Immortal Cultivation Prodigy Simulator

Reading volume: first three chapters Pros: Well written, well set up Disadvantages: Weak narrative ability/too many unnecessary descriptions, weak characterization ability, thoughts > plot. My humble opinion: The writing style of a good online novel is secondary, and the most important thing is the plot and character creation. This is not something that can be accomplished in a day, it is a test of your skills. The future is promising, so keep working hard.

It's very good, but the author's writing style is very Riddler-like and the pace is relatively slow. I'm looking forward to the future of this book.

It feels like a flower is picked up in the evening. The writing is very good, but the language of the characters is too little, and the description of the environment is too much, which is a bit overwhelming. Don't be discouraged. You actually have great potential. The growth of the protagonist of the fairy tale is very important, and the simulator settings will make the pace of the article fast-paced. Yes, so the narrative perspective can be adjusted appropriately, just like photography changes from shooting the overall environment to focusing on the words and deeds of children and elderly people on the street. It would be better if it can be changed. I am really happy to see such delicate, soft, gentle and bright writing from Tomato 🍅 (It's not easy to write from brain imaging to pen and paper, haha, come on)

After reading Chapter 40, let me know what you think. The main attraction of Cultivation to Immortality is the character's cultivation and the process of improving one's realm. However, there are too many irrelevant things described in this Cultivation to Immortality. How the heroine practices and how her realm is improved is very little written. The process of the competition after being challenged by others is not described, but the result is explained in one sentence. The title of the book is also called Immortal Genius Simulator. The readers who were attracted wanted to read it, but there was very little content that could bring them pleasure, so they naturally left. Players, the setting of the simulator is still very new, but it is progress.

The author's writing is good, but there are too many environmental descriptions and psychological descriptions, and the plot progresses slowly. A small clip of killing a chicken to scare the monkeys is a bit too slow. However, the protagonist's character is very interesting. I prefer the setting of the fourth natural disaster. Others are to be determined.

After reading Chapter 19, the author's writing style is very good (山唧呱唱) but I feel that the narrative is a bit weak (I don't know if it is better in the later part without reading it). In fact, the writing style is not the most important thing in the novel (I never thought I would have to say this one day). What is important is the narrative ability. I hope the author will get better and better. I really want to see the day when the author's narrative ability is as high as his writing skills. I look forward to it.

The author is writing a novel using the method of writing prose. The most important thing in a novel is the story, not the description.

I felt really good about this book, it had such a bland feel to it. Feeling good. The heroine has always been a genius. But he is also down-to-earth and diligent, and he gets along well with people. Everyone there is very nice. And the very, very good thing about this book is that it is not a very routine fairy tale. I was really pissed off when I read those articles about cultivating immortals today. They were all very cliche. Then when I saw this book, I felt really good and innovative, and um, it felt very comfortable to read. I really like this kind of comfortable and plain writing. A slight sense of refreshment, very comfortable, and good interpersonal relationships.

I like the character design, the coolness, and the cultivating immortality + simulation memes, but the fact is that I was already impatient from the beginning of Chapter 14. I skipped the text that filled the screen without affecting the main content. Also, the seniors here really like to play tricks on themselves😑

After reading Chapter 12, the heroine joined the master and started studying. The landscapes and scenes described by the author are clear and open-minded, which made my heart feel cool and comfortable [full]. I really liked it, and I also learned some new words and characters. It is especially difficult to read at the beginning. The paragraphs are too long. You can reduce the length of each paragraph appropriately. It is better to divide long paragraphs into at least two paragraphs, and three or four paragraphs are more comfortable to read. Come on! I really like this kind of rhythm description, it's refreshing.