Honkai: Dedicate a Beautiful Yandere to the Honkai World

T1 level writing, don't ask why it's not T0, because T0 is in the miHoYo writing team. Basically, there is nothing sinister about it. I haven't read a novel in a long time, and I was so excited when I read it! If I want to write better and longer in the later period, then let the storm come more violently! ! ! I want to see a river of blood! ! ! ! ! Didn't I tell you that there is healing and warmth in the dam?

A relatively good fan novel [Send Heart], the writing is good, but the plot still needs improvement, and the slow progress makes it feel too draggy (that's how I felt anyway). Everything else is fine, I hope it can speed up the relationship between the heroines [cool]

It's so delicate. The protagonist is not just a strategy machine. He behaves like a normal human being and likes others normally. If the author realizes his mistake, he will correct it

The author has written the yandere that I really want to see. It's too gravity-defying [laughs evilly] and it's too strong and mouthy! ! ! Can the protagonist be strengthened? He is a bit impatient. His ribs were broken after being elbowed by Kiana (Kong Lu) [Eat melon]. Moreover, the protagonist will comfort himself before each simulation that "it's just a part-time job." Can the rewards be richer? [Please update] (The following personal perception contains spoilers, my expression may be one-sided, so read with caution) Yes, author, the Heavenly Vault chapter describes the real sufferings of the Honkai series and the inner struggle and fear of the protagonist on the way to becoming a savior, instead of the clichéd harem of Honkai Impact. I look forward to your follow-up plot. I just hope that Mei Zhaole is not so tight, and at least it is for those who are selected to become the savior. The middle simulation chapter is in a calm daily life, and Kiana instantly opens the Immortal Sky Law form to the protagonist and shoots the Archon Spear. Mei Zhi wanted Kiana not to hurt the protagonist, but in the end, he opened the Thunder Law instantly. The spear of the Archon that struck Mei Zhao's body incidentally made the protagonist scorched on the outside and tender on the inside. Then Jiuxiao reacted again and said, "I can save anyone." No, it's all my fault. In this case, let's just sink together. I also threw one skill at Mei Zhao, Lei Lu and Kong Lu. When I watched it, I was so confused [face covering] that I did a crazy thing to the protagonist, the legendary backstab king.

Just looking at the title, I thought this was another fanfic where the characters' emotions were completely written out or skipped directly. But to be honest, this book gave me a great shock. The emotional drama is very delicate. It is simply a rare gold in the history of Tomato fan fiction.

Regarding the author's literary level, the writing is definitely good, but it seems a bit too depressing, the pace is too long, and the protagonist has no reward after mission after mission, which makes me feel a little sick. This book should be the most stressful protagonist I have ever read on Tomato. The overall score here is 3.5 Stars, which is above medium.

The writing of this book is excellent, the description is delicate and vivid, and the words and sentences are precise and clever, making the scenes and characters come alive on the page. The content is rich and in-depth, and the plot has ups and downs. It is a masterpiece worth savoring.

She has her own ideas, and even the female bishop has come, digging a lot of holes. I am afraid that the author ran away halfway. The change of mentality of the protagonist is very reasonable and not abrupt, but the update speed is not good. The problem is that Tomato readers have adapted to invincible novels. It may be difficult for most people to suddenly have such a weak protagonist. Yes, the fight between Qi Maomao and Fu Hua was too weak, and it might scare some people away, and there was a high probability of a knife behind her. Ai Li felt like she was going to die again, so just in case, I was prepared to run away in advance in case I was knifed (I can't think of how the protagonist will survive at the moment, and I can't understand the hope. I hope the author can grasp the span of his combat power. Come on!)

It's been a long time since I've seen such a honest story about Beng San Yong Jiao. It doesn't just have a simple emotional line. The protagonist doesn't look like a stallion at all, but a living person with his own thoughts. The writing is very delicate and the emotional line is also well written. It deserves five stars [heartfelt]

It's really good. Compared to other Honkai fan fiction, Invincible is much better. It's not so brainless or stupid, and the emotional lines are delicate [Like]

It's well written. It's a great book. I highly recommend reading it. It just feels a little bit delayed and there is a little too much inner drama. It could be a little more streamlined and the pace faster. Of course, this is just a personal opinion. Anyway, cheers, author. [Blowing kiss]

It's a very novel way of writing. It opens up another simulation track. It's quite interesting. As for the main plot, it's basically original, but the level is still online. However, I feel that the whole book is still a bit depressing. The current quality is quite good, but this writing method may collapse in the middle and later stages. It will be difficult to control the characters when there are more characters in the future. This is a common problem of most simulation books.

Among the Honkai literature I have read, it is considered a high-quality one. The characterization is also good. It probably has the potential to be a book rated 8.9 Or above. Especially the daily life in it is not as straightforward as other books. It is step-by-step. It can be seen that it is written with care. I hope the author can continue to write more. After all, there are not many new Honkai fan fiction books, and the writing style is not bad. It is already a very good Honkai literature.

There may be quite a bit of redundancy and repetitive descriptions in it, which may seem a little uncomfortable, but its large volume and saturated content make up for this very well, which shows that as long as there are more, all problems will automatically collapse😀

This book is very good in terms of writing style and plot, especially the update speed and the quality of the articles. It's just too depressing, and it's depressing enough in real life, so I still like to read romantic comedies in novels, which are more relaxing. If you don't plan to read romantic comedies or like light-hearted novels, this book is well worth reading.

I finished using the watch in school in two days. It is really one of the top ones I have read among the Bengsandong humanities. Although it does have some flaws, if you haven't read it before, you can watch it from beginning to end and it feels pretty good.

The writing is good and the characters are well drawn. If I maintain this level, I can write a very good article. Come on! ! ! I already don't understand. There is no real ending to the whole process. There are foreshadowings everywhere, and then a section of content is suddenly disconnected and restarted for a period of time. The protection can be said to be close to nothing. After the warmth, there is a completely unfaceable disaster. There is no solution at all. It's purely for the sake of knife. Note: I have abandoned the book because I don't want to accept the plot. I really don't like the follow-up. I am even a little angry. I feel that the author's treatment of the candle is purely villainous. I don't even want to read about possible whitewashing measures in the follow-up. The male protagonist is incompetent and has a cowardly personality, and he probably won't take revenge on Zhuhuo in the future. What is the difference between this kind of behavior of desperately attacking others for the sake of justice and the researchers of the Tower of Babel, who involved completely innocent people in order to fight against Honkai, and finally raised the next Siren? This kind of organization is purely for the purpose of disgusting people. In addition, it is not possible to think of all crimes as rational choices by putting on a layer of omnic skin.

The first part is okay, but later the author enters an area that he is not good at. Recommended for those under 14 years old

I'm still reading First Patch and Fu Hua's Daily Life, which is great. For me, this ordinary daily life has a different feeling, and my usual reading method of reading ten lines at a glance has become a conscious slow reading.

New account, so the time is not enough It's a very good novel. I recommend reading it. The emotions are described very delicately and the plot is also very good. It's just that the protagonist is still too weak now, and his ability to resist pressure is broken. I hope Mei Zhao can feel less stressed in the future.

I have read so many fics, and this is the first time I have such a feeling. The novel ideas and writing methods make me addicted. I stayed up late one day to read this, and I couldn't bear to lock the author in a small dark room to read more chapters in a day. But I hope the author can write some truly warm and sweet posts in the follow-up. Mei Zhao also needs these, and it is unbearable to be kept in the depressing melody.

The author's writing is very good. Maybe it's because I can't bear it. The more I read, the more angina pectoris I feel [I'm about to cry] (I'm convinced (I'm convinced)). But it just shows that the author's writing is deeply rooted in people's hearts. The summary is very good. [Send heart][Like]

There are no big problems with the plot logic, and the writing is pretty good. There are 9 real prisons. From the first simulation, you are all in jail.

There are a large number of updated chapters, the emotional descriptions are delicate and rich, and the plot development is coherent and ups and downs. There is no obvious poisonous point, the yandere is portrayed, the development process is well written, and there are many humorous aspects. The only problem may be that some plots are mentioned several times and are suspected of being watery, but this is acceptable if the author is a new author and the amount of updates is large. Maintaining the current level and writing down the score should be more than 8.0. All in all, it's a great article about Bengsanyangjiao, the author, come on, meow [I've learned it] Compared with the sadistic/sweet/lovable plots that are common in yandere novels, I feel more about the tiredness of the male protagonist here, the kind of heartfelt exhaustion that comes home after working all day and doesn't want to do anything, doesn't want to think about anything, and just slumps there, as well as the kind of despair that can't see the end and doesn't know when to stop [Petrified]

I really like this book. The emotional scenes are of the type that I rarely feel are top-notch. The last time I felt this way, it was given to me by Lao Xu next door. The various perspectives are also very unique. It is a unique and rare book.

When I saw Chapter 43, I just felt that the author's literary talent is 100 million times better than mine. No, I shouldn't be compared with you [crying] Anyway, it's very good. There is no particularly oppressive and despairing pain, but a happy ending of family fun.

The writing style is very good, so far there are no poisonous points, I hope it can continue to be like this.

It's not appropriate to say too much. My evaluation is very good. It is a nine-point masterpiece that will grow in the future. If you also like Honkai Impact, there is no doubt that you will have the same feeling as me.

I felt a little depressed after watching it for too long. I watched it from 11pm to 5am, and from 8am to 2pm. I feel like I need to rest for a while before reading. It's not about this book, it's probably because I didn't get enough rest. Well written, come on, little meow. I'll wait a while before reading. Lao Zhao is one of the few prison characters in the books I've read. When it comes to game characters, the first thing that comes to mind is Ranger. I'm going to digress.

The writing is good, and the plot and characters are well grasped. It's just that using AI to help can be replaced by a better AI. The eight-part essay written by Google's AI is a bit uncomfortable to watch. If you can, try DeepSeek. If it's better, try French Claude [Chigua].