, but this is an order [blowing kiss] [smile] [crazy] [send heart]

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle

That's right, let's make it popular as soon as possible

The description is pretty good. Come on.

Not bad, you can take a look

Looks very comfortable, come on

I hope the author insists

I've finished watching it, it's pretty good, but it's a pity that it was cut in half.

Please encourage me. This book must survive. Sad, I just read the farewell letter after reading the good review, another good book is gone.

Come on, big brother who writes yandere articles [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

The characters are delicately drawn, and the current daily-oriented plot descriptions are also very good. Not many Tomatoes have this kind of writing. Treasure, I bought it first.

So far it's pretty good, can look forward to it

I like the plot and writing very much, it's in a Western fantasy style, and I like it very well! It just feels depressing and uncomfortable to read, so I dropped one star.

There were too few chapters and no ratings. I thought it wasn't good, but I didn't expect it to be okay. It was better than the recommendation list.

Support, well written harem, delicate and emotional.

Okay, okay. The writing in the back is quite comfortable. It was really a little bit toxic at the beginning, and I almost avoided the trap. But starting from picking up my sister, I feel a lot more comfortable.

It is considered a high-quality product among its kind, very delicate.