I Transmigrated to Write, and Harry Potter Sparked a Global Buying Frenzy

How should I put it, everything else is fine, except that the heroine goes to school here. I came to see the heroine write a book, not to watch the heroine do her homework 🙂

Nice! It's well written. It's the first time I read a novel of this type. Let me tell you what I think: Actually, the heroine doesn't need to be in such a hurry. I feel that the heroine is very busy. She has to go to school, do homework, write a novel, and do a holographic novel. 👍 It's okay to start writing two books at the same time. It's understandable. If the heroine were writing more than three books at the same time, it would be a bit confusing. She would jump here and there, and it would be a bit confusing for us readers. 🤔 I hope the author will continue to work hard. By the way, the author of the school content should consider not writing in such detail and just write a general summary. Because I felt like I was back in high school, busy and having a headache. So I kept fast forwarding and skipping the part where the heroine went to school, but the rest was fine 😄 Of course, this is just my personal opinion. It's up to the author how to write it. After all, every reader is different. Some people like it and some don't. So even if the author wants to write it, I can skip it if it gives me a headache.

The plot is very exciting. People who read Wenzhaogong want this feeling. Come on, author, keep writing. As I read later, I felt more and more that I was going off topic. I kept writing about the heroine taking her family on a trip. After finishing the chapter, most of the space was devoted to writing about what to eat, the texture and taste of the food. I got so mad while writing this that I forgot about it. The first time I wrote, I tolerated going off track, but when I look at the trend later, I guess it can't be changed. The author may like to add a lot of daily journals to the article. Moreover, the contents of the chapters are becoming more and more routine. The protagonist publishes a book, which attracts everyone's attention, and everyone praises it. The protagonist is secretly happy for a while, then goes to school for exams, travels during the holidays, writes about food, and then writes an article to express his travel experience. Then the article is quoted in the textbook, and after the trip, he returns home and goes to school, and so on.

The early stage is really dull, and the character design has nothing particularly outstanding, like a running account diary (and I don't know why, although the author's heroine behaves naturally, it always gives me a very urgent and depressing feeling. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that the heroine is in a critical period when she is about to take the high school entrance examination?). However, if you keep writing according to the title of the book, the follow-up should be more and more exciting, so please encourage me.

It's very interesting, a pure and enjoyable story, with no villains. All the fun points of a Wenzhaogong type of novel are there. The protagonist has a smooth journey, there are no villains, and the background is China, the best in the world, and other countries are like vassals. This is really cool.

There are a lot of daily articles written. I am not very interested in daily life, so I skipped it. The article is very young. I hope there will be more. Come on, author. The release of Sherlock Holmes is in holographic mode, which is relatively new and allows the audience to interact immersively. At present, I have tied it. I read that the heroine's idea is to write Dream of Red Mansions, and she has already written Journey to the West, but I think I won't talk about Journey to the West for now. Although it is a bit outrageous, it's okay. Is Dream of Red Mansions really something that the heroine can write at her age? This is as outrageous as a person with no experience writing "To Live". I hope the author will carefully consider the book he will write later.

The little daily life written by the author is super warm and beautiful~ The plot is also very smooth. Some parts are relatively flat, but the author is definitely a novice! So awesome!!

I finally came across a girl's comic book. It has no slap-in-the-face plot, no super relatives, and not even a male protagonist. It mainly focuses on a career line, but the ending is a bit hasty. The protagonist has just graduated from college. I can write a lot more, but overall it is still generous 👍

The author's writing is really beautiful. I like this kind of writing that doesn't require fighting for excellence. Some of the descriptions are too exaggerated. It's all about fighting for excellence both online and offline.

Please, author, please don't finish it and write more. You can write it until the heroine is fifty or sixty years old. [Sending my heart] It's hard to find a novel that suits my taste. (Looking at the comments, I found that some people asked the author not to finish it, so I was worried that the author would finish it.)