The Story of How I Transmigrated and Became a Girl

I originally wanted to ask if it was AI, because the use of words and punctuation in some places was weird. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I was relieved. I am a pure new author. I don't see any faults with the plot yet, but the description is a common problem for new writers: a person's way of speaking is prone to be OOC in certain details, and there are also inappropriate metaphors and psychological activities in some places. In short, the future is bright, so keep going.

The writing is okay, but I don't know if I'm married or single.

Everything looks pretty good so far 🙂 A plain yet helpless and somewhat naive heroine

Not bad, suits my taste