[Funny, refreshing article, Yellow Flag + Sakura Country, I understand everything] The introduction is weak, move to the main text
I died suddenly after staying up late to catch up on my thesis, and I was reborn as a golden koi carp in the university lake, and I was also bound to the cheating [Dragon Training System].
The system told me: if you do good deeds and accumulate virtue, you can level up, if you cultivate enough to build a foundation, you can turn back into a human, and if you jump over the dragon gate, you can turn into a real dragon!
So, I started a career of conscientious cultivation without shame or shame (cross out):
Therefore, I became the "Dragon Protector of the Country" compiled by the National Security Bureau. During droughts and rains, I put out fires during fires, and surfed the Internet when I was free.
It wasn't until one day that I went to the Cherry Blossom Country and threw a small Baga into the Yellow Banner with merit +10086. I didn't know that merit was everywhere there. At that time, I knew that I was not far from becoming a saint.
Reader comments
I originally thought that there was only one protagonist, a dragon, a living myth, but all the messy stuff about Onmyoji and Sword Master came out later. If it was mentioned in the introduction, I wouldn't read it. I won't comment on the handling of the protagonist's identity. Personally, it feels very awkward.
Summary: A chaotic battle of urban immortal cultivators, a fake novel, no heroine, systematic tasks, failure and punishment, the protagonist's own abilities are systematically digitized, and his development is slow but fast.
Complaints: After transforming into a dragon, it takes spiritual power to maintain its form, which only lasts for an hour or two, so this dragon turned into a lonely one. The national fortune was stolen, and no one in the country came forward. The protagonist started wandering as a little loach, and was afraid that he would be too powerful to be a Sakura. Then the battle of cultivating immortals started. The wandering almost overturned and was rescued by a domestic boss. This plot, tsk tsk tsk, can't be evaluated.
Give me one more star to encourage you.
As for the content, I have read 56 chapters now. The latest chapter is finished. I can only say that the preface does not match the postscript.
When he was about to transform into a dragon, he refined the Qi to the fifth level, and then suddenly turned into a golden elixir. Then he went to Yamata-no-Orochi, and he was still the same one who hit Xu Fu. Xu Fu said that he was injured by a surprisingly small baby dragon of the Nascent Soul.
There are also physical problems. At first, it was clearly stated that he had become a vegetative state, and then later, he became missing. I saw that the author himself was disconnecting or wrote it somewhere. He said that he explained it in the author's talk. I have only read a few chapters. Who would go to the author to talk about it first?
Then there is the issue of his parents. At first, they had obviously gone home with the people from the Public Security Bureau, and then they met. He even confessed about his transformation into a dragon, and met his roommates and brothers.
Then later on, his original parents passed away, and then he became the body he traveled through time. What is an orphan? He has no parents in this life, and then later on he has to meet his parents in this life who traveled through time and met him in the Dragon Palace built by the National Security Bureau.
Then the First Emperor asked Xu Fu to find the elixir of immortality. Then the First Emperor asked Xu Fu to find the elixir of immortality. Not to mention the original purpose of letting him find the Jizhou Jade Seal, just the elixir of life, let him go, and then the First Emperor knew it When Xu Fu might betray him, he even placed a ban on him. However, the First Emperor himself said that he died in a sand dune at the age of 50. But if it was so simple and he died, would he still have the means to do so? Langxia tried his best to prove that he had become an immortal, but if he had become an immortal, why did he die at the age of 50? There was no explanation at all.
Then at first, the role of the system was to help purify, and then it became the leader, the role, to stimulate the power in the body, either to burn the original essence and blood, or to burn the soul, or to self-destruct, reverse the scale, or to return to the light. Speaking of this, what I also want to say is that in the first two chapters, the merit value has been used up and has been sharpened. The elixir that brings back the light, and then the next two, how else can he use up his merits to summon the will of the First Emperor? Damn it, I have to set it up by myself. The first one is used up, and the second one is born again, and then I feel that a lot of things are not explained clearly. If you have to care about it, it is difficult to explain it in one sentence, and then there are many places that are repeated, and it is not that the repetition is a repetition of the format.
I feel like I can add one star, and half of it is for encouragement. After all, I feel that half of the one star I can add is for encouragement. After all, the good thing is that this idea is good, and the ending of the little life can be arranged. As for the other things, there are no special highlights.
What do you say? Overall it's fine
I'll have a lot of fun reading the next chapter if I forget most of the previous one
Now there are a few questions
At first, I stayed up late and fell into coma, so my roommate sent me to the hospital and I became a vegetative state.
The latter became missing. It may be because the dragon body and the human body are not round at the same time. The latter has been changed and the front has not been changed.
The other one is Chen Yuan who just recently said that he was specially recruited by the state to join the confidentiality project. He disclosed his identity in just a few photos (this is not a preface and a follow-up. I also came to explain it to my parents later, but I always felt that that part was just hydrology)
The third point is that the system does not allow the protagonist to expose the existence of the system, but the system itself will contact the National Security Bureau to facilitate the protagonist to complete the task. We don't know why. Anyway, this paragraph is difficult to handle logically.
Feeling bad, afraid of being too powerful, killing foreign cults, and stealing domestic luck, but also afraid of directly killing the other party and cutting off their evil inheritance. That is the right way to avoid future troubles. There are too many questions and they are completely illogical. Not even cool articles.
A very interesting article. It is very comfortable to read without thinking. There is nothing poisonous at the moment. It is suitable for book lovers. Whether it is parents, roommates or the country, it is very good.
I vomited when I read Chapter 23. The protagonist is such a holy mother who would rather blow up Japanese toilets than kill the Japanese...
Reading this book, I feel like everyone in the Xia Kingdom is a mortal, and all other countries are extraordinary.
Super Virgin System
Good, good, good, good
I strongly recommend this novel, you will really regret it if you don't read it!
Logical contradiction Where is the original body? You can change your consciousness and transfer between dragons and humans.
Super nice [Admiration] [Like] Big boost to the author ✊
I originally thought that there was only one protagonist, a dragon, a living myth, but all the messy stuff about Onmyoji and Sword Master came out later. If it was mentioned in the introduction, I wouldn't read it. I won't comment on the handling of the protagonist's identity. Personally, it feels very awkward. Summary: A chaotic battle of urban immortal cultivators, a fake novel, no heroine, systematic tasks, failure and punishment, the protagonist's own abilities are systematically digitized, and his development is slow but fast. Complaints: After transforming into a dragon, it takes spiritual power to maintain its form, which only lasts for an hour or two, so this dragon turned into a lonely one. The national fortune was stolen, and no one in the country came forward. The protagonist started wandering as a little loach, and was afraid that he would be too powerful to be a Sakura. Then the battle of cultivating immortals started. The wandering almost overturned and was rescued by a domestic boss. This plot, tsk tsk tsk, can't be evaluated.
Give me one more star to encourage you. As for the content, I have read 56 chapters now. The latest chapter is finished. I can only say that the preface does not match the postscript. When he was about to transform into a dragon, he refined the Qi to the fifth level, and then suddenly turned into a golden elixir. Then he went to Yamata-no-Orochi, and he was still the same one who hit Xu Fu. Xu Fu said that he was injured by a surprisingly small baby dragon of the Nascent Soul. There are also physical problems. At first, it was clearly stated that he had become a vegetative state, and then later, he became missing. I saw that the author himself was disconnecting or wrote it somewhere. He said that he explained it in the author's talk. I have only read a few chapters. Who would go to the author to talk about it first? Then there is the issue of his parents. At first, they had obviously gone home with the people from the Public Security Bureau, and then they met. He even confessed about his transformation into a dragon, and met his roommates and brothers. Then later on, his original parents passed away, and then he became the body he traveled through time. What is an orphan? He has no parents in this life, and then later on he has to meet his parents in this life who traveled through time and met him in the Dragon Palace built by the National Security Bureau. Then the First Emperor asked Xu Fu to find the elixir of immortality. Then the First Emperor asked Xu Fu to find the elixir of immortality. Not to mention the original purpose of letting him find the Jizhou Jade Seal, just the elixir of life, let him go, and then the First Emperor knew it When Xu Fu might betray him, he even placed a ban on him. However, the First Emperor himself said that he died in a sand dune at the age of 50. But if it was so simple and he died, would he still have the means to do so? Langxia tried his best to prove that he had become an immortal, but if he had become an immortal, why did he die at the age of 50? There was no explanation at all. Then at first, the role of the system was to help purify, and then it became the leader, the role, to stimulate the power in the body, either to burn the original essence and blood, or to burn the soul, or to self-destruct, reverse the scale, or to return to the light. Speaking of this, what I also want to say is that in the first two chapters, the merit value has been used up and has been sharpened. The elixir that brings back the light, and then the next two, how else can he use up his merits to summon the will of the First Emperor? Damn it, I have to set it up by myself. The first one is used up, and the second one is born again, and then I feel that a lot of things are not explained clearly. If you have to care about it, it is difficult to explain it in one sentence, and then there are many places that are repeated, and it is not that the repetition is a repetition of the format. I feel like I can add one star, and half of it is for encouragement. After all, I feel that half of the one star I can add is for encouragement. After all, the good thing is that this idea is good, and the ending of the little life can be arranged. As for the other things, there are no special highlights.
What do you say? Overall it's fine I'll have a lot of fun reading the next chapter if I forget most of the previous one Now there are a few questions At first, I stayed up late and fell into coma, so my roommate sent me to the hospital and I became a vegetative state. The latter became missing. It may be because the dragon body and the human body are not round at the same time. The latter has been changed and the front has not been changed. The other one is Chen Yuan who just recently said that he was specially recruited by the state to join the confidentiality project. He disclosed his identity in just a few photos (this is not a preface and a follow-up. I also came to explain it to my parents later, but I always felt that that part was just hydrology) The third point is that the system does not allow the protagonist to expose the existence of the system, but the system itself will contact the National Security Bureau to facilitate the protagonist to complete the task. We don't know why. Anyway, this paragraph is difficult to handle logically.
Feeling bad, afraid of being too powerful, killing foreign cults, and stealing domestic luck, but also afraid of directly killing the other party and cutting off their evil inheritance. That is the right way to avoid future troubles. There are too many questions and they are completely illogical. Not even cool articles.
A very interesting article. It is very comfortable to read without thinking. There is nothing poisonous at the moment. It is suitable for book lovers. Whether it is parents, roommates or the country, it is very good.
I vomited when I read Chapter 23. The protagonist is such a holy mother who would rather blow up Japanese toilets than kill the Japanese...
Reading this book, I feel like everyone in the Xia Kingdom is a mortal, and all other countries are extraordinary.
Super Virgin System
Good, good, good, good
I strongly recommend this novel, you will really regret it if you don't read it!
Logical contradiction Where is the original body? You can change your consciousness and transfer between dragons and humans.
Super nice [Admiration] [Like] Big boost to the author ✊
It's so beautiful. Keep up the good work.
I quite like this type [smile][smile][smile]