Why Do I Have More and More Daughters After Becoming a Magical Girl?

It's really good. I can't tell whether the writing is strong or weak, but the story is still very good. It doesn't have any weird points for me. It's worth watching. It's a pity that TS Magical Girls is a bit niche, and with school starting, very few people are watching it, which is a pity.

It's plentiful, good-looking, the male protagonist can change gender at any time, the female protagonist dies (I heard there is still hope of living) and has a biological daughter, and possibly a few more unrelated daughters (haven't read about it yet), it's okay, daily life, battles, life, lies, what else? Just read on. I finally saw the front page. Now the author is basically playing single-player, with only 37 reminders.

Not bad, but lies are like hanging dot. The longer it lasts, the more layers it will hang, and finally a wave of super high damage will erupt. For your daughter, this is a betrayal. She originally thought you were her mother, and you have dumped all responsibilities on that man who is irresponsible and does not care about your family. In the end, you told me that the truth was that my mother was dead. Then what did you take the previous interactions and the previous heart-to-heart conversations to mean? (Especially if Bai Xiaoyue herself discovers that Li Xing died more than ten years ago, the emotional breakdown will be even more serious) Confession is always the best way to improve a relationship. Break and build again. The relationship under lies is like a building built on paper. The paper is burned and the building collapses. Unless you dismount during the finale, and then at the same time Li Xing's remnant soul floats out to acknowledge Bai Ji's efforts, Bai Xiaoyue will naturally accept the bad job. Then I think you still win, after all, this is a good bad choice. When hearts collide, the fastest thing to break is a lie, so I feel that keeping Li Xing's vest is not a good choice. Because this is not only contrary to common sense, but also makes it as difficult to accept as Dafen. The young eagle cannot stay in the nest forever, and Bai Xiaoyue will eventually discover the truth. It's a bit nonsense, but don't vomit it quickly, don't make a fool of yourself, and hope to fall off the horse soon.

The book should be a good book, but the logic in the first few chapters is really too messy and complicated. I couldn't figure it out and ran away for the time being. Fourth Aunt Three. The first ten chapters include the first battle, the appearance of the main characters and a small background introduction. It feels very crowded, and there are a lot of things that I don't understand at all. For example, the protagonist is a middle-aged father who can transform into Mahou Soju. He has a daughter with Li Xing. I don't know why he doesn't appear as a father in front of his daughter, but disguises himself as a mother. This behavior seems to have great side effects, but it seems that the transformation prop was repaired by the goddess before the first battle? Why repair at this time? In addition, once the prop is repaired, it is repaired. What is the second transformation? The daughter was thought to be Sakura's daughter by the former director of the Countermeasures Bureau, so who is Sakura? Is Sakura the title of Li Xing? All in all, I have read ten chapters, and I have so many questions, and these problems are purely caused by the lack of setting and background. Most of them have nothing to do with foreshadowing or anything. They are all things that I think should be explained, but they are not explained, so I really can't accept it, but I will post a four-star review to encourage it. Anyway, the writing is normal, and the setting is normal.

The content of this book is indeed good. It can be seen that the beginning of the plot is similar to that of the off-duty demon - the arc of sit-ups is updated every time (it can only be said that the author created the meal replacement by himself 😢), but there are obviously many differences. The author only borrowed from the off-duty demon in the beginning and part of the setting (the protagonist of Wanfewang, the realm setting, the residual beast, etc.), But the subsequent plot direction has taken a completely different path, such as Bai Yuxi and Nan Yu tide, the protagonist of the opening strategy game, the protagonist has completely lost his vest (the off-duty demon is still fighting [face-palming]), Abby and Bai Xiaoyue have become very reliable (the off-duty demon's Moko and Lin Xiaolu are really idiots), etc., They have come out with their own style, and the plot arrangement is not bad, the writing is smooth, and I admire the author for persisting for so long with so few people watching - at least I won't worry about the author dying suddenly one day [face-palming] But why are there so few people? 😢 I feel like this isn't that miserable.

This is a coming-of-age novel by an author. After following it for so long, you can clearly see the growth of the author's writing style. The writing in the early chapters is a little jerky, though. It is obvious that the author has written the outline, and there is no AI robot to help write it. The writing style at the end is obviously better than the previous content. Is the author actually a growth substitute? Too powerful. There has already been a climax of the main plot, and the handling of emotions is relatively excellent. You can also play an interactive game every day and move it once you give a gift. This will give you a full sense of interactivity, which is probably a beautiful thing. 😏 Suddenly I have the urge to write a fanfic. I am also living to the end.

Suan Xifan 👍 At least I can see that there are no poisonous points now. The writing style and emotion are bonus points. Overall, it is more daily life and has its own rhythm. A few issues are that the description of combat may be slightly flawed and may be broken in some places. There is also the control of the rhythm. Although I personally like this kind of rhythm, people who like to step on the rhythm may not be able to stand it. In fact, the combat aspect can be expanded and extended a little more. It would be better if it can be as detailed as daily life 👍 Overall it is very good, the author will give it a big boost 👍

It's beautiful. Although I was a little confused at first, it became clear later and the content is well written. The rating is definitely more than this. The key is that too few people are watching it. Come on, author 😘

A good book buried by Tomato. This is the first magical girl book I read on Tomato. It gave me the feeling I had when I was chasing books in SF🐱. I couldn't read any of the recommended books. I only found this one after searching with keywords for a long time. The author is really amazing. He has persisted for so long. Please support me.

It's my favorite magical girl theme, it's relaxed and relaxed