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It's a good article, worth reading, but it's even more difficult to follow. The plot is quite compact. The appearance of the ancestor is kept within a suitable range and won't make people uncomfortable. The heroine is also growing up. Various small emotional lines and the main plot are also advanced well.

The Patriarch should be the Patriarch, with the bright moon hanging high. From now on, it becomes easier and smoother to focus on the plot.

The book is quite good. The only flaw so far, or one could say the downfall, is that it can transform into an adult.

At present, I see Zhang Qingwu possessing his own branch. Although it seems very reasonable at one point, "a part of his body" (wooden sword) has touch and perception. Huh, I wonder if you have ever experienced a situation where your perception is very sharp when you focus on one part of your body. When you focus on working, you don't even know you are injured. You are thousands of years old. Why don't you have that concentration? This Patriarch is so embarrassed. And they are all novels. Sometimes the details can be described, and some can not be described. Besides, if you want to feel more comfortable, you can put a scabbard on the mahogany sword and wrap the hilt with a thick white cloth strip. Stuffy? I really don't understand. As far as the source of human senses is concerned, they are specific nerve cells. Are there any trees in reality? Is the quantity large? Besides, this is at the biological level, as well as at the psychological level. So it's very embarrassing! @ Gexia is so delicious, Lao Deng! Come out and give me a reason to live mentally!

There are some minor flaws in the handling and rationality of the plot, but overall the flaws are outweighed. The plot is smooth and there are not many poisonous points. It is a pretty good book. I've finished reading it, waiting for the update.

Generally speaking, a book with a score of about 6 points will most likely have many problems. When I read this book today, I thought it would be the same as before. After reading it, I felt that it was quite good. Let alone a score of 9, it is at least 8.5. Personally I don't think there's anything wrong with it, I just get a little bored occasionally, which is key. It's really boring, and there are some parts at the back that I personally feel very uncomfortable about.

It was my first time watching this type of movie and I thought it was quite good. However, I almost couldn't watch the first few chapters because the male protagonist didn't appear for a long time. I basically don't read anything below 7.5, But after reading the introduction, I tried reading a few chapters. After seeing more than 140 chapters, I felt that the latter part was relatively better. I thought about the reason, and I also knew why the score was so low. It was that the male protagonist appeared too little in the early stage. After all, the other characters are supporting characters. And regarding the love line, I hold the opposite opinion to some comments. After all, the male protagonist shows off his dignity in front of others. If there is no love line to bind, it will always feel like making a wedding dress for others, which is somewhat uncomfortable, but if it is your own woman, it doesn't matter. Moreover, if the love line is well written, it will also provide benefits such as polishing the plot, as long as it is not the kind of description that makes people fall in love inexplicably without experience.

Male channel female host version portable grandpa [laughing]

This book has a very good imaginative plot and a lot of knowledge about Taoism. It can be seen that the author has checked a lot of information and put a lot of thought into it. It is not a casual white text. I still want to see the male protagonist fall in love.

It's pretty cool, but why do I feel like it's about to stop updating? [What]

At present, it does not seem to be a simple account. The author should have read the relevant information. The plot development is very natural and the details are well described. I feel that this article is very suitable for the atmosphere of adapting comics or animations. But one thing is about the relationship line. I saw many people in the comment area saying that we should write the relationship line between the male and female protagonists. I hope we don't write about the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Is that okay [laughing awkwardly]? You are already practicing Taoism and you still fall in love, and even though the male protagonist is a tree, his age and seniority can be said to be that of the heroine's ancestor. What kind of relationship is there? It's almost like raising a granddaughter [awkward laugh]

The male protagonist follows his grandfather, and the plot develops from the female protagonist's perspective. There is no love plot.

It's super good-looking. Although it's about modern Taoist priests slaying demons and defending the Way, the writing and story descriptions of the characters are very good. I'm not interested in the title, but the first two chapters are foreshadowing and the next two chapters are interesting, and then I can't stop reading. It's just a bit short. I look forward to the follow-up development.

No wonder the rating was only 7.2 And it failed after only ten chapters. I thought it was a horror film but didn't expect it to be a comedy [face covering]

When I watched it, the score was 7.2. It may be partly related to the fact that the male protagonist, White Fox, only recognized the ending of a complete incident and then the speed of light broke through the offline due to seclusion. It is not a poisonous point. It can only be said that the description of the male protagonist's thoughts is not handled well in the current public opinion. Combat and daily descriptions are good.

It's nice to read, and it quotes the classics. The author has researched the information carefully, and it's very comfortable to read. The setting is very interesting. A real "tree" from Longhu Mountain who has spanned thousands of years has been recognized by the fox demon apprentice in modern times. They are both lonely people. I hope they will be fine in the future.

I have found the feeling of lying under the quilt and reading novels in high school. The author's writing style is pretty good and the story is linked one by one.

Very nice, step by step, no nonsense, very steady pace

The subject matter is rare. Although there are many descriptions of battles, the plot is indeed compact. It is a good book.

I think the writing is quite good. I don't know what other people are talking about. Are people who read novels so violent nowadays? Come on, author, I still support you [laughing] [eating melon]

Good good Very good book Please update it soon Author of Hundan

Ancestor's refreshing article, overall it's pretty good, the subject matter is novel, this is a waste of talent, I added a bookshelf, I wish it will get better and better (๑> <๑)

The content, plot and details are all very good

Personally, I think the first three chapters are pretty good. By the way, is there a female protagonist? Don't have any

I feel okay [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Why is the score so low? The writing is really good.

The rating shouldn't be right, but the pace is indeed a bit slow, but that's good. If you like to produce high-quality products, don't be discouraged, the author. It's normal for this type of book to have low early ratings.

It can be a good book. There is no clear poisonous point. It is a good book in this genre. I hope everyone will support it and don't let the good author stop writing. [Shy]

The content is good, but I feel like the author wanted to write some emotional lines. If you really think about it, only foxes are suitable. After all, trees and foxes are reasonable and they are not humans.

With the energy of Balabala, the whole body of the Little Demon Fairy changes. [Cry]