Hey, Sis, the Hyper Zetton You're Hunting Is Your Brother

I have already guessed the general story chain, and I can only say that it is quite powerful. Anyone who has written a novel should know how difficult it is to conceive a complete, logically self-consistent, and perfectly closed-loop story, let alone write it👍

The writing is really good, but the main character's combat power as a Hyperjeton is still a bit low, but it does get better and better as we look at it later. The setting of the human body is very interesting, but there are a few bug-level characters in the future who I don't know how to fight as a Hyperjeton, such as Noah, him or Sega? Let's see how the author adds buffs to the protagonist [laughing evilly] By the way, there is also that woman named Su He. She thinks that the protagonist killed her mother. I feel like this plot may be violent if it is not handled well. Just explain this kind of thing casually. For the following plot, don't be like a plot where you turn against the protagonist and then antagonize the protagonist and then fight and reconcile. It feels cliche and cliché. I find it interesting to watch the protagonist go around pretending to dump his body to find a human body to collect interest [sneaky laugh]

The setting of this novel is still good, but I feel that the combat power of this book is still a bit underwhelming. After all, it is all about Hypa Jie. Even if the combat power is high, it is normal. The relationship between the characters is handled well, and there are no obvious poisonous points. I still recommend it. Less heart to avoid author bloat [laughter]

It's a good Jeton fanfic, but there is a slight difference between the introduction and the content. Some of the previous scenes are very classic, I guess it's a bit of a joke. The part about Tian Quan Xing is very well written and uses a lot of templates. The subsequent development can probably be guessed. You can see

Although the old idea of ​​the sister being reborn and being misunderstood is still there, the overall plot is quite enjoyable and I love watching it [laughs]

I read the 117 latest chapters from the first chapter in one go. It's really good. There's nothing poisonous about it. The pig's feet grow very quickly. The description of daily life is also very interesting. I just hope that I can confess my identity to my sister soon. I give five stars to the author. [Send heart] [Send heart] @Don't engage in scientific research and run quickly. Can the author reveal that there is a female protagonist in this book? Is it a single heroine? [Sending Hearts]

It's really good. There are almost no poisonous points in the early stage. At least the first thirty chapters are very smooth. You can arrange a few female protagonists. This kind of novel must not have many female protagonists, and there is no need for links like Shura Field. If it is arranged, it will only be 9.0 Points. In short, it is good to read. Come on.

It's pretty good, well, I haven't seen much, but the characterization is relatively clear. One star was deducted because his brother is a cannibal. Generally speaking, if this kind of novel becomes Hyperjackton, there can be a way to avoid cannibalism, and you can only eat those monsters, but the protagonist does not have mysophobia... Fortunately, it is, but so far, I have only eaten people with hatred, and they are also bad guys, so I can accept it. And the protagonist is really kind to the people around him. Then his sister. This is clearly portrayed, that is, he is a reborn person who only has eyes for his brother, and it doesn't matter whether others live or die. Complete egoism or only seeing interests. Unlike his brother, who is kind to the people around him. In terms of overall evaluation, I think this character's personality is not as good as that of his brother who cannibalize people in a physical sense. (Ps: I input it by voice. I don't know why, so I just call the protagonist his brother, and call the protagonist's sister his sister... We don't know from whose point of view this is called [face-covering]. All the protagonists in the first half were actually changed by me later [face-covering]) To add, when I read this book, I didn't know it later, but don't try to bring in the Chinese perspective in the early stage. Just think of it as a story that takes place in the United States, and the characters in the book are a group of Chinese-speaking Americans. Otherwise, it may be very uncomfortable on a moral level. The orphans of martyrs will suffer from this and that all day long. [Cover face] I really want to complain. The character is indeed very three-dimensional, but the protagonist is shaped in a good and humane way, making people like it. As for his sister, she is completely the opposite, inhumane, and portrayed in a negative light, making people dislike her, but she has to admit that the character is very three-dimensional. It will look a little messy later on, but it won't have much impact. And to make a complaint, the author is named Fei [laughs] The naming of the forms after the legendary Hyperjetton... Seems to be a reference to Luo Feng, but they start from the planet level [laughs] I sent the legendary Haipageton back to Novice Village to practice again [laughs] What if he starts from immortality? Or what about those beginnings a level or two below immortality? [Laughs] Isn't there such a thing as being immortal and being granted a title like a prince or a king? Why doesn't this sound better than a Stardust-level first-order that has been magically modified from the planet-level [face covering] He is not even that star, he is even a dust of dust, and our legendary Sea Pageton has been completely immersed in the mortal world [face covering]

Although there are some shadows of other books in this novel, the author's writing is indeed good, the characters are okay, and the plot is a bit bloody, but after all, this is a tomato, it can be eaten, and Hyperjetton is included, and the ultimate life aspect [laughs]

According to this book, there is too much pull between brother and sister, and the younger sister has a plan for her older brother. The sister-in-law's mother refuses to save him, and says that his younger sister is a reborn person. ( ⩌ - ⩌ )