Cultivation Genius Simulator

Reading volume: first three chapters Pros: Well written, well set up Disadvantages: Weak narrative ability/too many unnecessary descriptions, weak characterization ability, thoughts > plot. My humble opinion: The writing style of a good online novel is secondary, and the most important thing is the plot and character creation. This is not something that can be accomplished in a day, it is a test of your skills. The future is promising, so keep working hard.

It's very good, but the author's writing style is very Riddler-like and the pace is relatively slow. I'm looking forward to the future of this book.

After reading Chapter 40, let me know what you think. The main attraction of Cultivation to Immortality is the character's cultivation and the process of improving one's realm. However, there are too many irrelevant things described in this Cultivation to Immortality. How the heroine practices and how her realm is improved is very little written. The process of the competition after being challenged by others is not described, but the result is explained in one sentence. The title of the book is also called Immortal Genius Simulator. The readers who were attracted wanted to read it, but there was very little content that could bring them pleasure, so they naturally left. Players, the setting of the simulator is still very new, but it is progress.

It feels like a flower is picked up in the evening. The writing is very good, but the language of the characters is too little, and the description of the environment is too much, which is a bit overwhelming. Don't be discouraged. You actually have great potential. The growth of the protagonist of the fairy tale is very important, and the simulator settings will make the pace of the article fast-paced. Yes, so the narrative perspective can be adjusted appropriately, just like photography changes from shooting the overall environment to focusing on the words and deeds of children and elderly people on the street. It would be better if it can be changed. I am really happy to see such delicate, soft, gentle and bright writing from Tomato 🍅 (It's not easy to write from brain imaging to pen and paper, haha, come on)

The author's writing is good, but there are too many environmental descriptions and psychological descriptions, and the plot progresses slowly. A small clip of killing a chicken to scare the monkeys is a bit too slow. However, the protagonist's character is very interesting. I prefer the setting of the fourth natural disaster. Others are to be determined.

After reading Chapter 19, the author's writing style is very good (山唧呱唱) but I feel that the narrative is a bit weak (I don't know if it is better in the later part without reading it). In fact, the writing style is not the most important thing in the novel (I never thought I would have to say this one day). What is important is the narrative ability. I hope the author will get better and better. I really want to see the day when the author's narrative ability is as high as his writing skills. I look forward to it.

I felt really good about this book, it had such a bland feel to it. Feeling good. The heroine has always been a genius. But he is also down-to-earth and diligent, and he gets along well with people. Everyone there is very nice. And the very, very good thing about this book is that it is not a very routine fairy tale. I was really pissed off when I read those articles about cultivating immortals today. They were all very cliche. Then when I saw this book, I felt really good and innovative, and um, it felt very comfortable to read. I really like this kind of comfortable and plain writing. A slight sense of refreshment, very comfortable, and good interpersonal relationships.

The author is writing a novel using the method of writing prose. The most important thing in a novel is the story, not the description.

After reading Chapter 12, the heroine joined the master and started studying. The landscapes and scenes described by the author are clear and open-minded, which made my heart feel cool and comfortable [full]. I really liked it, and I also learned some new words and characters. It is especially difficult to read at the beginning. The paragraphs are too long. You can reduce the length of each paragraph appropriately. It is better to divide long paragraphs into at least two paragraphs, and three or four paragraphs are more comfortable to read. Come on! I really like this kind of rhythm description, it's refreshing.

There are too many descriptions of scenery, but the writing is very beautiful [blowing kiss]

I like the character design, the coolness, and the cultivating immortality + simulation memes, but the fact is that I was already impatient from the beginning of Chapter 14. I skipped the text that filled the screen without affecting the main content. Also, the seniors here really like to play tricks on themselves😑

The writing style is very good, and the description of the environment is beautiful. Although it is a bit verbose at times, it can be reduced appropriately. This article gives people a gentle and bright feeling, especially the feeling of orthodox cultivation of immortality and enlightenment. It is really a fine grain of chaff. I hope the author will work hard and keep writing.

Looks good, come on! But some paragraphs are a bit long, which may make you less interested in reading them. You can divide them into segments appropriately [Blow kiss]

It became lyrical out of nowhere. The description of cultivating immortality at the beginning should be changed to the protagonist's yearning for cultivating immortality.

It can be seen that the writing style is very good, but looking for plot and dialogue in long paragraphs of description is very unfriendly to a fast-food style online article.

Author, here I am, I am Yizhen wow wow wow!

The more you look at it, the better it tastes

Good writing It can be broken up more and I think the author's rhythm can also be used. Overall, this is a novel that you should read calmly and calmly. I love the setting of the baby girl∽I will take a rough look first and then take a closer look.

The writing style is very good, a bit like "Zhe Tian Ji"

There are many poems and ancient prose used in poetry, and the perspective is also very interesting. It's really well written and maintains its own style.

It's good to read. The author will update more [blowing kisses]. Looking forward to it.

Nice looking. I just hope the plot progresses a little faster. More words per chapter

It's not bad, but I can't quite understand it. It's indeed a bit long. I can save up. This book is generally good. I recommend that all of you babies read it.

Not much more to say, Xicran, I tied it in one day, the writing, character design and logic are all online, five points!

It's tied. I think this beginning is hard for most people to watch, but once you get used to it, you'll find it interesting. It's not like any other routine-style fairy tale. I'm optimistic about you ❤️Update soon!

The writing is so good, why isn't it popular😭😭

You are a guest in this world, come and listen to the flowers fall. It's so comfortable to read this novel and listen to it with some tea The writing is beautiful and fresh, paragraph after paragraph, you can imagine the picture. In the past, the articles on cultivating immortals were about joining a sect, upgrading and grabbing treasures, etc. This is the first time I have seen such a fresh and refined article on cultivating immortals, and I feel like fresh tea after the rain. The heroine, Ling Yizhen, sounds like a fairy-cultivating heroine at first glance. The names of the supporting characters are all very careful. It can be seen that the author took the names very carefully. It is still a simulator type novel. After joining the Taixu Sect, the description of the intrigues between fellow disciples is not the same type of intrigues, but the relationship between teenagers, the green water, green mountains, breeze and bright moon. It makes me want to join the Taixu Sect! Please give me more of these normal fairy tales!