Xihuan: Damn, They Really Treat Me as One of Their Own.

It's very good. The author's writing style is not like a newbie, but more like a veteran. He also explains some things that most people find uncomfortable. He cares about the readers' opinions. Good review [like]

I haven't seen any emotional scenes so far. The male protagonist is cautious in everything, as if there is an assassin in the air staring at him, holding on tight. I hope there will be some real emotional scenes later on, and don't cause trouble by pretending. I jumped in and watched it when I was anxious. It was a bit of a show, with extremely low emotional content. There was basically no favorability or emotional advancement. It was purely a slow-paced combat and anti-stress story. This has nothing to do with being slow to warm up. You almost didn't write about emotional scenes in the first two hundred chapters. I don't believe that you can really turn to writing about relationships and Shura fields later on. It's a pity that this subject matter

As a senior Western fantasy fan, I really love this book! I finally found a Western fantasy novel with a very complete worldview and online logic. The author is really attentive! From the division of the continent, the characteristics and bonds of each race, to the levels of the magic system, the settings of the rune formations, to the rules and culture of different city-states, every detail is drawn with great detail, without any perfunctory loopholes. There is no sense of "drama" when watching it, as if you are really in this fantasy-filled continent. The protagonist's growth line is even more exciting. He is not Long Aotian who cheats right from the beginning, but starts from an inconspicuous little apprentice. Relying on his own efforts, wisdom and a little bit of luck, he gradually unlocks magic skills, makes friends, and breaks through difficulties. Every advancement and victory is exciting to watch. Moreover, the author's portrayal of different races really impressed me. The cold and aloof but affectionate Dingdong Chicken, the upright and bold forging of the big barking dog, the tenacity and diversity of the tank horse, and the settings of various fantasy creatures are all vivid and in line with the essence of Western fantasy. The interactions and bonds between the races are also written in a very layered way. The scenes of the magic showdown are even more graphic. The combination of spells, formations, and moves is not confusing at all. You can clearly feel the game between the two sides, and you can't help but imagine the scene while watching it. In addition, the plot is not just about upgrading and fighting monsters, but also about the disputes between races, the machinations of city-states, and the companionship of partners. There is blood, warmth, and twists. The more you watch, the more you get excited! I have added this book to my TOP3 list of Western fantasy books. I highly recommend it to all those who like Western fantasy. This book can satisfy all your expectations for the Western fantasy world! AI articles can barely be read

It's okay, nothing explosive or poisonous, overall it's okay. Although I was attracted by the cover picture [laughing evilly]

I have been reading it. The author's writing is very detailed. He describes the daily interactions with the maids and the details of college life well. The pace is slow and warm. It is a bit slow to read in the tomato-shuang environment. I don't know how many chapters it will take to get to the main plot of the saint girl's admission. I was attracted by the title and introduction. I am looking forward to the popular Shura field and the protagonist's reversal in the college style [Blow kiss]

It's awesome, the plot is smooth and the characters are well-detailed, especially the little maid. It's great to have a little maid timidly say "Welcome home Master" after you come home from a busy day. When will you be able to eat the little maid? [Laughs]

AI article, but the author used it very well, it doesn't look so awkward, and the plot ideas are also very good. If you don't like AI, you can avoid it.

Four stars gives it a promising future. The overall rhythm is quite good. The protagonist also has his own path and goals, but he is too passive. The current situation in the latest chapter is that the protagonist's behavior is completely controlled by the second princess. The reason for deducting one star is explained below. From the introduction, the protagonist must be controlled by the important figure of the second princess. One of the future heroines is being targeted, and this second princess is not the kind of character that the protagonist can suppress, so the situation is very clear. The protagonist is unable to retaliate for the troubles caused by the princess overtly and covertly in the past. There will probably be plots in the future where he is willing to help the princess seize power. All in all, it is a humiliation. In that case, I will abandon the book directly. After reading too many plots of similar novels, I can hallucinate the future plot. I can only say that I hope the protagonist will not be like this.

The main plot is very comfortable, the story development is reasonable, and the logic is perfect. The biggest feature of this book for me is: sometimes the title and content are separated [face-covering] [face-covering] and appear very contrasting [face-covering] Content: Oh oh oh! A tense and exciting court hearing session! So tense! ! The protagonist is so calm! Me: ┐(ﾟдﾟ┐) Title: "What are you in a hurry for?" Me: ⊙⊙

Perfect description of food, the author is an old foodie [Love]

The first volume is almost finished. I feel that the author is very thoughtful and the characters are really three-dimensional. The little maid slowly realizes her love for her master and finally makes up her mind. Both the princess and the protagonist regard each other as a tool and use each other. Although they start to show strength, they also have their own fragility. Weak; Miss Elf has not seen it yet and feels that her feelings towards the protagonist are very complicated. Although she wants the secret treasure of the elf, she still chooses the life of the protagonist at the critical moment; the sword girl is very strong and regards the protagonist as her old enemy. I am looking forward to how her feelings for the protagonist will turn into dependence and love. The overall pace is really slow, and there aren't many emotional scenes in the first volume, but the protagonist becomes stronger step by step, and explores the secrets of the world that he doesn't know. It's really comfortable to read. If you continue writing at this pace, it feels like it should become a big book with more than 1,000 chapters. I will give this 5 stars and support the author. I hope the author will not give up. (Also, this may be my personal misunderstanding. I always feel that the protagonist is so lonely. I hope the author can make the protagonist feel more love. Damn it)

Five-star praise, a perfect western fantasy novel. I would like to ask the author if Wang Daughter is the heroine? , If the princess were the heroine, she would really have to be tortured [face covering]. (There is no problem with the portrayal of the princess, and the author's portrayal is very successful, but this kind of shrewd politician is not likable in itself. It is better to say that it is because of the author's good portrayal that it is controversial. However, the princess plotted against the protagonist at the beginning and treated the protagonist as a tool. It cannot be written off. There cannot be no punishment just because she has difficulties and looks good.) Is there a plot to torture the princess later? @ (Just asking, no other meaning [almost crying])

I caught up with the latest chapter and expressed my own feelings and opinions: The author's positioning of this book is actually quite contradictory, that is, it is a unique masterpiece, a Western fantasy novel with an extremely delicate slow pace in a huge background. Let me talk about the advantages first: ① The logic is very clear and organized, everything the author creates is interlocking, and there is a lot of foreshadowing. ② Different from the brainless novels written by novices, every character in the novel has flesh and blood, and the control of the characters and plots is very three-dimensional and objective, rather than the so-called classics where the heroine and the supporting actress nod and bow to the hero as soon as they appear. ③The story line is very large, and it is not the kind of enthusiasm that comes from a flash of inspiration. Reading the whole text, it can be seen that the author has really put in a lot of effort, whether it is the delicacy of the characters' emotions or the polishing of the logic of the events, and he does not see the impatience and brainlessness, contradictions in the characters before and after, and logical conflicts in many novels. It can be said that this is quite rare. ④ And it is different from traditional time-travel system novels. In vernacular terms, the system in this book can be said to have greatly reduced its own sense of existence and highlighted the protagonist's own abilities and charm. The system only provides a probability and possibility. Well... This is quite well written. At least the focus of the writing is on the character itself, rather than various explanations of how the system functions come from, how to possess the protagonist, and then a lot of hydrology and the like. Of course, there are also some obvious shortcomings: ① Although the plot at the beginning to remind others that there are bugs in the food is used to start the golden finger, it feels a bit abrupt (it feels a bit "ooc"). This small point may be my own problem, I will mention it briefly ② The traces of AI are obvious, although it is understandable, after all, the author has refined it, but I still suspect it is a bit hydrological ( ③Although the author said it is slow-paced, some plots are indeed too lengthy for the sake of foreshadowing and plot supplements, which is very uncomfortable for many readers who are used to fast-paced and cool novels. For example, the author's occasional supplements in the creation of the royal woman's character and the elf ruins are enough to make many readers impatient and give a lot of low ratings (this is why I said earlier that although this book is exquisitely written, it is not gregarious) ④ In conclusion, this novel is worth reading, but only if you can adapt to the slow pace of the author's narration, and first remove the "sequelae" left by the mindless novels you have read before, and bring it into the current background from the perspective of each character created by the author to accept and understand the feelings. Then you will feel that this is a pretty good online article. The above is my feeling after reading the latest chapter. I hope it will be helpful to everyone who reads it [Blow kiss]

Yes, the character creation is okay, the plot is quite satisfactory, with occasional highlights, which is not bad. Although the protagonist's external personality is a bit aloof, it is mixed with a bit of humanity, making it unexpectedly likable. As for the major female characters currently on the stage, they have distinctive personalities but are a bit cliche. If I have to say it, the little maid is okay, and the others are quite satisfactory. On the contrary, I prefer the happy enemies of the lady and the knight. Overall, the reading experience is very smooth, but there are not enough explosive points, so the reading experience may be average. I feel that the experience will be better if I read it in one go. Overall it's pretty good, good luck to the author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] I have finished reading the big chapter of the Elf Ruins, and the battle was handled well. Although there is nothing particularly attractive, it is smooth and smooth, and it further improves the story content. The content of the knight and the eldest lady is a bit too hard. I feel that it is better not to design the knight as a muscular idiot, especially the part where he mistakenly admits the eldest lady. It's better to have a rough and medium shape, but then I found that the author's writing style is getting more and more old-school, and he likes to use a long list of words to describe one thing. Although it can indeed strengthen the story, it's a bit tiring to read too much. But everything else is fine, especially the addition of the new dragon system, which gives the male protagonist a new direction to work towards. I still hope that the author can write better and better

It looks good and has the unique flavor of a Western fantasy, but there are a few issues and it only represents my personal opinion. First of all, there are a lot of useless words used in the text. I suspect that the author has been polishing it with AI or most of it is generated by AI. Then there is the inexplicable Riddler, which has a great sense of fragmentation. It seems that the two people did not write it by the same person. The other is that it is not divided into paragraphs. One paragraph can't wait to write five or six hundred words. Secondly, the plot is dragging and grinding, and the interest that was finally aroused at the beginning is completely exhausted. The only thing worthy of praise is that the characters are well-rounded and keep people motivated to watch. For example, the supporting roles of the eldest lady and the knight are quite good, and the jealous witch and the princess are just average. To sum it up, it's okay. If you like the taste of Western fantasy, you can give it a try.

Chapter 175, here comes the supplementary review. It's a typical Western fantasy novel with multiple female protagonists. It feels like the author wanted to write a dungeon-driven plot. As a result, it was almost 200 chapters before the first big dungeon (the campus is considered a small dungeon). Generally speaking, it's what the author wanted to do. There is nothing wrong with writing the characters he wants to write well. What is sacrificed is the smoothness of the plot. There is no way, it is slow and painful, but it allows you to remember some characters. How can I put it, it is equivalent to screening readers [face covering], come on.

It's okay and readable, but the male protagonist only has one behavior that doesn't fit the survival concept in the book's title. He doesn't want to quit even in an event with a 50% death probability. Survival is just luck. And the princess is awesome, but she looks disgusting. I hope I can tease her later [pouts]

It's a very good novel, with surprisingly realistic content. Most of the minor characters are simple, and the evil ones are evil and the good ones are good. The characters related to the main plot are thoughtful and elusive, but the author basically explains it at the end of the article. The impression is pretty good. If you are here to read the sweet harem of another world, then this book may disappoint you. As of Chapter 170, apart from the sweetness with the little maid and the slow daily life, the main plot is very profound and may be a bit boring. But it's not a big problem.

Very comfortable to watch. The pacing is well controlled, the plot is smooth and well-organized, and the characters and plots are handled well (especially the confrontation between the protagonist and the princess). I especially like the author's descriptions outside of the plot. A series of descriptions such as environmental actions not only enriched the characters, but also allowed me to take a break from the plot. It was really good to write the scenes where the protagonist eats potatoes and returns to the dormitory on a rainy day. Instead of always promoting the plot and depicting characters in a direct way, it is appropriate to depict the characters in a dissociated way. The author's intentions can be felt in every aspect. Come on!

After reading the first chapter, to be honest, this is definitely a book worth reading so far. The character's IQ is online and his behavior is reasonable. The author has also explained many times why the character in the plot does what he does and what he is thinking about. This can also help people better understand the psychology of the characters in the plot. Now this 7. Plus score is definitely still low on Tomato. I think it is still acceptable at 9 points. [Like] [Like] If you are interested in Western fantasy, you might as well give it a look. It is definitely worth it to store it on the bookshelf for a while and read it again.

I have read more than 300 chapters, and after reading the comments, some people commented very highly, and some people questioned the author's use of AI which is too obvious. However, in such a platform, it is very rare to write with love without charging any fees. I don't read many books [exploration], some give up after reading a few hundred chapters, and some don't even bother to read [note], but I am still serious or mindless. Look, I think this book is very good and worth reading [like]. Each character is vividly portrayed. Although it is a bit too pursuit of a specific image of the character, I still like it very much. I hope the author will continue to create in the future life and don't give up this book just because the outside world negates you. No one is perfect and everyone has their own standards of judgment. I hope everyone will be more tolerant of the author. Finally, I wish the author a happy life and hope that book friends will support me a lot.

Each platform has its own standards. This book is a top-notch Western fantasy novel on Tomato. It's so rare. At least it doesn't have the power to collapse, misuse of Liu Ruyan, mislabeling of realms, overly strong AI flavor, (I don't know if AI is used, but the logic of the whole book is correct) and so on. But now I have seen the end of the second quarter, and the third quarter is not finished, I feel Now, I feel that the person I have seen who has gone the furthest in love at this stage is the princess, who has fucked the Supreme Bone twice, but the protagonist doesn't know, can this follow-up be written sweeter?

The writing style is comfortable and has a strong Japanese light flavor. The previous plot is relatively formulaic, but the character creation is very unique and cute, and the combination of daily life and combat is very comfortable. Overall, it is a novel that I have rarely read in Tomato that is comfortable to read and has the style of a light novel.

My evaluation of this book is that it is very beautiful, and it is a book that was delayed by the ratings. As a Western fantasy book, it has a system, but its impact on the protagonist's strength is not great. The characters' IQs are online throughout the whole process. There is no so-called brainless plot. The plot logic is reasonable. It made my already rusty brain spin. It is a book that needs to be read carefully. It is rated as a good book and I sincerely recommend everyone to read it.

I saw this place in one breath, and before I knew it, I was almost catching up with the large army. The overall writing is smooth and steady, and the structure can be seen to be slowly improving. The style is lighter and softer. I like it very much. I also like the arrangement and description of the battles and the protagonist's ability to withstand stress. In fact, I quite like the male protagonist. Among the several female characters, I personally have a very good impression of the princess. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot in which the male protagonist and the princess struggle to escape from control. I also held my breath while watching this part. In terms of plot, the part where the princess recruits the male protagonist to appear in the garden, and the part where the male protagonist fights back and finally signs an alliance, is a little bit jerky. The protagonist's trump card is not very good at that time, but overall it is very good. The mysterious clip of the princess having a drink on her celebration night is also a highlight, it's very sudden ()

I have already watched 60 episodes. The plot is a bit slow but very comfortable and has no poisonous points. There is a golden finger but it does not appear frequently. It is basically the growth of the protagonist. The rhythm is a bit like what I like to watch: the survival of a third-rate villain in the academy (note that I am talking about the rhythm).

It can be seen that the author has considered the direction of the plot. The content is quite good. I don't really care about the writing style. It's not bad anyway. As long as the plot is interesting, it's good. A little thought, maybe what the author wants to say can be put not in the main text but in the discussion area at the end of the article? It feels a bit awkward to follow a long paragraph after the main text. Usually when reading Riqing, I will separate a separate part as a postscript (but I don't know if there is a word limit for the comment area) In addition, although the author probably wouldn't write it like this, from a personal point of view, it really looks like the plot of Lillian turning into a witch instantly after Rex dies, and it feels very impactful ()

The story🖊 is okay, the male protagonist has a good personality, and the outline and writing are good, but no one reads [face covering] There is a bit of poison in the back, and the villain forcefully subdues his wits. I don't understand. It's not better to attack the protagonist directly than to frame him.

The plot logic is smooth. End of chapter section. Equipped with plot analysis, you can have a clearer understanding of the entire story. There are some nice daily segments. It has a nice slow pace to some of the peak sections. Like it

I haven't finished reading it for a long time, but I think it is a really great book. The protagonist is also the kind of character I like very much. He is not the kind who can't take his eyes away when he sees a woman. I particularly prefer this type of protagonist. He is cold on the outside but hot on the inside, calm, intelligent, and the most important thing is not lewd. But unfortunately, this type of character may not be very likable. I rarely see similar protagonists, so this book is quite rare for me. It's a pretty good book, with clear logic, complete story line, and sufficient characterization of each character.