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Pretty good. As long as you don't transform, don't touch women, and don't have another time traveler, you won't collapse.

The Western Fantasy Party is ecstatic! Finally dug out a Western fantasy novel with a super complete worldview! The continent layout, magic system, and racial settings are all very detailed. There are no logical bugs. It makes the book feel like you are really in a fantasy continent. The protagonist's growth line is super exciting, from an ignorant Dingdong Chicken to a strong one step by step, the magic showdown scenes are very graphic, and the racial bonds are also written in a very layered way. It is a must-have for Western fantasy books! Was it written by AI and polished by humans, or was it written by humans and polished by AI? Or maybe it's pure technology, not natural?

It can be seen that he is indeed a newbie, and he feels very young. To be honest, I can only see 3 stars, so I'll add one star because I'm a newbie. I feel that replacing the protagonist with any monster does not feel too inconsistent. It eliminates some of the shortcomings of dragon literature and also eliminates some of the characteristics of dragon literature. It does not differentiate it from other monster protagonists. The gold finger is too big. It's not that the gold finger on the panel is too big. It's just that everything is too coincidental. First of all, I picked up a dragon egg casually, and secondly, it's such a coincidence that a "docile dragon" hatched out. Then I randomly found an extinct volcano, and there happened to be a hot spring suitable for my little brother to live next to it. What we want to see is the protagonist working hard to achieve results, rather than arranging everything for the protagonist with a stroke of a pen. It feels like the protagonist's efforts have been alienated here, and it feels like I can do anything for myself. This panel. You can take advantage of it. It doesn't mean just looking at other people's data, but training hard, and then your own data improves by a few. It does not mean exercising every day, training hard, and then improving. We readers don't know, and we are blinded by how much we have improved. There is a lack of conflict and contradiction. Some people say that the protagonist is calm and calm. In my opinion, it is like a pool of stagnant water. Can you not be calm without any conflict? It's not mania. This kind of everything going well doesn't bring me any pleasure, but it makes me boring. As for the descriptions of the kobolds, respect is clearly lacking. As soon as we met, I was willing to be loyal. If you want to transform into dragon vein, please transform. The protagonist still didn't say anything when we met for the first time, he just said that I am willing to be loyal to you. The protagonist is equivalent to the governor. You are a vagrant. The first thing you say when you meet the governor is, I am willing to be a civil servant. The correct process is to compliment the protagonist, make a request, and show loyalty. Maybe some dedication treasures can be added in the middle. As for transformation, for example, if you are an ordinary person and you have something to do, you can become the governor of the province [shocked]. What should your attitude be? But what did you write? Teacher, please help me see how to do this question. As for what happens next, I have no interest in reading further. When you read a novel, don't you just read it after 3 or 4 chapters? If the writing is not good, the plot is not interesting, and the creativity is not particularly attractive, you will leave. The above are some questions that I raised as a reader. Maybe they are right, maybe they are wrong. The author can think for himself.

I feel that it is already a very good dragon novel. The last one was Dragon World, and this one feels like it is written with the feeling of a dragon. Unlike other dragon novels, it feels like a person wearing dragon skin, bound by love and love. Some are either overflowing with emotions, or have no emotions, like a robot. I just don't understand why there are so many five-star ratings for only 6.9, Which is completely inconsistent with the quality of the book. Anyway, cheers for the author.

Personally, I think it's very interesting, but the description of the protagonist is indeed a bit lacking, but the parts that are not described are improving the world view. However, the world view is a bit big at the moment, and only a little bit is described. I hope it's not a gay novel. I think it doesn't have a female protagonist but it will meet the needs. In addition, the male protagonist is almost surrounded by men now (there is no description of the gender of the little black dragon). I am really afraid that it is a gay novel.

Generally speaking, the quality of this book should be significantly higher than the rating. It is very comfortable to read, and the logic and main line are relatively clear. The atmosphere in the book is humorous, relaxed and lively. You can read it to relax your mind in your spare time. However, some readers may be put off by the amount of description in the first few chapters. The characteristic of the early stage is that description is used to promote the plot, but the description is too detailed and too intense, and there is too much stacking, which leads to visual fatigue and even drowns the narrative. At the same time, there are also problems such as too little description of the protagonist and too much description of the supporting characters. Although supporting characters need words to enrich their image, they should not be described with a large number of words or even overwhelm the content related to the protagonist. As for the creation of supporting characters, the words that remain in the readers' hearts may often only be one sentence. After dozens of chapters, you can see a big change. The focus has shifted from description to narrative, and the plot advancement speed has become normal. Although there are occasional recurrences of old problems, overall the rhythm is well controlled. In terms of world view, it has not yet been fully developed. At present, there are mainly three parties: humans, elves, and orcs. The map is too small at present. Some things are too perfect and coincidental, a bit blunt. If you read it with your brain, you can find that there are a few bugs in some plots, such as unclear character motivations and far-fetched settings, but this does not affect reading. In terms of plot, the pace is fast, and the plot has both gentle and climax moments. However, if compared with other novels, the narrative is too flat and may lack some "twisting" plots. Of course, Shuangwen may not necessarily require a battle of wits, but the "circuit" does not necessarily stand out in the battle of wits. It can be reflected in the sudden realization when the answer is pieced together with a lot of foreshadowing. For example, if you bury scattered clues about certain history/origins of items/character motivations in the early stage, they may not necessarily be used later, but if you bury them a lot, there will definitely be some that can be used. In short, multiple foreshadowings are connected in series to piece together and lead to an answer, which can also be used as a manifestation of "circulation" in the novel.

It is a rare and relatively good dragon novel. In my opinion, it has no poisonous points and the logic is relatively clear. It does not have the stiffness that other dragon novels have to avoid cheating. Considering its bloodline and setting, it is within the understandable range. I hope the author will work hard.

The dragon text in Qidian is too formulaic and I'm tired of reading it. I came to Tomato to search for books. The writing is very good. It seems that it has been guided by the real dragon. Come on, the author🐉 [Like]

It's pretty good to watch, but the steps are too big, especially in terms of strength. Because this aspect is too prominent, the theme of adventure is very weak. The whole process is more like training. After training, continue to train, and then go to torture chicks. This novel has a world view, but judging from the presentation of the novel, it is very... Narrow. My current impression is that there is a volcano, a black dragon taking a bath or sleeping, a dragon practicing, or torturing chickens, and a human prince... Also practicing. (It seems nothing is wrong [covers face]) My favorite plot in the novel is that at the beginning, the human prince and the plutonium dragon test each other, and there is also the dying memory of an elf legend. One thing to say is that generally speaking, the elves written by the author are really too low. A novel needs some ups and downs, and some emotionally resonant plots. The story in it does not have to be just about the protagonist. The obvious shortcoming of this novel is that the plot is mediocre and a bit boring.

This book is really good. I finished reading more than 80 chapters in about three or four days. This book seems to want both this and that in the early stage. To express it in Chinese, the early stage is "branch: detailed, main line: brief." Question: What thoughts and feelings does the author express by writing this way? Fortunately, the author also listened to the advice and changed it later. Otherwise, the previous reading would be really boring. I would like to recommend this book. Just go through the branch plots in the early stage. Show me the early stage of "Exhaustion", and then you can read it happily. I want to find dragons. Yes, it is highly recommended to read this one (Note: The early and late stages in this review refer to the first half and the second half of the current 80 chapters. The author has not updated it so quickly. Please wait until you finish reading more than 80 chapters to join our glorious army of reminders)

Author, did you know that "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you? Standing at thirty: It is necessary to update thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle No confusion at forty: Only by updating forty chapters every day can we continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are the destiny, and the entire website praises you so much Sixty and fluent: When you can update 60 chapters a day, everyone including readers will hear what you say will be fluent. When you are seventy, do what you want without going beyond the rules: If you can read 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want [laughter][laughter][laughter]

Judging from the writing style, my high school Chinese scores are not low. At the beginning, some parts where the description is more important than the plot seemed lengthy, but in the Kingdom chapter, the feeling became much better. It's a good book, and I look forward to its follow-up development. I have read more than 100 chapters so far, and the writing style is nothing to mention. The traces of higher education are obvious. It is rare to see authors who write books like this on Tomato. Although the intensity of character creation and the setting of the outline are not top-notch, it is difficult to imagine that they are at the level of a novice writer. The most important thing is that the clever language style and just the right description (except for the beginning), the writing style is very to my liking. Looking at the current development of combat power, if it can be completed in about 600,000 to one million words and write a good ending, I think it will be a perfect debut novel; if there is time to reconstruct the opening chapter and use some descriptive words to briefly introduce the world view and setting, it may be better. Come on!

A good book about dragons, with a normal protagonist who is self-disciplined and has above-average intelligence. It is recommended to watch. 100,000 Words mark the boundary

It's a very interesting book, and I've been reading it for several days to see the latest chapter. Poor author, few people read it twice a day [crying]. Author, I feel sorry for you, so you should update it ten times a day [laughing] I hope it won't be unfinished in the future.

Well, the writing is very good, but the author is miserable. Whether it is based on reality or judging from the traffic of this book, some people say that AI has a strong taste. I don't feel this very much. It can also be seen that he is a newcomer. He probably used AI to polish it, but the quality is really high.

Like it very much! The protagonist is very powerful and cautious, with a very high level of character. He is the highest-level existence among the dragons. His interactions with his friends are also very vivid. The narrative has no poisonous points. It is the best dragon book I have ever read.

The writing style of this book is still very good, and it is comfortable to read. However, the battle scenes are a little missing, which is simply not exciting enough for me. Maybe it was the fun of the battles I had seen that influenced me to read this book.

Yes, it's just that there are too many descriptions of battles. You can write more about the protagonist personally, add more emotional descriptions and some interesting things [laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs][laughs].

The current progress is on Chapter 7, which is generally pretty good, but there is one biggest problem. Chapter 2, this section has a strong AI flavor. "Almost the moment he heard this description, the furnace in his body that was always humming and running produced a slight resonance reaction. It was a judgment coming from the depths of instinct—that place was more suitable for him than the swamp." Chapters 2, 3 and 4 were very enjoyable to read, until chapter 5 or 6... There was a strong AI flavor. Especially Chapter 6. But I really like Long Wen so much

It's very comfortable to watch. The attitude towards the family members is not that of slaves but of subordinates. The protagonist has a slight sense of calmness ()

This is a book about Plutonium Dragon, which is capable of utilizing nuclear energy, mainly nuclear fission, and later will have the capability of nuclear fusion. Personally, I thought it was okay. The plot was a little delayed in the early stages. Later, the author realized this problem and began to slowly change it. I don't think there's anything poisonous about it. It's just that the data in this book is not very good, and the author is in graduate school? (I guess) I usually don't have much time to write, and I feel like I can't survive. Please give me a five-star support [send heartfelt]

It's very well written. It's one of the best books I've ever read in Longwen. It's a masterpiece. At present, I give it five stars. The description and narration of the plot are not laggy, except for a short paragraph when the protagonist is sleeping, but it is innocuous. The author quickly corrected it and the plot continues to be regular. It is interesting and recommended.

When I was writing the review, I realized why this book only got 6.5 Points. Shouldn't it? I think it looks fine but a little watery. Recently, the author published a 5-star review with unlimited number of chapters. Is there anyone who can open a small account and try it? I want to read the ending [laughs evilly]

Xilong lovers are ecstatic, they like this style, go for the author, go for little Jeff

Okay, it looks great. Come on, author [laughing]

Beautiful dragon text! I really like the author's narrative style, keep it up!

It's good to watch, the plot doesn't drag on, and the power system has its own ideas.

The writing style is very immature, and it is considered well-written among newcomers. The plot and worldview are also pretty good. I support it with five stars.

It's my first time to come across the concept of Plutonium Dragon, which is very interesting!

It looks pretty good so far. I hope the updates won't be interrupted. Good luck, author [laughter]