Collapse of Iron, as Gorgeous as Peach Blossoms Blooming

It's okay, it's pretty good. Author, author, let me give you a suggestion. Make a super sword in the later stage, similar to Taoyao's fake death. However, real players and the characters in the game during this period will think that Taoyao is dead and fall into sadness and sadness. Real players can't accept Taoyao's death, and collectively criticized MiHoYo. It doesn't matter whether you listen or not. I'm looking forward to this plot.

Please give me a five-star review and I will read the comments section often to learn from it! Please!

Highly recommended for novice authors, both the plot and the writing are excellent. If you want to take advantage of the battle, you will have a good time watching it. In order to get rid of the knife, Taoyao first cut herself and went through the background designed for herself. I really like this design. However, it has always been difficult to write self-made novels. How to ensure that the self-made characters are highly popular without overly stealing the star's limelight. Not only does this book have a problem with this, but most self-made novels have this problem. So far, I have only read the first part. Taoyao's presence is a bit too high. Two consecutive chapters have a problem. The second time is to fight the boss before the protagonist, and to know the truth before the protagonist. For example, Taoyao enters the world to kill monsters before the protagonist. When the protagonist enters the dungeon and finds that all the monsters have been killed, it will be difficult. If the protagonist fights the boss, Taoyao comes to support regardless of his injuries, which will be much more reasonable. If it were not a self-written story, there would be no problem at all. A lonely hunter is always used to solving problems on his own and is not used to relying on his companions. However, if it were a self-written story, it would feel a bit awkward because he always unconsciously assumes the player's perspective. However, the flaws are not concealed, and it still does not affect my enjoyment of watching the battle damage.

I love reading it. It's called Tao Yao [what]. Is that Fei Ying's book also yours? [What]

This is the only novel I can read. It's a novel where a character from Beng Tie is created and a new character is created. It's really interesting and powerful. I like it very much. Like [Like]

It feels good. I feel a sense of accomplishment when I see the number of book friends increase. ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧When did the author have Tao Yao open up March 7 [what], and the author did it around chapter 80 and beat Cheng Tianlu, and I feel that the protagonist is still a little irrational in some places, such as the protagonist leaving the team to fight Xuanlu, and returning to the train after fighting the Phantom Long. The above are purely my own thoughts💡, I made a mistake🐴, thank you. Finally, the author has worked very hard. I want to see Taoyao bloom on March 7th. I want to see Taoyao bloom on March 7th. I want to see Taoyao bloom on March 7th. The best lily, a happy marriage for hundreds of years, and the birth of a baby soon (Ms. Ruan Mei can do me a favor) (★≧▽^))★☆

Damn, I have an idea about it. I thought about it when I read more than 40 chapters. I can make some comments on what has been revealed now. A rich life path can be added to the story in the future. I understand the protagonist's hatred of abundance, but this would be more dramatic and allow the audience to experience the protagonist's feelings more deeply. The background story does not always mention the largest cherry blossom tree on the planet where the main character Sakura lives. It is actually a miracle of fertility, but this miracle has not been activated yet and only has a little life-extending effect. This can also be said that why the Fengrao people came here was because they discovered this miracle and robbed it. During the final battle, Miracle of Abundance chose the protagonist but did not fully activate it. In the subsequent story, the protagonist learns about the existence of the Miracle of Fertility, and a series of stories take place, such as reconciling with himself in the process of defeating the Army of Extermination, but not affecting his dislike of the evil creature of Fertility. Of course, the above is my personal opinion If it doesn't work, forget it or the schedule is too late and I'll be late.

Looks good, don't mention the name. I also had a good chat with Xiao Sanyue. It must be Lily [shy][shy]

When I read Tao's story, I suddenly had a lot of feelings. I wrote a short poem and hummed it while I was on the road. I haven't finished the poem yet, so I will post a paragraph here for everyone to read, so you can comment and give me some advice👁️👅👁️ smell When I was a child, I had a dream of hope and heaven and earth Sigh and go far away to drink in the sky But that fairy is short and lonely Crazy people want to be drunk

Beautifully written. But if it's from a player's perspective, try not to overly steal the limelight from other characters. This feels more reasonable. Anyway, keep going.

It looks good, and it doesn't look too sharp at all [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The author's writing is very beautiful, and the plot is very immersive. As a new author, this is not easy. I highly recommend it.

It's great. I love watching it. I think you need some financial support.

I feel it's better to have more than one person posting. Because of jealousy on March 7th, you know how the author of Changyue Top Account was designed.

I admit that Master Susu's novels are unparalleled in the world.

I think we can add an Otto to this

It's beautiful, I don't know what to say [smile]

Overall good, but the pace feels a bit slow

Not bad, very pretty

Come on, the author is great [laughing][laughing]

If I give it five stars now, I will be considered an old fan in the future.

Not bad, keep up the good work

Hit or not? Medium, medium, medium! Very nice

Overall it's okay

Yeah, it's pretty good. Recommended 😝

I didn't expect there was a second level

Super invincible and beautiful

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

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Wonderful content, very interesting