I Was So Mad I Transmigrated to the Tang Dynasty and Became a Cross-Dressing Icon

My writing skills are okay, but the title of the book is holding me back [laughs awkwardly] There is no need for Shuangwen, pretending to be surnamed Linlang, have you read it? The plot is more important, write it in your own style, Come on, author,

It's pretty good-looking, with a clear rhythm. But I want to watch the recovery of the Central Plains. In the middle period, the protagonist goes directly to the grassland, and the plot line develops in the grassland. The most important thing is that I don't quite understand the relationship between Yang Zhao and Ye Hu. In the middle period, the plot of the grassland was written, but the protagonist later ran to the Central Plains, and the grassland line ended in one sentence in the finale. Then Ye Hu should know that the protagonist is a man, and Ye Hu has not explained his feelings for Yang Ping. Aren't you going to make a side story?

After reading it for a while, I feel that it is quite good, but it may not be suitable for Tomato 🤦 After all, Tomato Xiaobai has a larger audience, and the writing is too serious. The author can consider publishing on multiple platforms to see which platforms are more suitable for this style of writing. It is very uncomfortable when a good book is not popular.

The writing style is okay, and so is the characterization. I just don't know whether the author has revised it or not written an outline. There is obviously a big problem with the plot logic in the middle and later stages. The plot is incoherent and the plot is unreasonable, which makes it very fragmented when watching. However, the atmosphere in the final climax of the book is indeed quite good.

There is a slight feeling that it is actually quite comfortable to read. Some parts are indeed a bit hard to understand. Although I was attracted by the title of the book, the content is different from what I imagined. It is still good to read.

It's a pity that there is no follow-up with Prince Yehu. I was attracted by the title of the book. Although the protagonist is dressed as a woman, he always follows the main line without unnecessary plots and the logic is rigorous.

The idea is interesting, but you need to study it carefully and refer to more authoritative historical materials. It is said that in ancient times, an unmarried woman would not call herself a concubine.

Don't be difficult to agree with. If you are difficult to agree with, you can only give up [awkward laugh]

Personally, I think the writing is quite good, but I would recommend changing the title.

It's okay, I'd like to encourage you. Maybe the historical research is not done well. Those who are interested in the Anshi Rebellion should read on. 🤣