After the Master Died and Escaped, Little Sun's Disciple Turned Black

The character design of Goudan in this book is the most complete and the most realistic. Everyone is not perfect, and it is difficult to evaluate right and wrong. Only by writing about the complexity of human nature can we give a character a full personality. It is not surprising that many readers like Goudan. His emotions are the most complex and real, allowing readers to understand his state of mind. But the protagonist's feelings for the protagonist are a bit, um, strange? After reading the whole book, I don't know where I started to like Gou Gong and why I like Go Gong. It may be because this book is the author's first work, and the writing is not good enough. The character of the protagonist is not specific and full enough. At the end, the author gave all the characters a heartwarming ending, which was not bad without any regrets. Congratulations to the author on completing his first work, and may you create more excellent works in the future

It's very nice and the writing is pretty good. Hmm, I like Gou Dan better. Sorry, Xiao Xie. I feel that Gou Dan's portrayal is better. And I also like that kind of thousand-year fate and reunion. Anyway, I can see that I probably won't write about their emotional line. Anyway, it's still a bit sad. I may have to abandon the article because compared to Xiao Xie and Shizun, I like Shizun and Gou Dan better. Maybe it pokes my xp more? Plus Goudan, he has that kind of genius boyishness, is he a bit more of a dog figure? At that time, I saw Goudan saying that he had given his reputation, status, cultivation and the sword that had followed him for thousands of years to the Master. I was quite shocked. Anyway, I like Goudan very much. Seeing the part about fighting Goudan has already made me feel girly and sick [I am about to cry]. Finally, I hope Goudan has a good ending (Goudan doesn't like the Master, that must be the best. I like Goudan's character very much. He is the kind of young man who is high-spirited. Anyway, no one will not like Goudan after watching it [I am about to cry])

(There will be spoilers in the afternoon, only personal opinions and analysis without reference value) It can be seen that this is the first time for the author to write an article. As a short article, it is very good. It has a complete framework and story, and the characters are well developed. It is suitable for entertainment. At first I thought Gu Xueyi was a gentle and optimistic character, but later I realized that the author wanted to create a cooler character. In fact, this kind of indifferent yet gentle character is really delicious. When we first met, I thought I knew that person, but after getting along with him more, I found that I couldn't understand him at all, and it was difficult to really get into his heart. Let's talk about Xie Bu Zheng again. It's difficult to write a yandere-like character in this kind of character, and it's inappropriate because his love for Gu Xueyi is really too pure. It's true love, pure love, and he just wants to be good to him. It's a kind of respectful but measured love, and he's willing to pay a lot for him. The obsession expressed by Bu Zheng in the article is really appropriate. How can love be so unselfish. Let's talk about Li Goudan. In my opinion, he is just the incarnation of obsession. He is a remnant soul that has experienced many reincarnations and was almost wiped out. His obsession is to defeat the son of destiny. This person is well portrayed, not one-sided, nor simply bad. He has his own difficulties, and it was expected that he would kill Gu Xueyi, because the obsession is so deep that it almost overwhelms the feelings. Fortunately, he is not ruthless, so he finally let it go. In fact, I think that even if Xie Buzheng doesn't give him luck, he will let it go sooner or later. In addition, the two female characters are also very well created. They have their own ideals and goals, and they have accomplished what they want to accomplish in their dreams (actually, I am a bit addicted to them, the two babies are so cute). The plot is quite novel. I think we could add more imagination to the reincarnation part, or make the world view a bit bigger, but as a short story it is enough. There are no battle power collapses and no bugs. Overall it is not boring. The plot is compact and the rhythm is well controlled. Personally, I feel that the proportion of the dream in the back is a bit too much, but this is just a personal preference and it is harmless. In general, the plot is fast-paced and emotional. It has no set template and no running account. It is recommended if you are a book reader.

It's really good to watch. I stayed up all night watching it, watching it in the bathroom, eating, and watching it at any time. It's really good to watch. I think every character in it is very vivid. Especially the ending given to Goudan'er in the end I think is the best. The extra story also gave him a chance to go to modern times. The protagonist was loved by the whole audience. I think the character is really well-shaped, and the interactions with the system, such as the little bitches, are also very interesting. The overall character is also well-shaped. I think the over-emotional character is also very easy to accept, but maybe the highlight part is a little less compared to the other two. But overall it looks really good! I highly recommend watching it. Finally, I hope Goudaner, Gu Xuean, and Xie Buzheng are safe and smooth in the world they live in [Love]

It is very friendly to my eyes, although there are still flaws (mainly due to character description issues, I personally feel that the plots are relatively new, but the characters feel a little "pale", the characters could be more natural, and the expression of the characters themselves and the analysis of the characters are still a little bit, not "intense" enough), but I personally feel that the flaws are not concealed, especially for novice writers! ! ! 🥰 Reading this book, the text feels very smooth, which is rare, and the writing style is also good. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it🙌 Come on, author! There is still room for improvement! Wisdom teeth! 💞

I was attracted by the opening introduction. The writing is good, the plot is smooth, the characters are well created, and overall it is good-looking. It is a hard work to write the article. The following comments contain plot spoilers, please read with caution The images of Shou, Gong, and Gou Dan'er are well created, and the highlights in the whole plot are particularly enjoyable, especially the time-traveling closed loop between Shou and Gou Dan'er. After reading it in one go, I entered the dreamland in the later period, where the background changed to ancient imperial power, and the length was a bit long, so I jumped directly from the one hundred or so chapters to the confession chapter (purely for personal reasons, I don't like ancient backgrounds and skipped after reading a few chapters and not being able to read in). Also, after reading the opening introduction, I thought it was the kind of romance novel I usually read. I felt a bit regretful because the love story in the introduction was very light and sweet, and there was very little interaction. Gong's presence in the early stage is very weak, although it is to pave the way for later Gong saying "Master, look at me more" (completely from a puppy). In many Godan scenes, I personally feel that the bond between Goudan'er and Shou is more fragrant. Secondly, I personally feel that there is only one male protagonist in the whole story, Shou, while Gong and Goudan are both male co-stars. Let's talk about the ending. For me, this article is the best. In the ending chapter, the two of them were not confirmed to be together, but they were brought to modern times by Shou. The extra chapter is sweet, and Goudan has also arrived in modern times. Let the three of them live their lives like this [smirking] Thank you, madam, for the creation~ I also forgot to mention that Gong is not a yandere, he is a pure love god of war. [Salute] The plot framework and world view of this article are very good, not the same type. I wish you a lot of inspiration in writing this article.

Damn, damn, it's so beautiful! Don't be fooled by the introduction and name. I actually clicked on this book at the beginning. When I saw the introduction, I thought it was a very bland story about raising a cub and then falling in love with it. That's the kind of story I wanted to read. As a result, I started to climax after 20 photos. I went and I went. Do you know how excited I was? Do you know how interesting the confrontation between the original novel and the time traveler is? Holy shit, holy shit, holy shit, I really like it. Author, you are like a literary star. Do you know how good your writing is? It's always the climax of the plot, you know? Although it is short, most of it is a climactic story that can stir people's emotions. The palace copy is a bit long, but it's okay. But I think maybe it's not very long here, I just think the male protagonist is not very well portrayed, the kind of person who is desperate for love. Then the author also said at the end that the description of the male protagonist was not very vivid. I also felt that the description was very shallow and did not really describe his feelings. Most of them were relatively considerate and not crazy. And Xue Yi's writing is actually a bit contradictory. He is very straight. Because we are from God's perspective, some parts of the story may be a little uncomfortable, but if you put yourself in it, you will find that this is normal. So it's really good-looking, really really awesome, Klass, you know? It's really good-looking. I like to see more than 100 pictures of people in their early 200s. The writing is full of meaning and brings endless feelings. It would be a shame if I didn't write more about the extra chapter. In fact, I don't really like to read extras after reading the main text, but I really want to see the results of your extras. I'm going to finish reading the whole story. I'm convinced. I really want to see modern life. I just feel a sense of superiority when I read this kind of article. I just like this kind of knowledge. Oh, it's really a pity. ←_← But it's really good-looking. It's really good-looking. I can't explain it.

Balance the ratings. The author's writing is good, his views are correct, and the plot is smooth. The criticism may be that Xie Buzheng's role is relatively small. The overall situation is a bit like 1v2, but it is still 1v1. Accepting this, it is still worth watching. The shortcoming is that it is too short (not enough to read). There are many places that could be expanded and described with a few more sentences, but the author has greatly skipped it. I guess the point that the author wants to express has been misunderstood and difficult to get by some readers (actually, I also read it too quickly without thinking). Here are some personal questions I have: Gu Xueyi was gentle and a little bit out of the ordinary in the early stage, which made me think he was a common time-traveling master (meaning that his personality was too contrasting with the original character). Later in the plot, he showed a side of a science student who is good at mathematics and was too calm. I like this character very much. The troubling point is that in the early stage, the scientific thinking was not particularly reflected, and the sudden change was a bit abrupt. It would be nice if you could add some description to make the transition [shy] (I don't mean to give advice, just personal feelings) Overall, this article is worth reading. It's hard to find a novel on Tomato that I can finish reading. I've been tortured by copycat articles. I've read too many articles and have to give up half of them regardless of the sunk cost. I'm very happy to come across this article [Blow a kiss]

The story is very novel [crying] Overall it's sweet. The master is so gentle. He deserves to be loved by everyone. Xie Buzheng and Goudan'er are like two puppies🐶, and why did the whole story suddenly come to an end while watching it? ! ! ! ! The author begs you to come back and write Goudan'er's modern extra story [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Very nice. For me, it is very satisfying both in terms of content and character creation! Among them, the one that impressed me the most was the story about Lingyao and Goudan'er. The writing is not short, but perhaps there should be more description of the protagonist! Lingyao's unrestrained "truth" for the Tao was taught to him by his master, and he constantly struggled with his own confusion, and finally defeated himself and found his own way. I was deeply reminded of myself, and it was touching. Xie Buzheng is like a kitten, meowing happily when given a reward, but he doesn't dare to be too obvious for fear of losing, so he practices hard and wants his master to be his only cat. Master's thinking on raising children is also quite advanced [face covering] Xie Bu Zheng wants to be well with Master! [Love] Come on! [Shy]

The character Goudan'er (original patron Gu Xueyi) is outstanding. He has flesh and blood, and possesses the Taoist heart and consciousness of a cultivator: give it a try, compete with heaven, and go against heaven. As a "cannon fodder" arranged by heaven, he has been reincarnated thousands of times just to resist the injustice of fate and respond to Bai Yueguang's expectations 1,400 years ago. Tiandao has been targeting him, and even let the male protagonist take over the original owner's body to be a nanny for Xie. Every time the male protagonist saves Gou Dan'er, the Tiandao system comes out to disrupt the situation. To be honest, Gou Dan'er and the male protagonist's time-travel version Gu Xueyi have a more CP feel. The interaction between him and the master is a back and forth, which is very interesting, rather than a mechanical completion of the task. What's a little speechless is that the male protagonist obviously complied with the system's death escape mission and completed his "suspended death" mission with Goudan's knife. Later, when he was resurrected, he blamed Goudan's death and said that his death was regarded as compensation for snatching the identity of Goudan's original owner... The male protagonist's death escape was voluntary, but Goudan's house was taken away by force. Even if the male protagonist has no guilt, there is no equality here... Apart from this, the male protagonist Master treated Goudan very well in the early stages, especially the chapter where he gave Goudan a hairpin, which was very touching. But based on the introduction and latest trends, it is estimated that the main protagonists are still the male protagonist and Xie. I just hope that poor Goudan will not become a "stepping stone" for their relationship...

It's good to read. When I read the introduction, I thought it was a classic master-disciple story, but I didn't expect it to be very novel after I opened it. I think it's very good. I like Goudan very much, hahahaha (I'm sorry, Xiaoxie). This sense of fate really pokes me hahaha. What's most important, the author actually responded to my comment [crying] [crying] [crying]

I don't understand why the rating is so low. The character creation is obviously very good. For Bu Zheng, he is different from Gong in all the fairy tales I have read. He will always be loyal to Xue Yi. Lun Lun said that he originally wanted to create a yandere image for Bu Zheng. I think This is good. Although there is no highlight moment for him in the whole book, and I can't see his cool and handsome side, I can feel satisfied from Lun Lun's description of him just clenching Xue Yi's robe. I can see his respect and love for Xue Yi, and a faint sense of happiness that overflows the screen. Xueyi is a programmer. Lunlun wrote earlier that his purpose was to complete the task and get a bonus. After escaping from death, he returned to the real world and then returned to the book after learning that the situation was dangerous. Xueyi can analyze clearly even when his inner emotions are conflicting. He is like a mentor, rationally explaining principles to enlighten other people's thoughts. These can be seen in his character that coexists rationality and sensibility. In the extra story, his desire to possess Buzi makes his character image more vivid. I also like Goudaner very much. I think he is the most conflicted person in the book. He has been trapped in obsession for too long. I was a little angry when he stabbed Xueyi. Later, when I saw him calling himself a villain, I felt very miserable. I suddenly felt that he was not like a villain, but like a child who never got candy. In the extra story, he became cautious to find Xueyi. I saw his sincerity and dependence like a drowning man catching driftwood. I like every character so much, Lin Lin, Ling Yao, Li Rui, Ning Huan, all the elders... I even like Xie Huahua! Generally speaking, the writing style of this book is very gentle and has the long-lasting nature of the water. I like it very much (personal opinion)

So cool! When a man sees menstruation, when a woman sees her nerves, it is the nemesis of depression. It is the alarm clock of a vegetative state. It is so beautiful that the five-guaranteed households in the village miss and love the widow. It is so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood the Qiantang River. It is so beautiful that God is my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. I run, I jump, and I dance tango on the balcony of the 20-storey building. It makes me realize that God does exist. I am so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water! Author, I want to jump up and give you a kiss! Good looking! It's so cool and extremely friendly to control! Such a delicious work is free, how great!

I finished reading it this evening and will comment. I hope this book becomes popular. First of all, I used accurate words. I was attracted by the introduction at the beginning. I liked this kind of master and the proud apprentice disciple training system, so I went to watch it. In fact, after watching a lot, I can guess the discussion. The new thing is the different three-dimensional characters such as Goudan and Lin Lin. In fact, I stopped watching when I first planned to see their emotional explosive point. I can also guess about love or other plots later on. I really thought so at the beginning... In fact, the rich three-dimensionality of Goudan and other characters is what motivates me to watch it later, especially the foreshadowing and transition, which makes me feel, Huh? There are still few settings, so read on. You might think Qing Leng Master is a bit OOC at first, but after reading it all the way through, I think it's still very good overall. The concept and content are great and the author loves his characters very much. It is worth watching and I recommend everyone to watch it. Finally, I wish all readers like me a happy life every day. I hope the author will have a happy life, write more extras, and write better works.

The attacker will respect people, he will not turn black as soon as his master escapes, he will care about his reputation; the master is also very good, and will not save people just because the system says it will affect the mission; the mission is not to take the protagonist directly to the world of cultivation like a kidnapper, but to negotiate terms with the protagonist; but Ning Huan, a CP fan, is a bit bad, very offensive, and feels like he is crazy about CP. The plot of the article feels like it lacks some details. We all know that Gong will like the master, but only a few things are written, which is not enough to make Gong's feelings sour.

The dual male protagonists set by master and apprentice are also many books in Tomato. This book is really good. The writing is average to above average. It is very good and I will continue to read it.

Very nice! The plot is very novel, and the characters are great and have their own merits. The teacher politely asked Gou Daner about his feelings for the master. Is he really not moved at all? I hope to see the interaction between Gou Daner and the master. 😋

Oh my God, I cried after reading this! The ending is happy and the plot is truly amazing! The foreshadowing is all fulfilled, and I really want to admire the plot. Unlike other clichés about masters and apprentices who cultivate immortality, the characters in it are very three-dimensional, and there are many little surprises that are not mentioned in the introduction! The writing also looks very comfortable, and I really like the emotional scenes and explosive scenes in it! Everyone has their own different point of view, and of course there are characters in it that I can't let go of, but I won't spoil it, my wife really likes it anyway! ! ! (The author's 300,000 words are just enough to read!!!) Alas, I still can't let go. How can I make the author willing to write another 100 extra chapters😭😭😭

This is the best master-disciple book I have ever read! ! ! ! ! Ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah , I am going to die from the beautiful plot of this writing ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah , makes me want to be excited ! ! !

This book is really nice. The plot has ups and downs and is slightly sadistic, but it is still a sweet book. Moreover, the characters are very three-dimensional and full of story-telling.

It's very novel, the introduction looks very ordinary, but there are many highlights, it's great, awesome author, come on ੭ ˙ᗜ˙ ੭ This also corresponds to the five stars I wanted for my reply to the author. Already arranged. ✌︎' ֊'

I think this article can be said to be 1v1 or 1v2 (can this be said?). If it was for 1v1, I think it would be readable. I don't think the relationship between the protagonist and Goudan'er is very out of the ordinary. I think it is more important for the three of them to live a good life together than anything else. The plot of the story is compact and the emotional lines of the characters are quite rich. As long as you don't delve into the many logical problems in it, it is still very interesting to watch. The (original) Long Aotian male protagonist who looks like a naughty dog but is a yandere at heart is a true son of fate. There is no forced (emotional) love between them (I rarely watch it and can't accept forced love). Although the plot behind it is a bit related to forced love, I feel that the protagonist is not forced, and there is no abuse of body or mind. I love it here ⊙▽⊙ (Although it is a bit of a life-giving literature, but it is quite sweet...) I feel like Goudan is a tsundere with a sharp tongue (that scene I met when I was a child, um... I felt quite fatalistic when I gave the name. Although this plot may be more cliche in other places, I was still very moved). Some people may not be able to accept it. This is the reason why Goudan hates the (original) male protagonist Long Aotian (although I can understand it, but let's leave it out here) As for Gu Xueyi, he has his own opinion, and he can take it up or put it down. If you have anything to say, make it clear. I think he can be regarded as a little sun (although some people may say that he is a bit of a virgin, but I think it is very good). Except for the emotional turning point (I feel that the author It's not overdone, maybe it's overdone, but it's too obscure, I don't understand?), And there's another point that's not too surprising, it's extremely comfortable to be controlled (Gu Xueyi has the final say in his own life and death, which is more cool), but it may be a bit exposed later, he is actually a bit yandere? But I feel like he wants to express his ability to accept Xie Buzheng's love and love him in his own way... System babies really like it, so why isn't it considered a nurturing system? Watch it upgrade step by step, becoming more and more humane Well... There are no bad guys in the whole book, right? (Shy)＠_＠ It feels like everyone is a good person, even the half-villain bitch. . . Revenge against Heaven (I have forgotten a little bit about the previous plot) This is what I want to write to the author. As your first book, I think it is very awesome. If you write a second book, I will follow it fiercely^O^ As for the extras, I want to watch Lingyao and Lin Lin's extras (these two give me a lily smell). I feel that Lingyao is a character with a clear growth line in the article. This girl is cool!!! There are also system extras, um... I think it's fun to assist Goudan'er ^O^, and I want to know whether it will stay or not. Will it return to the main system, or will it always stay with Gu Xueyi? Has he upgraded and gotten his own body? Or is there a new host? Their story is unknown, a new story is about to begin (The novel only shows a part of their lives. The end of the novel does not mean the end of their stories. Their lives are still going on)

Author, I really like this book you wrote, and I respect your official match. However, I still feel that the original Gu Xueyi is a bit miserable. In fact, the two Gu Xueyi are a bit sleepy. Don't worry, the author respects your match (o^^o)

Overall, it's okay. Goudan is quite interesting. Long Aotian's character design is just average. Ning Huan feels like a superfluous character with an unlikable personality and has no effect. Moreover, a sect leader has nothing to do every day, so he just gossips around a few protagonists...

It is a relatively plain book about cultivating immortals in the younger years. You are neither competitive nor invincible, but you are very hardworking and hardworking. Xueyi looks straight on the surface, but in fact he has been inseparable from Xie Xiaoguo for a long time hhh [Sending my heart] I feel that the part about coercion is right. The overall arrangement of the emotional rhythm is still a little slow, but it is really beautiful and the writing is also very good. Cheers, the author [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The author writes very well and deserves five stars✨. The characters are also described very well. Whether it is Gu Xueyi, Xie Buzheng or Goudaner, I like them all. I hope they can all be well in another world.

The teacher's writing is super, super good. The three views of the protagonist are particularly positive. To put it bluntly, whether it is the original protagonist or the soul-piercing protagonist, the people are very good, the characters are very good, and the portrayal is also very good🥺Okay, nothing has changed. The author will become very popular after becoming a big brother

It's good, but Xie Buzheng's 15-year-old mind feels almost the same as when he was 8 years old. There is no change and it is a bit childish.

The real group portrait [crying] Narcissus is so awesome