Long Aotian, He Smells so Good

It's very beautiful, the emotions are very natural and full of emotions, and I really love the writing style😍 But can the author arrange a plot where Shou falls in love with someone else, or loses his memory and falls in love with someone else, and fights against the emperor for his lover. I want to see the emperor in despair. It still makes me a little uncomfortable that he has so many confidante.

This setting is quite fresh and fun, so far it looks good. Gong's setting is a bit like the Chinese immortal version of Zeus from Greek mythology. He sows everywhere and is merciful, but he has a little more Chinese-specific implicitness than Zeus. According to other articles, he is just a rotten cucumber. This article is not whitewashed, but it seems interesting to accept this setting. The domineering emperor of the immortal version fell in love with me. The setting of Shou is a bit ordinary. This ordinary does not mean that the person is ordinary. It means that the setting is similar to that of other novels. He is innocent and cute, and has a growth-oriented protagonist. If it is a rebirth novel, his type is a scumbag mistress. But if you look at it from another angle, you will have a different feeling, because Shou is forced, not active. Later, he loves to attack. I think it is normal. Who can refuse the preference of the world? The author's writing is quite good. For now, it looks good. I don't know what will happen in the serialization later.

Emmmmm, the setting of Long Aotian, an old man and his young wife, the theme is also very novel, a bit like harem competition, the character design is very nb, a passionate prodigal, the pampering is real pampering, but if he is established as a prodigal, I don't believe he will dismiss the harem, and Shou wants to become strong enough to stand by Gong's side and become his eldest wife, which is a bit contrary to his original intention. Forgive me for not accepting this👆🏻Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. In short, cheers for the author on this track, maybe because I am not very accepting of this setting, but there are always people who like it.

It is quite normal to bring Gu into the ancient emperor, with many concubines and many heirs. Very pure ancient Long Aotian flavor. I haven't seen such an interesting setting in a long time, haha. Most of them now require double cleansing, and they are all the same. For me, I have read a lot of ancient romances and Japanese and Korean comics. I don't reject uncleanness. In fact, Zha Gong is also quite interesting. This character is interesting [Thoughts]

Why do I always feel like everyone is suffering from PUA (except the real master and sister who are suffering). Everyone (including Gong) acted like how much Gong dotes on Shou in front of Shou. But, in actual actions, Duo Ai didn't notice it, and he didn't even notice that he liked her. At most, he was a little interested in Shou...'S face and body. Between Shou and the harem of offspring, Gong firmly chose the harem of offspring. The descendants of the harem had been planning to kill Shou and almost succeeded in killing Shou. Since Gong showed so much love for Shou, even if he couldn't kill Shou to avenge him, why couldn't he even give up a little punishment. It was Ao Qing who found out that Shou was still alive and went crazy and insulted Shou many times in front of Gong. Gong felt that he had lost face and felt that the dragon clan had been too rampant recently, so he gave him some punishment. This part is really frustrating. He almost died, but he couldn't take revenge. Gong Ye and Xi Ni favored the heirs in the harem. Moreover, there are groups of wives, concubines, and lovers in the house, countless descendants, scumbag, dirty, and old, while the slave is pure, clean, and young. It is too uncomfortable to see it from the perspective of the master and slave. Gong's so-called favor only brings countless grievances and bullying to Shou. Of course, there are also some benefits, such as resources. But, as the next Long Aotian, Shou's big resources will be sent to Shou in another way even if Gong doesn't give them. Small resources, whether Gong gives them to him or not, won't delay Shou from becoming the strongest. At present, Shou is still being coaxed by Gong's sweet words and small favors, so she volunteers not to leave Gong and becomes one of Gong's harem. It doesn't matter. She is young now and has only turned 18. In modern times, she is equivalent to a high school senior. It is normal that she cannot play with older men. I just hope I can wake up later. The love of a stallion cannot be trusted.

The writing is great, but it repeatedly bounces off my favorite points and exciting points, which makes me a little bit paralyzed. It is not very friendly to the main character, but I prefer Shou. The attack and control is very enjoyable. I can't see Shou has grown much at the moment, so I'll save it first. It's 100 chapters now, but it's mainly about the struggle with Gong and his harem. In fact, I think the attack perspective is better, but the shou perspective is too frustrating. I'm really looking forward to his growth. . I personally can't accept that Gong and Shou will have relations with other people after being together (currently not), and Gong has no intention of disbanding the harem (and the harem and Gong's children will fight against Shou), then Shou will not be able to escape no matter how he develops in the future, he will only be one of Gong's harem, and he also has to deal with the issues of Gong's harem and heirs, and Shou also He is the son of the Era. He should grow up to be at least side by side with Gong. When he has strength, he will have self-esteem and cannot be subordinate to others (he couldn't resist before). He is not even a Taoist companion. I don't believe that anyone is really willing to share his lover (Gong certainly can't accept Shou having someone else). And will Shou have his own offspring (Gong's children are everywhere). My current expectation for this article is only the growth line of Shou. The main emotional line is too thin and there are not many highlights. After all, the perspective of the article is Shou, and if the Shou always has a low attack end, the attack and the harem are just like a male harem video with a double hood (the protagonist is male and female). Ze Shou almost died, but Gong didn't deal with the problem well [staring] Shou almost died, Gong let him put aside the trouble, and save the face of his children, I have no choice, I would have known better if I didn't open it, I thought there would be some reversal, and it turns out that only if I am strong, I will not suffer [Sad] There are even a group of people who are jealous of the tricks they use for themselves [Sad] [Sad]

Five stars. I respect the author's writing style. The writing style is good. I mainly sorted out my mistakes and read some. How should I put it? Attacking and controlling the attack. The person who attacks is so happy. After all, Long Aotian. , You can be careful with extreme control. After all, the attack is unclean, and the pretty kids are running around. The protagonist controller should think about it, and be careful about the double strength. After all, I looked at it, and it is a bit dead. The strength of the attack is too strong. Now the strength of the attack is weak. Unless the cheating is very powerful later, it will be difficult to catch up with it. This makes me a little isolated. After all, I feel I feel that Gong's love is like a castle in the air. Once the aura dissipates, everything may disappear, which makes me feel very uneasy. After all, Shou has no strength to back it up, and the main and Shou perspective makes me very uncomfortable. The Shuangjie Party should not enter, and the main and Shou perspective is emphasized three times. This is the main and Shou perspective, the main and Slave perspective, and the main and Slave perspective. I just saw the comment area, I thought it was from the attacking point of view, but I was tricked into killing him, [crying][crying][crying], this is an article from the main point of view. There is a huge age difference between the attacking and the sect. Currently, the scepter is clean and the attacking is unclean. The attacking concubines are not the background, and the children are not the background. [Crying][crying][crying], why am I not attacking and controlling? It would be really cool if I were attacking and controlling, but I am the main character. Role Control, this article is from the perspective of the main character and the slave. By default, the slave is the protagonist, and the official partner is a supporting role. The official partner is unclean and makes me isolated. I can accept the uncleanness, but the official partner must be clean [cry][cry][cry]. The writing is good. Omnivorous parties can advance, attack and control can enter, and others can be considered. Let's sort out the mines in the comment area, and declare again that this is the perspective of the protagonist and slave. (Don't spray if you don't like it)

It's pretty good. I haven't seen such a novel setting in a long time. For Long Aotian in ancient times, love is commonplace, let alone Long Aotian who has already had a successful career. It's good to be gifted, but it's a little sentimental in the early stages. I think it's quite good. After more than 50 chapters so far, I have changed from the original sentimentality to determination, firm goal, and the supreme path of cultivation. From the soft-hearted young master to the Qionghuajun who is both kind and powerful, this is his growth process. For me, the coercion is just the beginning and very small. More of the two go in both directions. So far, Gong and Shou are the most special ones. Find a backer for him, keep a trump card for him, prevent yourself from changing your mind in the future, and don't allow anyone to offend Shou. To reveal a little bit, Shaohua Jun and Gong are not in a romantic relationship.

This book is undoubtedly good-looking, forced to love, and super doting. The combination of multiple buffs makes people want to read it. But I have a small question, that is, why does a child of destiny go through many obstacles, gain a lot of things, and then be bullied by the wife and children of another child of destiny? In the end, he grows up and continues to lurk under that child of destiny? It is undeniable that in this kind of plot, I would very much like to see a husband-chasing crematorium... Or perhaps arrange a few "husbands" in name for "Shou", which would be very interesting.

It's very nice. It's my first time to accept this new theme and setting. Although it's not clean, it fits the ancient setting of Long Aotian. I can only say that the author is very knowledgeable and good at writing. I hope he can stick to his heart when I read the article. When I read the article, I was always afraid that he would fall into love. But now I see that he seems to be sober. I hope he can continue to grow. The author must insist on updating this article. Come on [Blow kiss]

It seems okay so far, and the author's writing style is also good. I just hope that the following development can write more about improving the strength of shou, and write less about sentimentality. If you don't have to eat Shuangjie, you can try eating it. I hope there won't be anything very sadistic in the future.

I was prepared after reading the introduction, but I was still not prepared. When I saw how many concubines there were, I couldn't stand it anymore. It would be fun to read "General Attack". I'm a bit interested in this subject for the first time, so I'll keep it on my bookshelf for further development, but I won't read it in detail [laughs] The relationship between attack and reception is the favored concubine of the emperor and the harem (if you are playful and serious, you will lose). Even a sweet favorite is a false sweet favorite. I control the main character, who is the main character and who I like. Currently, the follow-up development is acceptable: 1. Gong dismisses the harem or the harem is just empty (it is a bit impossible according to the current comment section); 2. Shou escapes from the suffering and travels to the end of the world, and the bridge returns to the bridge on the way back (a bit hanging); 3. Shou can keep in touch with Gong after leaving the harem, but at the same time he also has many lovers. 4. Kick and attack to become the new Long Aotian (the most anticipated but more uncertain).

Well, I finished reading it, and I feel pretty good about it now. First of all, it is very obvious. The subject matter is very novel and not particularly cliché. I also came here when I saw this type of tweet. However, there is a saying about this attack. It is indeed a bit Well, it's like a rotten cucumber, but overall it's pretty good. I don't have that kind of knife yet. If you can eat it, eat it, but it's still a bit of a pity. Shou should be the son of luck in this century. If he hadn't been abducted by Gong, he should be able to become a son of luck like Gong.

Read all 98 updated chapters. The author's writing style is very good, the writing is smooth, and the overall pace is not sluggish. But there are still many contradictory points. The following are some personal doubts. If there are any mistakes, please point out the teachers. 1. Although Shou was raised pampered, Shou is the new generation of Long Aotian, the son of the era. He does not have the high-spirited and wanton momentum of Long Aotian in his early days. All I can see is that Shou's emotions have been pulled and influenced by Gong. When he met Gong for the third time, he started to be shy and entangled in his heart. Although Gong was powerful, and as a favored son of God, he was definitely unwilling and disgusted to be suddenly favored by his highly talented Shou. However, from the first time he met Gong Yunyu, Gong's cheeks turned red with embarrassment when he flirted with her, and his attitude toward Gong soon began to change. He quickly accepted Gong as his husband, and felt that his feelings were excessive and had not been explained clearly. 2. In the article, there is constant friction between Shou and Gong. Whether it is the heirs or the harem, these will hurt Shou. Gong is very strong and he is confident to protect Shou, but the pressure he feels is still huge. He has to bear the eyes of outsiders, the disdain for him in the harem, and the malice of Gong's heirs. These are all due to Gong's preference for him. It is true that Gong gave Shou everything in terms of status, food, clothing, and affection, but I didn't feel any sense of relief when he supported Shou at the family banquet. What I could feel was Shou's fear of facing the evil intentions from all directions and the uneasiness of realizing the gap between himself and other harems. Of course, although Gong gave Shou authority, others were not convinced at all and despised Shou, and resented the favor Shou received from Gong. There is a lot of friction between Shou and Gong in the harem. This time Shou fell into the cracks because of the Dragon Palace and the Demon Realm, but in the end it was a matter of Gong. Moreover, Gong did not handle the relationship between Shou and the harem well. Although Yu Shou explained that his love affair with the harem was in the past, the friendship and interest entanglement of tens of thousands of years of companionship were still there. Gong could not disband the harem for Shou, not to mention that Gong and the harem still had many heirs. These will eventually be the thorns between them. 3. There are also some problems with attack. He arranged a new master for Shou to give him a backer, arranged for Shou to enter the Taoist temple, and gave Shou a chance to improve himself. He allowed Shou to improve his cultivation in the clouds and rain, and then Shou stabilized his cultivation and found the great road. These were mentioned briefly. The author's focus was wrong. He only wrote about Gong's favor, while Shou's progress in cultivation and mental maturity were simply described. Moreover, when Shou went to the monastery, he was given no offensive weapons and only life-saving supplies. In the monastery, Shou fell into a crack because he was riding a spirit boat with his hands and feet moved. When he woke up, his cassock was torn. Moreover, Shou's cultivation at that time was only at the stage of transcending tribulation. Any little immortal could kill him. Why didn't Gong take it into consideration? 4. After Gong sent Shou to the Taoist temple, didn't he consider that someone would stumble him? Although he was protected by his senior sister and Taoist Wuwei, let alone the rejection of his senior sister, Taoist Wuwei's character was not one of detail, so Gong didn't consider arranging followers to protect Shou from a distance. When Shou fell into the crack, he lost his senses because there was some formation blocking him. But wasn't his cultivation unmatched? He couldn't sense it, nor could he calculate it. Later, he calculated that it was because Shou was scolding him in his mind, but Shou also thought about him when he woke up. Why couldn't he figure it out at that time? Was it because he still had a CD to calculate? The arrangement here is somewhat inappropriate. 5. Although the experience I received was very miserable, I still gained a lot in the process. The various forms of sentient beings, God's love and responsibility to the world all pave the way for his growth. He was hunted down as a monster there, dealt with powerful monsters, and attending banquets was normal here. What makes me unhappy is that Shou fearlessly dealt with the big demon at the banquet and tried his best to find out information that he didn't understand. However, Gong pretended to be a demon and kept teasing Shou. He regarded this as just fun, which I didn't understand. 6. Shou's growth path is also not clearly described, especially in Chapter 98, the description of Shou's mental journey when he became an immortal is only about half a chapter. The previous question of asking oneself about Taoism also takes up less space, and does not reflect Shou's process of improving himself. Although Shou is powerless to resist attack, he is a child of luck after all. Try to describe Shou's own cultivation process and his detailed insights during cultivation, otherwise the image of Shou will be simplified. During the training process, Gong did the right thing and allowed Shou to further improve his strength by handling the problems on his own, but I think it is best not to tease Shou during the training process and just give some correct guidance at the appropriate time.

I was very happy to see it, and I accepted the copywriting = there were no surprises. [Stare] It's natural to be moved by my heart or to be moved by my heart. It makes me feel refreshed and happy. It's this ancient smell! This article is friendly to offense and control, and friendly to CP control who accepts copywriting, but may not be friendly to extreme control. However, Duan Ping may not be very friendly to offense and control. Anyway, I enjoyed watching it. The fast-paced and impatient one is friendly, the handsome and beautiful one is delicious, the old cow eats young grass is good, the local dog lover is friendly, and the top-notch one is refreshing and refreshing! Rejoice! Come and see. Come and see. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It looks good. The way Long Aotian is portrayed is really that. Hhhh I have a harem, but when I met Shou, I really doted on her. Although Shou is a little tempted now, she has always insisted on practicing. I like it.

It has nothing to do with controlled attack and control. People with normal views on love should have a hard time accepting the relationship between attacker and receiver. But as long as you don't take it, it doesn't matter. I clicked in just to taste how old it is. [Laughing] It's exactly the same as what my aunt saw. Hahaha, my mother's favorite. After reading a few chapters, my brain is much smoother. It's very interesting. Recommended [Adoration] [Adoration] [laughing]

What can I say? It feels good, but the following is just my personal opinion. I can accept the romance with him, but I can't accept being attracted to him. I don't like reading it very much. I just like to read the kind of dog-playing literature. It should be said that it is similar to chasing Shou all the time.

It's okay. I feel like I'm not loving enough at the moment. I may need some opportunities. The subject matter is quite new. I hope Yun Gui can protect himself, keep his sincerity, practice well, and see a bigger and more beautiful world.

I read it in one sitting, the writing is smooth, the logic is coherent, and the characters are not too broken. In ancient times, Long Aotian had a complete physical attack and had children in the harem. Then he fell in love with Shou at first sight and robbed her. Now Shou has just left the novice village, and then he fell into Shou's hands. He is tempted, but he has not become a love mind. I read that the sisters in the comment area all advise their children to practice well, focus on the great road, and not be addicted to love. Author, you should listen to this advice.

The world of the harem is transformed into a version of the harem world. The plot I have seen for the time being feels a bit like Zhen Huan when she has expectations for the emperor. It might be more comfortable to watch if I can break away from love in the future, but the XP difference is too big, and I have a bit of a mysophobia towards the protagonist who is a sweet pet, so I am not ready to continue watching. This article should be more suitable for people who like to read this article. Although Gong maintains many emotional relationships, he loves Shou the most and has the most special feelings for him.

Hey hey hey, I'm here to avoid lightning for all book friends. The subject matter of this series is very interesting. If you like it, I will read it. Can the author update ten chapters a day? Hehe 1. Attack uncleanness, having many children from various concubines (concubines are both male and female, and those who have slept with each other) (not four or five) 2. Shou will be bullied in various ways, all because of Gong, and Gong will support Shou, but he will help Shou, but there are also accidents. For example, if you attack the daughter of one of the concubines and kill Shou, then the attack will only punish you, but will not actually kill the daughter, and Shou will not be able to 3. Anyone who is weak can be bullied first, but they will grow (even if it is of no use, they will still be bullied, and the attacker will only feel distressed, and then it will be gone after being punished). Gong will not favor Shou because Gong is the most powerful and has many responsibilities. His confidante has been through life and death together, so he will not change anything for Shou. 4. It's just that I have a bitchy personality (not a curse). I know that Gong Fengliu has many children and would be unfair and scumbag to him, but I still fall in love with Gong and feel sad because of Gong. 5. Gong has had relationships with most of the people Shou knows, and most of them love Gong (both men and women) 6. Getting along with both attacker and sufferer is quite sweet, but it would be very depressing if you take the perspective of the sufferer. After all, the weak never choose power. 7... There are still a few more, I will add them slowly.

Immortal version of the harem. After getting together with Shou, I didn't break up with anyone else. Shou is the ancient emperor's preference for his beloved concubine. I am a bit of a mystique. Reading this book is purely for abuse, but this is my reason. The author's writing is indeed good.

It's so cool, Long Aotian's perspective is so cool

Pretty good(?) But ① don't let in those who are extremely controlled, don't let in those who are unclean, don't let in those who love heartthrobs, don't let in those who love cool guys, don't let in those who love handsome people… don't let in those who habitually dream about three people, don't let in those who habitually use the protagonist as a holster, leave those who are disgraced, and those who are addicted to others. In short, the writing is okay, and the plot is okay (not yet in the career line), but I personally don't like the protagonist with this kind of personality. I think it would not be inappropriate to change the protagonist's gender. Because it is a serialization, the plot is not much. I wonder if the protagonist's youthful spirit will be shown in the future? Still shy about love

It's quite good to read. I'm having a bit of a fight between my left and right brains. I feel so angry. I'm talking to Xini [smile]. I also feel that the writing is pretty good. I can still read it for a while, so I just finished it. I'm looking forward to the author's next plot [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I really think this book is very interesting. I was really bothered before, but after I met Shou, the prodigal son turned around and recognized him. I will give him my love and my only preference. If Shou has any uneasy thoughts, he will solve them as soon as possible to give Shou a sense of security. I really appreciate it! Shou is not a dodder flower. He will grow up step by step.

Very beautiful! Very beautiful! It looks so cool, totally my xp! I hope Yun Gui can become stronger in the later stage and throw Long Aotian behind him. I took a big bite of the literature about the old enemy of Demon Lord and Long Aotian. I thought it was interesting to write about the story of the two of them when the wife is thinking about the extra chapter. Now with more than 150 chapters of the plot, I feel that Yun Gui still has to go through a lot. I originally thought that I would not accept the setting of Long Aotian having so many harems and heirs, but it seems that I actually accepted it strangely... But I still hope that Yun Gui can become strong as soon as possible and not forget the avenue. What you wrote is so cool. I will always support you, okay?

OK, brothers, I finally found my Thunderbolt article. After reading it, I felt that my whole body was exuding hormones. After reading this, winter is no longer cold and summer is not hot. The goddess ignored me and the male god stopped talking. OK, who knows the melancholy series? I also feel that I am particularly awesome. Klass, he has also become the best in the village. Read the article, my dear Feng Feng. In reality, who doesn't want to read this article in a hurry? I really think this article is super awesome. After reading it, I feel that my whole person is different. After reading this article, everyone is inferior to me. Who doesn't want to hate reading this? I feel like I have become a god. God cannot be understood by others. Today you, the readers, must take a hard look! La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La.

It feels like a setting I rarely see in Tomato, and I kind of want to keep reading.