家庭教师：我怎么成了黑手党

The pacing is superb, and the plot is adequate. It is considered very good among fans. Unfortunately, this is a new book and cannot be maintained. I am afraid that the author will run away with it.

The writing is very good, the original plot is very natural, and it feels like the original work. The characters of Tsunayoshi and others have not collapsed, and the characters are restored very well, and there is a sense of passion. The protagonist is a growth type, and there are advantages and disadvantages. But because of this, it is so natural to integrate into Tsunayoshi and the others. Well, Tsunayoshi's charm is so attractive to be together! Also, the main character who is cold-faced and cute, but appears to be troublesome but is actually very gentle is the best [like]

The daily descriptions are very good, and they are perfectly integrated into the tutor's world view. The only flaw is that I should tell you which part of the time it is in. At first I thought it was just the beginning, but when I looked at it, I realized it was almost the Black Glory chapter, so I guess. After all, Hibari plowed down the cherry blossom trees at the end of the Black Glory Arc, but it still exists in the novel. Keep working hard, come on, keep writing, at least finish writing the future chapter. And the latest news is that Tutoring celebrates its 20th anniversary and a new anime chapter may be released this year. [Like][Like]

Not bad, I hope there is no CP and pure cb

It's beautiful! ! ! ! An original plot is added based on the original work. . The main character is blended in perfectly! ! ! ! However, I feel that the current daily life is a bit too procrastinating (this is my own opinion... I am very sorry if any offense is caused!!!! I hope to get into the Obsidian chapter soon! Please keep writing! ! ! ! Come on ma'am! ! !

Maybe it's because Tomato doesn't have many tutoring novels, but this one is very good, but the author also said there will be self-designed, so let's just treat it as self-set, but it's a bit strange for people who have read a lot of tutoring fanfics (because I basically read Tutoring on Lao Ford and JJ, and I don't know what the setting of 27 is on Tomato). Because the characters of 27 and the others are almost fixed, and the impression of A Gang's reborn is too different from what I think it is, so it is not acceptable. I still support tutors having new ideas. This means tutors have not cooled down yet. I hope more people will see our great tenth generation, 27 little angels!

I watched the burger fight in one go. The author's writing is very good. Both the passion of the fight and the daily relaxation are very comfortable. I am looking forward to the subsequent battle for the ring and the story ten years later.

It can be seen that this book was written with great care by the author. Although the writing style is a bit immature, it can be seen that the author is very careful in writing the character creation, and the plot advancement is very vivid and reasonable. I hope the author can continue writing, because this book is really beautiful, and the author must not stop reading [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] In fact, this book is well written, but the data is bleak compared to other books, and I looked through the book reviews, and there are really few [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's very interesting. It's been a long time since I've seen a tutoring fanfic that made my eyes light up. In the future, I hope that the main character will always have no CP or OOC. Friendship is the best (✪▽✪)

It's pretty good so far. As long as there's nothing too toxic in the future, I'll finish it. Come on [laughs][laughs]

It's so good that you don't need to write CP after you take a bite! ! Cold-faced and cute! ! ! ! Update soon. I'm going to starve to death.

Is it relatively healing? [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] It is rare to see this kind of tutoring fan fiction, but it is still very good [Bird Food God's Work] [Bird Food God's Work] [Bird Food God's Work] Now I want to know what will happen to the protagonist in the future [Explore] [Explore] [Explore]

The rhythm is very good The growth and changes of the protagonist are also very reasonable. The only thing that is unreasonable is... It's not enough. (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ )Www Looking forward to the Obsidian Chapter (•̀ᴗ•́)و̑̑

It's good-looking, but not enough＼(`Δ')／

After reading about ten chapters, I will comment first. The Guardian of Snow is introduced. The character of the protagonist is really shaped like snow. Snow is usually plain and pleasing to the eye, but when it touches the bottom line, it becomes a blizzard that can kill people.

Yes, it can be seen that the author has worked hard to figure out the personality characteristics of each character. The protagonist he created also has his own personality characteristics, and the plot is also very consistent with the daily life of a tutor.

If there is one more guardian, then do we also need one more ring? (›´ω`‹ )

I like Shun's character very much, and the plot is also very natural. At the beginning, I had the perspective of a passerby watching the protagonist group [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I like Shun's character design very much, and the characterization is also very full, and the plot is integrated very naturally.

It's nice to look at, and I like the characters very much.

Looks good! Five-star support!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I'm not good at Chinese and can't speak beautifully, it just suits my taste [shy]

The writing is very good, and the daily chapters feel like a tutor.

Come on! Very nice! Please be sure to write to the end!

It looks good. It feels like watching an anime. The male protagonist is also very good.

At first glance, I think it's okay so far. It's rare to find a tutoring article that is not OOC and is constantly being updated for the time being. I hope the author will not give up. It's very interesting to watch, the characters are well captured, and the interaction between the protagonist and everyone is very interesting. I'm really looking forward to the development of Obsidian and the future chapters. Don't let it end unfinished, I will always support it!

It's a pretty good novel, I hope you stick with it

His book on tutoring is really well written (//∇//)

It looks good [Thinking] But why does it seem like it's going to be discontinued now? No no no no no no no

It's great. I feel very good about my current daily writing.