[System + Monster Development + Cool Text + Multiple Female Leads]
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(Super God in the early stage, Ultra Multiverse in the later stage) In order to save people, Lei Hao was sent into the ranks of the time-travelers by a large truck, and became the cannon fodder Leonix in the Reblondo Proving Ground. Just when Lei Hao, who only had one Sadra in his hand, was desperate, the system brought him an evolutionary trustworthy person. Later, Lei Hao was sucked into the earth of other universes by the broken dimensional wall during the battle with the Leiblondos. As soon as he arrived, he saw a humanoid mecha creature firing lasers at a policewoman. Wait, isn't that Qilin?
Reader comments
The idea is good, but the protagonist's position is not clear before. After all, it is not clear whether he is helping Deno or China. If there was no conspiracy theory version, the pitfalls of the previous director would have to be filled in, but the author did not deal with it and chose to blur the details. Secondly, there are too many emotional lines, but the dialogue is too stiff. My suggestion is that novices can try a novel with a single female protagonist. If they don't know how to write a love story, they can just choose a novel without a female protagonist. Because there will also be people who like "I don't care who you are, my goal is to kill you if you stand in the way" or you can choose to have a woman or not a female protagonist. I have some problems with these aspects, but everything else is fine. Come on.
Not bad. If the protagonist is Ultraman Nexus, when will the form of Ultraman Noah be unlocked? If the protagonist unlocks the form of Ultraman Noah and becomes Ultraman Noah, he is already invincible.
As other people have commented, the author still needs to polish it. The theme concept of the work is very good, but it is a pity that the writing style and rhythm are poor. It is worth reading and then quit after you are satisfied [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
Let's work and I'll give you some help.
The front is good, stay tuned for the back, come on
The idea is good, but the protagonist's position is not clear before. After all, it is not clear whether he is helping Deno or China. If there was no conspiracy theory version, the pitfalls of the previous director would have to be filled in, but the author did not deal with it and chose to blur the details. Secondly, there are too many emotional lines, but the dialogue is too stiff. My suggestion is that novices can try a novel with a single female protagonist. If they don't know how to write a love story, they can just choose a novel without a female protagonist. Because there will also be people who like "I don't care who you are, my goal is to kill you if you stand in the way" or you can choose to have a woman or not a female protagonist. I have some problems with these aspects, but everything else is fine. Come on.
Not bad. If the protagonist is Ultraman Nexus, when will the form of Ultraman Noah be unlocked? If the protagonist unlocks the form of Ultraman Noah and becomes Ultraman Noah, he is already invincible.
As other people have commented, the author still needs to polish it. The theme concept of the work is very good, but it is a pity that the writing style and rhythm are poor. It is worth reading and then quit after you are satisfied [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]
Let's work and I'll give you some help.
The front is good, stay tuned for the back, come on