Star Iron: Starting from the Fusion Dome

The writing style is very fresh, and the plot content is okay, but the author didn't get it right. People with a fast pace will find it hard to read it. It's the kind of book that doesn't feel good, but when it comes to other people, it tastes pretty good. It's not suitable for most people [Note]

It's a very good work, and it's not particularly blocky, but can the author give a little more fighting scenes, and some other fateful fighting scenes, such as the memory group and the classmate group, especially the records of the memory group, but the range is limited. It would be a bit bad not to write about such an awesome skill.

She pointed to the gray-haired stick figure she drew: "This is you." Then she pointed to the stick figure next to her: "This is me." Then she traced her finger across the entire painting, "This is us." "It won't work if one person is missing! I agree [roll eyes][roll eyes][roll eyes] Will the protagonist only become Qiong in the future? Can't he change into some other characters?

In fact, I have been thinking about whether to give it four stars or five stars. It looks good, but there is one thing that makes me feel uncomfortable. I always feel that the protagonist summons companions not like companions, but sometimes more like tools. Although the author has described their speaking manners and habits, but after all, it feels that there are too few. After all, they can be regarded as characters in my own game, and I can have more contact with them. Although there are some summoned March Seven, White Deer, and Silver Wolf, I feel that there are still too few, and they are like brushing the favorability level. I always feel that this is a bit too deliberate. It's not that it can't be brushed, but he is too uh, Yun? Or is it too systematic? Or too task-oriented. If he is summoned as a tool and taken back after use, then in reality, can we describe more of the protagonist's emotions, not necessarily love and love, just like how friends get along. Of course, it may be that the protagonist's personality is a bit cold, but I think since he is completely integrated, Qiong's memory should have more or less Qiong's behavior and habits.

This book is quite good. Although some people said it in the review, I think this novel is much better than the "fun" Bengtie novel. The protagonist is a normal person. How can I put it? The protagonists in other books gave me a very arrogant feeling. What are you doing? Everything is just for fun, arrogant, frivolous, and out of tune, but the protagonist of this book gives me a very good feeling, which is why I gave it 5 stars. However, no one rewards me, and I feel that this book cannot survive (I have other books to support, and I can't reward them). Oh, what a pity.

This book is quite well written, and it is the same as the one I am using today. But how do I put it? Cause and effect can exist, but I don't think it should be too strong. A little bit of it would be good. It completely determines whether a character can appear in life normally, and there are still a lot of conditions for appearing later. I have a system, so I feel better. After all, the characters that have passed away, especially those who have passed away, such as Bai Heng, even if they are resurrected, I feel that they cannot be fundamentally changed. To change the general trend, the general trend is already established, just appear normally, and the summoned characters always feel that they feel more like tools than normal companions, well, it focuses too much on cause and effect, and it is okay if it is almost like the last king, and it is almost upstream. What's more, the existence of the system itself is the most defiant. In other words, since the future has changed, it is better to just show up and face it calmly, as long as it is not a normal plot that completely changes reality. I have always felt very sorry for Bai Heng. I also thought it would be great if she could be resurrected and board the train of her dreams after seeing her. I was also looking forward to the scene where Jingliu and Ren saw her. Cause and effect is more like something that does not exist. I think many readers may come here to see the beautiful plot changes and imperfections. The more ambitious plot later can completely make up for the cause and effect, and haven't Xingqiong been paid, so I feel After paying the price, just show up normally. You can't just pay it again after a few moves. I hope it can be slowed down and write more about daily life. People who prefer rescue should like to watch daily life. Can the boss let Bai Heng get on the bus? More plot. I liked Bai Heng very much at the time, and I also want to see the plot of Bai Heng resurrecting the other five Xiaos. After all, Bai Heng trusts the pig's trotters so much, and he probably also likes the pig's trotters, so there should be more plots about Bai Heng, and I hope the writing will get better and better.

A group of people are crowding the subway, but no one is crowding around the Black Tower. Why is this? Because the Black Tower has a space station

It's okay, but there's no need to hide it from your companions, right? Also, it's a bit weird to go separate ways by yourself. Wumingke is family and has nothing to hide. Personal thoughts

Sometimes you can delete me, or change me to Qiong, and switch back and forth between first person and third person. I am not used to reading it. I suggest the author change it.

The update frequency and writing level are average. It's just that there is really nothing to read in the new Bengtie fanfiction books. They are barely edible. Readers with high level requirements are not recommended to read them.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. Although the writing style is a bit green, it's really very beautiful. I won't write in detail because I'm really sleepy now.

Let me ask, can the protagonist get Kevin's template skills?

It's so good that I could watch it all day long, but it's a pity that it's not enough.

Hahahahahaha

It's okay, five stars for encouragement.

Five-star support, come on! [Praise]

Yeah, so far so good

I support it, it looks pretty good.

Not bad, please support me

Update quickly, no one in the production team can rest like you. Either you code until you die, or you code until you get sick and are hospitalized, unable to move your hands.

The plot feels a bit weak, but there are no logical flaws

It looks okay, but why is it so low?

If the author draws out the dome at the beginning and chooses to manifest it without fusion, will there be two domes + the original star?

It looks good so far, please support it

Very well written, all regrets are worth saving

The concept is novel and the plot is quite good. I think it is very interesting.