Divine Commentary on the Opening: I Destroyed the Fantasy Continent

Su Daundun, a professional online commentator, has criticized hundreds of thousands of bad books, and finally sprayed herself into the book. He was transformed into cannon fodder in the fantasy novel of the same name. At the beginning, his spiritual root was broken and he was left in the back mountain to die. The original work explains her ending in just one sentence: "The female disciple didn't make it through." Su Tao:? ? ? At a critical moment, [Divine Review System·Plot Correction Officer] is activated—— If you criticize a bully negatively, thunder will strike the white lotus from the sky. Complaining about the bad plot, the kitchen elder is haunted by nightmares and changes the food. Comment on the dog-blood setting, the spiritual root repair technique and the one-stop upgrade. The other time-traveling girls were careful to develop, but she directly responded: "This villain has a negative IQ, I suggest you re-create him." Later, she squirted all over the continent. The male protagonist who bullied her was sprayed by her until his heart collapsed. The cold and mysterious sweeper's true identity was revealed by her. The bloody and vulgar plot was rewritten on the spot by her spray. It is being spread throughout the continent: It is better to offend the King of Hell than to offend the poisonous tongue Su Daotai. Until one day, the sweeper blocked her in a corner and said, "You said I was a sultry monster before. What did you mean?" Su Taonan:... Wait, is this character biased? [Easy and funny + venomous tongue-in-cheek + fast-paced and refreshing writing + sweet pets without abuse, the female protagonist carries the whole story, and the male protagonist is a loyal dog who protects his wife, so you won't lose money if you invest in it.