Honkai: Star Rail: My Starting Luofu Cheat Is a Dual Cultivation Manual

The attraction of the exercises is so great that many people describe the attraction of the exercises [face covering]

It's good, but it's too close to the Galaxy Hunter. Although the protagonist will definitely not lose if Healing Liuying has an extra harem, the Galaxy Hunter should also show some expression. After all, the relationship is not that good yet. We can optimize it later and give him something, as long as it makes sense. How about we marginalize Silver Wolf? He is a genius no matter what. Would anyone really ask others to treat themselves and still threaten them? Shouldn't the character be a tsundere? Why do I only see arrogance?

It has the unique seriousness and meticulousness of a female author. There are very few typos, incorrect sentences, and misuse of vocabulary, almost none. It seems that the manuscript was carefully reviewed. This is more than 80% of works written by male authors. The plot is also based on the female author's unique love affair, supplemented by the main plot. But it's well written and doesn't look boring. The descriptions of characters and details are also very delicate. The problem is that it lacks the wantonness and publicity of novels written by male authors. There is something missing in the characters and personalities of the protagonist and heroine, they are too ideal. As a result, after the guide is completed, the reader's experience is not so satisfying. Overall good. For those who listen to books, there is a question that must be raised. There are too many inexplicable breaks in the characters' dialogue. I don't think it's anything at all when I first listen to it, but after listening to it too much, I'll get tired of it and feel physiologically annoyed. I suggest that the author avoid unnecessary sentence breaks in character dialogue.

Very, very, very beautiful. The author will update it quickly.

Do you practice in advance for writing Liu Beiwen?

The writing was okay, but the plot wasn't that great either. The main reason was that I was stabbed too much and it made me feel good. I felt pretty good wherever I saw it.

Apart from the fact that the main character is a bit weak, there are no big problems. It's a pretty good harem story.

[Laughing and crying] After a month of raising it, I found that three chapters had been updated. I took a closer look and realized, my dear, the author, you won't update during the Chinese New Year [face covering]

@ The author has liked 👍

Please update, it is indeed novel among Bengtie fans.