The Sweet Peach Blossom Spirit Has Caught the Eye of Two Powerful Men

It's good to watch, and now we see the heroine joining the army. There is no Madonna plot at the moment. The female protagonist is innocent, and the male protagonist will protect her. For example, if someone says something bad, he will immediately punish her with supernatural powers, and the female protagonist does not need to be praised. However, I hope that the original heroine won't have too many scenes, and I just want to watch the protagonist fall in love. It would be great if we could return to the world of cultivation together in the end~ It's early to comment. In the original book, the female protagonist, male protagonist, and the child are not good people. I don't care if I write a control group, but I can't do it because the female protagonist knows that the child is bad and still thinks that the child is innocent and uses her spiritual power to save people in public. Moreover, I am annoyed by the remarks that he is just a child. The original male protagonist's eldest son is really bad, but the female protagonist actually thinks that he is just insecure. The author said that it will be changed later, hoping to stay away from the original protagonist's family. Because the author was very diligent in updating and changing the rating back.

This is the author's second book. The settings of the male and female protagonists are pretty good, and the original male and female protagonists' family setting is quite innovative. The shortcoming is that the heroine clearly knows that she is different, but the heroine always has no awareness of protecting herself. This setting is unacceptable. Moreover, the hero always says that he will protect the heroine's secrets from being discovered, but he does not remind the heroine how to protect her own secrets. This setting also has a big problem. (Generally speaking, the shortcomings of both books are that there are many chapters that clearly expose the peculiarities of the heroine. Personally, I feel that some things are not just because I am strong enough, and what should be kept secret should be kept secret, but not because I have enough ability to protect you. You can express yourself even if you reveal your secret. PS, a personal thought)

How to say it? I don't understand either. Anyway, it's a bit weird to see this. Tao Zhizhi quickly glanced at the text that appeared in the sea of ​​consciousness: [In order to retaliate against Ye Xing, Wan Hai sprinkled a little vegetable oil on the stairs, hoping to make him slip and make a fool of himself. Unexpectedly, Ye Xing was cautious and failed to fall into the trap. Wan Hu chased him playfully and stepped on an oil stain. His center of gravity was unstable and he fell down the stairs. The back of his head hit the edge of the cement step and he suffered intracranial bleeding. Due to the remote location, treatment was not available. Although his life was saved, his intelligence was permanently damaged and remained at the level of a six-year-old. When Wan Huai returned home and learned the truth, he was heartbroken and severely punished Wan Hai. The estrangement between father and son gradually deepened. In this incident, Ye Xing showed "regardlessness" and "careful care", winning more trust and reliance from Wan Huai. ] The text coldly reveals the cause and effect, and also foreshadows the tragic ending if no intervention is done. Tao Zhizhi's heart suddenly clenched. Even though Wan Hai was at fault, he was still a child after all, and his extreme thoughts stemmed from his uneasiness about losing his father and his rejection of Ye Xing. And Wan Hu is even more innocent! Watching a lively child turn into a fool? She can't do it. Well, I feel like he can't just whitewash the mistakes he did just because he was a child. What he did was already very bad. If someone slipped, the consequences would be serious. After all, it was a staircase.

The article on this subject is within the scope of my preferences. The content is very light and fresh, not so dull and depressing. I hope the author will continue to maintain this sense of atmosphere, come on! [Top post][Please update]

Both the male and female protagonists are super good. The male protagonist will take the initiative to solve the bad love affairs without the female protagonist having to worry about it. The female protagonist will also immediately detect the male protagonist's emotions and comfort him. It is really super easy to beat and full of warmth.

It's so sweet. The male and female protagonists have complementary personalities. There is no misunderstanding. They are completely committed to each other. The most ideal love. It's so sweet. I like it so much. Please give me more.

The writing is smooth and delicate, and the main plot is fascinating. I like the male and female protagonists.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I have been following it for a long time. There is no preface or postscript, no holes, the story is fascinating, and the writing is also very good. It is a good article.

The story written by the author is wonderful. Both the male and female protagonists are very likable.