A Fragrant Deer Cauldron

The plot concept is very clever, the girl is picked up without any ink, the description of the female mentality is very good, and there are many foreshadowings [Like] A harem group portrait? The portrayal of the woman is pretty good, and the storyline is interesting. It has almost nothing to do with the original work.

I think the writing is good. At least the writing style is good. I love reading it, but the popularity is too little.

Anyway, I feel pretty good, keep up the good work👏 This is what I thought about the creation of the protagonist. Before time travel, he was a frustrated ordinary person. When he time travels into the book, he is afraid of the environment, is arrogant towards paper people, and is also arrogant about getting a golden finger. His opponents were not only the famous generals, emperors and politicians who were all-powerful in that era, but also the feudal ethics system. The greater his ability, the greater he wants to do!

Well written, great imagination

It's very well written and very thoughtful, but I don't know why no one reads it👀

It's pretty, I think

The male protagonist eats well and deliciously

The writing style is smooth, the structure is compact, the characters are full-bodied, and there are no typos throughout.

The plot is ups and downs and the characters are relatively three-dimensional. The writing in Tomato is very good. Go beyond the framework of The Deer and the Cauldron and write your own world

So proud, I love it so much