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There are a lot of details, which are good, but some are too cumbersome. It is very logical and a book worth reading. My suggestion is to delete some cumbersome details and focus on expressing the character's emotions, personality and other details.

There is a task that requires me to write a book review, and I am embarrassed to give it a five-star review (*≧∪≦)👍🏻. If you have any suggestions, you can tell me and I will try my best to modify it. I often come to the novel software to read book reviews, only to find that the Tomato Writer Assistant sometimes does not show up or is easily liked by other novels, which is very embarrassing ໒꒰ྀིっ˕ -｡꒱ྀི১. My level is average, so please bear with me. I am interested in writing novels. In fact, I still want to write too many female protagonists who are defeated dogs. Practical teaching. Ellie's fans can't write this month. Unfortunately, you can also tell me what kind of novels you want to see. I will write again, maybe I have to watch the drama and look for the plot, and I also wrote about Demon Slayer. Unfortunately, I couldn't stand the writing and it looked awkward (´--`；). I will try my best to write it not so ugly＼(`Δ')／

After looking at the author's catalog, there were both male and female videos, so I asked, "How do you feel?" They're all similar

Now that you replied to me, I have good reviews [laughs]

It looks and feels okay

Why do I feel like I'm watching BL?

Is he a drifter, a male drifter or a female drifter?