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The writing is good. It is not invincible from the beginning, and all kinds of ideas can be understood by readers. There is no classic retarded approach of not making any defenses when there are enemies outside, waiting to make up for the situation. A very advanced author, looking forward to more updates.

The writing style is exquisite and the sense of substitution is strong. Tomato Western Fantasy DND is a rare good book. Real gold can only be found in the sand of big waves! I hope the author will update more, and I hope the author will shine once this book becomes famous!

I feel that the author is an old author. It is a rare piece of pure Western fantasy. The writing style is stable and smooth. The conflict, climax, and advancement are all well depicted. The writing style is inexplicably familiar, as if you are at the starting point.

A good novel. It would be nice if the system could be more flexible to use. For example, if the salt quality of the system is poor, the salt purified by yourself should also be able to manually record the model by consuming energy. This is more optimized

⭐⭐⭐⭐ Orthodox D&D has rare themes and rare authors. It can be seen that age fidelity is true, and he is indeed middle-aged with Internet addiction. Good looking, comfortable and smooth. It's just slow, the rhythm is not fast, and the music is not fast either. The start is slow but reasonable. It is to explain the system capabilities and the starting point of the protagonist. It's all good so far, I hope the author will continue to write more.

It's a good read, a slow-burning article, but cool articles are still popular on Tomato. The audience for Sai Wan is already small, and the audience for Horse and Slash is even smaller. It's not that some cool articles are missing [face covering] However, the author's writing skills make up for this, and it feels very good. As long as the subsequent development can be a little more exciting, the results should be very good, if the number of viewers increases. It should get a rating of 8.5 Or above I think the author has the idea of transformation and no longer emphasizes the content of horse riding and slashing [laughing]

I used AI to write a theme song for this book, "The Wilderness of Homecoming". The singer is: Michael Crazy. Everyone is welcome to search and listen to it on Soda Music. This is the first novel I have written. Nowadays, there are too few authors of DND rules or Western fantasy novels! I couldn't find anything to read, so I tried to write one myself. I'm sorry that I couldn't complete the million-word creation according to the outline. The main reason is that the book was suddenly stopped from being recommended. Due to lack of positive feedback, I had to finish it quickly! I hope to bring you better works in the future. Thank you to my readers who support me.

Come on, it looks pretty good, but the essence of riding and slashing is explosive troops! The progress is a bit slow. I want to see the scene of recruiting Faerun's local troops, upgrading them all to elite soldiers, and then leveling up the wilderness and evil races! ! !

I hope the author can stick to it, it has the charm of Robinson Crusoe

The writing is very delicate. If more stories of other supporting characters can be added, the book will be more three-dimensional. The protagonist can write more daily life, and it feels like the pace of development will be faster. [Praise]

In my opinion, the quality of this novel is definitely acceptable. I hope you, the author, can persevere, come on! Come on! Come on!

The rhythm of the story is very good, it is very comfortable to watch, and the psychological process of the protagonist is also very delicate. It is a "story" about a middle-aged man's adventure through a different world. The protagonist is sometimes calm and sometimes aggressive, but fortunately, he has a systematic way of knowing the basics. The system in this article actually doesn't have a strong presence. At present, it seems that it has no other help except for making weapons and providing super recovery ability for the protagonist. This is very good. After all, talents are the key point of a story. I hope the author will work hard and the data will get better and better!

I wasn't used to the writing of Goldfinger at the beginning, it had too strong of a game feel, but after the plot unfolded, the writing was quite good. I haven't played the related games and I don't know much about the related memes, but that doesn't stop me from being able to watch it in the end. The only thing that makes me act is this golden finger [face covering]

The writing is very good. At present, it only shows a glimpse of Faerûn. The protagonist slowly grows up and integrates into this world. It is really good-looking and I hope it can give us readers a complete story.

In the early stage, I felt like watching "Robinson Crusoe", but many novels about desert island survival cannot express this feeling. The protagonist uses wisdom and hard work in a systematic way to gain growth and wealth from the generous and just nature. I have just read the beginning and it is very attractive. I hope it will get better and better in the future.

What did I see? It has characterization, an overall structure, a calm background introduction, a relaxed and relaxed rhythm, smooth and appropriate language, vivid and vivid pictures, a plot that advances layer by layer, and suspense that constantly emerges. An online article written like a serious novel. It can also attract attention quickly. The author is a master.

The previous chapter was relatively dull, but the latest chapter where the protagonist and the hunter face off is very exciting. The advantage is that the writing is solid and the emotions are delicate; the puzzling point is that the author seems to have an obsession with building houses, building houses everywhere, and I don't know if they will be used again; for me, the description of homesickness is a bit too much. I would like to ask if the author has any other works before. There has been a shortage of books recently.

How does the protagonist obtain electrolytes? I didn't see the protagonist find a salt mine or drink animal blood. Chapter thirty-seven is a sure-win game, but the author insists on writing it as full of dangers. There is no huge difference in attributes between the protagonist and the Jackal. The only difference is that he has higher combat experience than the protagonist. Moreover, both sides have armor and cannot achieve an instant kill. The protagonist can replenish his physical strength and blood at any time while fighting. If the protagonist's weapon is broken and is knocked over by a stone, then the system can be used to make a stone spike on the spot, and the jackal will prick the protagonist's neck directly when it pounces on the protagonist's body.

It's pretty good, but the title of the book isn't very good. I used too much AI later.

Always wanting to go home is toxic to me, but other things are good

200,000 Words. The protagonist has not yet obtained a profession. He relies on the panel of Mount and Blade 2. He can add points, mount and slash skills and creations, but he has no expertise or supernatural abilities. I look forward to what profession the author will arrange for the protagonist in the next step.

It looks okay so far, and the plot is reasonable. I hope it won't collapse in the future. All in all, you can watch it, so cheers for the author.

It's really good-looking. It incorporates elements of riding and slashing and the setting of the Western Magical Continent world. Although I have read many books of a similar style, this one gave me a different feeling. Still highly recommended

It's quite innovative and there are no routines. After reading more than 20 chapters, I felt that the protagonist was afraid of society. The protagonist is in the wilderness and seems to have no desire to explore a strange world. He spends all day with a few sheep and is inexplicably emotionally attached to a parrot. The author writes the wasteland so peacefully that the protagonist seems to be in a peaceful world. The protagonist also does not explore humans or other advanced species. He clearly knows that this is a threatening alien world, but he has a system and does not enhance his abilities. He spends all day being sentimental and chatting with animals, so he is passive everywhere. To be honest, the character of the protagonist is not suitable for a dangerous alien world and is suitable for farming. Does the author think it's appropriate to take three wolves with him when he goes out? Can he guarantee that the wolves won't bite? I have to watch three wolves all day long. The wolves want to eat, drink and poop, and there is a smell.

It's slow-paced but very interesting. It takes too long to enter the world of Faerûn at the beginning, but it's very interesting. The armored goblins don't have the power of professionals and it's unreasonable, but it's very interesting. Come on author

7.5-9 Points, the tempo is very slow but it's pretty good to watch. Except for the wave in the middle where you just have to fight kobolds or other monsters to create a sneak attack at night, the rest is pretty good. System space that was not available was also obtained. A very good riding and slashing system dnd. I just don't know if I can use specialization points to add magic later, and I hope there will be a bloodthirsty mod. Bloodthirsty and capable of growth [laughing evilly]

The writing style is not like that of a tomato [laughing] It is currently a little low on combat help, but quite high on life assistance, and it is a relatively slow-burning type.

The duel with the jackal is really good. Come on, author.

In the tired and repetitive work of the real world, adult fairy tales are the best spiritual haven. For me, this book is my fairy tale!

It's very beautiful, it feels like playing a game and taking an adventure, but it's just too little.