Collapse of Iron**********

As a simulation of a collapse of iron (I don't read that many), it's still interesting. However, I feel that the uniqueness of its technology has not been written about in terms of monthly calculation, let alone the use of these technologies. Don't say it's as cruel as some comments, just go ahead and lock the open mind of Black Tower. But I can't even imagine the state of recovery after using K company's ampoules. It's really a lack of imagination. The protagonist's character ranges from bad to striving, with almost no transition in between. Maybe learning can really change a person. This book review is on Chapter 23. There are very few articles on Pomodoro, and there is still little to look forward to in the future.

The elements of the moon plan are definitely integrated into Bengtie. The writing style is very good, the plot has good coherence, there is no abrupt feeling, and the emotional description is very good. I finished it in less than an hour. If I were a ring finger, I would give it an A. Among them, the setting of the Mirror World is quite good. Compared with other fan fiction that is simply used as supplementary settings and extras, this book uses the Mirror World as a copy to obtain abilities. Finally, I want to make a digression. I really like this relationship plot with Heita. Can you give it a happy ending? For example, emm, after Wu Yi returned from the mirror world, the black tower in the mirror world opened the world wall and ran directly to the main world where the protagonist is?

So far, the writing style is delicate and the emotional lines are well described. However, the presence of the Moon Calculation component is really not high. I feel that my understanding of singularity is not like that of a Moon Calculation player. Overall, it is still a good product. Keep it up [Learned]

It's awesome. You create your own story based on the character's personality, and the world view is not changed casually. The author can really write it. I rarely type so many words, I highly recommend it [laughs] But author, when do you plan to update Ark [laughs]

So far, it's very good. The characters are described delicately and it's worth watching. However, I don't know how the author controls multiple female protagonists, but at least for now, it's still very good when there are no female protagonists. Author, please believe me, writing this book with a single female protagonist is definitely better than multiple female protagonists. There are too many early stage and black tower shapings and the shaping is very good. If you want to have multiple female protagonists, the impact will be greater. If you want to see a single female protagonist, give it a thumbs up. I hope the author can see it.

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

@QWQ Damn it, Lao Da, you are resurrected, I thought you were the same, aren't your copies of Ark updated?

The writing is very good, and the latest chapter has no OOC. In short, it's a bit rough. Believe me, a little bookworm who has spent more than 1,400 hours [laughing] It also integrates well with Yueji elements, mainly Bengtie Haokan

The writing style is very gentle, the daily life is very brisk, the plot is sweet but not greasy, and complex but not confusing. Especially the emotional expressions of the characters in the article are kind, natural and meticulous. At present, there are more than fifty chapters. No monthly schedule will not affect reading. Worth enjoying/

The writing style is really great. I also liked the author's last book, so promise me not to stop it just because readers start school. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

A very good book [love]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

A bad part of the monthly plan

It should have multiple female protagonists. This book is more about daily life and focuses on Beng Tie (the background of Yueji is more like a plug-in for the protagonist). Except for the weak description of the protagonist's relationship with Heita at the beginning, it is still worth reading (Beng Tie's Love Daily [Sneaky Smile] Hei Ta, Ruan Mei...)

The writing is not bad, I deduct half a star for having multiple female protagonists, but if the writing is good, I will change it to five stars.

It's great to watch, but the pace is a bit slow. Update soon! [Laughing]

New talent, interesting, wrong writing, periodic development

The writing is good but the comment section made me laugh.

Very good-looking and dignified

Very well written, hope you stick with it ✊

Just take this book and add this one

A+! A masterpiece!

Don't care about other people's opinions

Eat eat eat eat eat eat

But I think it's very sacred

How! A masterpiece that blends across works!

It looks pretty good now

How shameless! How proud!

Are you really not going to write a single female protagonist? [Laughing evilly]

Very good book