Younger Sister*********

The writing is good and there is not a lot of nonsense. I once saw a person who wrote 6,000 words in the last class. It was at least better than him. That's a long way to go. This kind of training system is very good, the language is very interesting, the content is very rich, and it also leaves a lot of foreshadowing for the following chapters. The main point is that Gu Ke is very good, very, very good. I hope the author will be careful. If it disappears one day, you can mention the trumpet. Where are you and where am I?

In the early stages, it was a bit of a run-of-the-mill story, similar to the early days of Boruto. The plot and writing can only be rated a 6 or 7, but as you continue reading, the pace gradually becomes tighter, and the writing becomes more and more skillful. It even has a lot of flavor of Iruma's "Sister Life", which is a bit more relaxed than the old thief Iruma described. I feel that the author should have made reference to "Sister Life". As a brother-sister novel, it deserves five stars. However, I don't want the author's relationship to end immediately. I remember that Iruma was planning to describe in detail all the "sufferings" after we got together, but the editor stopped him, saying that it would be too dark, heavy and sad. But for people like me, this is not the case at all. The feedback from society and the twisted struggle of the protagonist are simply the best seasoning for "love", very sweet. Xuanxuan is really the best sister in the world [crying]. I have watched hundreds of sister movies. How come I have such a sister [crying]

Slow-heating type, maybe I'll comment on it later. It's pretty good so far, a little boring, and each article isn't long, but the writing style is okay, and it feels a bit like a light novel. Come on author, I hope I can give it five stars next time I come here Back, good reviews

It's a very good book. The details of the characters are handled very delicately and the emotions are very good. After reading it, I almost wrote a book by myself (sister control), but after thinking about it, I decided to forget it. After all, I really have a sister. If she is found out, she will die [laughing]

The first few chapters are for the transition to the blocked content, and the pace is fast, but then it resumes. The dialogue between the brother and sister is humorous and full of support in advance.

It is well written. This book is equivalent to the expanded version of "Sister's Copy" by Sakura Tree under the Moon. The original work is not long and lacks daily plots. This book just makes up for this.

To be honest, this really touched my heart. The writing is fluent, there are no omissions in the logic, and the rhythm is well controlled. The plot can completely surpass a large part of the formulaic articles on Tomato. I just don't know why the traffic is super low. Big boost for the author, stop being so short and weak that it has no battery life [Love]

I finished reading it intermittently. To be honest, the writing was pretty good since I was in junior high school. The rest of it was a bit rushed due to time constraints. But the ending is obviously a bit idealistic, but I like it, it's a happy ending, no knives needed.

The writing is very good, but the early story is a bit too immature. My patience has been very low recently, so I skipped the whole thing. Let's just talk about the last dozen or so chapters. The writing is very good, there are no excessive piles of adjectives, but the atmosphere, environment, and action are well written.

Come on, big brother who writes books! ! ! !

The descriptions are real and logical, the relationships between the characters are clear, and the psychological descriptions are delicate and clear. It's a good-looking batch (I won't talk about it anymore, I will continue reading, in short, five-star praise)

The age difference is very new, and the life between brother and sister is described in detail. The details of the relationship may not be obvious, but you can see that the author is paying attention.

The story is very good, it has the color of real and peaceful life, and also has the happy ending plot that is normal in novels. It is a good leisure novel.

The emotions are written very delicately, the characters are well controlled, and the overall writing is very realistic.

Hmm, I don't understand the name, but this book is good

It's pretty good, but it's a pity for Lin Wei. All good books have to have a loser. I didn't read the rest of it. I only saw that the male protagonist said he broke up with her. It was quite uncomfortable to read. What's uncomfortable is that I didn't expect to have a girlfriend when I first had a sister, but then I became so irresponsible after seeing Lin Wei. I would rather have it be a daily life with my sister from the beginning, and not write about other girls' emotions towards the male protagonist.

Full marks, but it's a pity that we have to wait a long time for the ending [crying] Currently, Tomato ranks second among all the German writers (mainly not finished yet [crying])

Give me some support, it looks good

Long live my sister, long live my sister

Well written Come on, author

The best brother-sister story

The author looks so familiar. Oh, it turns out that the skin has been changed. The previous one was a pity. I remember that the data was really good. It's a pity.

Flaws are not covered, overall it is okay. There will occasionally be some small mistakes in the following text, but the problem is not big. The biggest problem is that there are too few updates, more more more more more

The writing is really good. The author will update it soon [shy][shy][shy]

I can read such a beautiful novel before the start of school. I have no regrets [crying]. It's very to my liking, just like a teenager's thoughts.

The first echelon of the same type (although there are not many books in total). The writing has its own characteristics. The brother and sister have a warm daily life. The German characteristics and the age difference bring a touch of sadness. The author updates diligently.

It's nice to watch, but the pace is so slow. It would be better if it could be sped up a bit.

When did you live?

Come on! Oh Ni-chan!

Very well written, keep it up