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Long time no see Tom, the writing in the new book is better, and there is an evil god in front, so there is no need to worry about the plot. Don't worry, I really like Uncle Tom's books. Come on! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

Chapter Twenty-Eight: Well, although the second heroine's rampage plot made my blood pressure very high, the cosmic space that followed the latest chapter relieved the pressure caused by the previous chapters. It's even a straight shot, I hope this book can survive well) The rest of the plot is similar to traveling through time and becoming the heroine Golden Finger. Although it was initially aimed at being a real evil god and redeeming villains. As a result, I now realize that it is actually an incompetent father who watches his daughters fighting on the bed but can do nothing about it. Of course, maybe it will be different when there are people in the future? )

Lao Tang, I have read your Evil God before, but after a few chapters I felt it was boring and left. Regarding this book, to be honest, most of the cool male protagonists in the current category were read in just a few chapters without any delay. Laotang's method is to let the female protagonist eat it first, and then the male protagonist doesn't know whether he will have a chance to eat it... Although according to the setting, the male protagonist will not be able to get pregnant in a short time. This creates a sense of fragmentation in depicting interactions. You can't be a human beast, can you? That's even more curious. If possible, it is best to add "someone will be born later" in the introduction. (If there is one in your outline) I hope this book does better. Tom, if you submit this book to other websites, I think the results will be more impressive.

Let me talk about Tom's books. They are one of the few books that I like in the fantasy genre. Novelty is his characteristic. The description of the characters also made my eyes shine. The plot is delicate and novel. There are many things I want to say but my ability to express them is really limited. To sum up, this is it. It's so good, I love watching it and want to watch it again! You must keep writing it! ! !

Tom is so short, but as long as you live, it is guaranteed to be updated (the last book was updated continuously for a year and a half), the writing is guaranteed, and it is handsome every day. Is there any chance that our outrageous title will return?

Come on, big brother who writes about the emperor's uncle, you must survive this time [blowing kiss]

Laotang, as handsome as ever, with humorous strokes and dramatic development, is very much like your previous one [Like][Like]

The author of Western fantasy time travel novels is already very authoritative in this area. But the protagonist of this movie is an animal, so we can only watch the female protagonist act cool. There is some lily in the middle. Looking forward to the male protagonist becoming a human being and the follow-up plot of the female protagonist. It would have been better if Victor's character was used. But the male protagonist sees the female protagonist from the perspective of his father, so it is unlikely...

I thought it was Lily when I read the comments, but I still trust Tom. After reading it, it's still good-looking. It's not Lily. It doesn't matter whether the heroine likes other people or not. She is very diligent in updating more than 6,000 words every day. I still support [Like]

Tom's writing ability is still so strong [shy] Different from the first book, the male protagonist of this book has become a crow, still a familiar player template, and through exquisite background settings, the characters are more vivid. I hope Tom can persist in finishing the book this time [please update]

The character image is well established (for the time being, the image of the evil girl is getting better and better, I hope the image will not collapse in the later period, the plot will also be there, and there will be other female protagonists (but I am relieved to have the evil god in front [smile])

It looks good, you must stick to it.

The design of the female characters is very good, but one thing that makes me feel inferior to the previous book is that they have to have some emotional and psychological connections with other men [rolls eyes]. The previous book did not have this problem. This book is nt l, that is, it is awesome for other people, and can stimulate readers' inexplicable emotions [smirk], but I personally still hope to design 1 or 2. No direct contact with other men yet

The book is still as good as before, with its own style, and it can be said to be unique among fantasy novels. However, the plot of this book is obviously a lot longer than the previous one. Although it continues some of the previous successful experiences, it is obviously not as exciting as the previous one, and it is not as handsome as the previous one. The protagonist is The form of crow and cat lacks a sense of substitution, and the plot coherence and rationality are relatively weak. For example, Sif goes berserk, and the plot twist of the death of the "original male protagonist" is quite abrupt, which makes people feel that the coherence is not strong. In short, this book has great potential, but also has many shortcomings. It needs the author to polish it carefully, and haste makes waste.

It's very good-looking, and the world view is very attractive. The setting that the protagonist can merge with the out-of-control villainess to form a boss is also very novel. But since the introduction says that the villain is a villain, I don't know if the original heroine will be included [I personally hope not, after all, I read a lot of villain stories and finally accepted the protagonist. I hope there are only seven heroines, not more [I'm about to cry]]

I finally waited for you. Fortunately, I didn't give up. It's a familiar taste and looks good.

At first, I read The Harem, but now I read it as a normal novel. I have read 45 chapters so far. The characterization is really successful. The main character Abe does not have that much role. Many of the male supporting actors are also very eye-catching. But to be honest, if you don't follow the setting, you really have to kill the Seven Virtues in the end. It is very difficult to arrange a decent ending for seven positive characters who have to die. I think the first one is quite reasonable.

To be honest, this book is not as good as Evil God's, especially at the beginning, I felt a bit baffled. I like Evil God very much and have read it several times, so I am looking forward to Tom's new book. Although the new book does not meet my expectations, it is a new book after all, so I still support it [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

Lao Tang's writing is still as good as ever, but compared to Victor, the setting of this book is a bit unflattering, and the defeat of CG is more or less a beast. . . The character descriptions in this book are very vivid, and a very ambitious heroine is described at the beginning. For those who can accept the setting of this book, as long as the quality remains online, it must be a masterpiece behind the scenes. It is a pity that I cannot accept the setting, but it does not prevent me from giving a good review

There is a plot that some people may not be able to accept, which is that the author distributes benefits by tying the wings of the harem into knots. If you can accept it, just keep reading. If you can't accept it, just leave. Still a eunuch, he's dead

The five stars are for trusting Tom. It seems that there is nothing wrong with the writing so far. It's just that some of the characters are a bit unlikable, and the current story is prone to high blood pressure. I hope the plot will get better later.

I finally waited for a new book, and this one is okay. Hope to live. The battle plot is still quite enjoyable, but the emotions are no longer as delicate.

There is no need to say much about the taste of Tom's new book. It still follows the style of the old book. If you like the behind-the-scenes and villains of Western fantasy, you can read it. But the author is still in the transition period, and it is difficult to guarantee whether he will die young. (Outrage from readers of the first two experimental books [anger])

From my perspective, this book is like a deity sent down from heaven to earth, not like it was written by a layman on earth!

Tom, whom I haven't seen for a long time, and the familiar crow, I want to keep writing.

Tom's new book looks absolutely good so far. Check it out.

Tom's new book, Come Back, has those outrageous titles and harmonious content

Come on, Tom. I came from Victor. I have read the book since it only had a few dozen chapters. I hope this book can continue the glory of your Western Fantasy.

A very excellent work. This book by Old Tom perfectly inherits the writing style of the previous work. I hope that more readers will not misunderstand that this is an otome novel just because of the beginning. Read it carefully and dig into the details of the book. This book has the same potential as the previous one. I hope that Old Tom will continue to work hard!

Why is the rating so low? This movie is really good, but some parts may be a little inconsistent. The knight part is a little bit worse, but the heroine is very lovable. I'll save a few months to watch it and enjoy it [Thinking]